Ark Reincarnation: Feixiao

Very good, very good, but as for segmentation, I feel that quite a few people will be persuaded by your segmentation. I wonder if the Eclipse Heart Beast will come out later (it should be called this name. I didn't do the Immortal Boat Performing Martial Arts Ceremony, so I still call it Feihuang)

I support it, but what about segmentation?

The tone, expression, and eyes are too simple to describe, and the only word used is firm 🤦

The author writes very well, please give it five stars. I hope the author can read my message and my suggestions.

There are still too few paragraphs. When reading, the paragraphs are too long and the handwriting is compact, which will cause reading burden. When listening to the book, the speech speed is too fast and it is easy to lose sight of the words, making the human-machine voice more human-machine.

It's also well written, keep up the good work!

Later on, you can consider asking Star God to come over. Aha Lan pharmacist

It's quite well written, it's a fan novel about Ark. I feel like not many people read it, so it won't be discontinued, right?

It's basically invincible at the beginning. It's very good. You don't have to work for a long time and you won't feel aggrieved. The main thing is that you don't feel aggrieved. The form and style are also like Fei Xiao. Well, I've read the first 10 chapters and there's nothing bad about it.