Shocking! My Childhood Betrothed Became a Commander and Wants to Make Our Pretend Romance Real

2025.06.06, Check in after reading the full text. [The following contains spoilers] [Personal feelings] A time travel story with a bit of imagination and a bit of fantasy. On the whole, there are no pitfalls or breaks, and it's a five-star habit (I know the importance of five stars, so as long as the ending is not broken in half, I will give it five stars, so it will not be used as an actual rating). Several details are inconsistent. For example, there is a character named Tiezhu whose surname is Zhang at first and then Zhao; for example, it is said at the beginning that he was sold for ten yuan and then said twenty at the end; and for example, some typos of Shenjiacun are written as Chengjiacun. Etc., I recalled it based on my impression, I didn't check it again, if it's wrong, please ignore it. The early writing was very interesting and I like the style. Later, when we reach the finale, it would be nice if we could explain it in more detail. One reason is that it is easy to forget the foreshadowing. After reading it for a few days after the completion, I almost forgot the previous content, not to mention that if I followed the serialization, the front line would be longer. So it would be nice if the clues for the finale could be buried more solidly in the early stage. The other one is explained in detail because (in my personal opinion) the hint is not obvious. For example, Xiao Zhang and the secretary-general's rebellion or calling them undercover was only mentioned once. It can be seen that it was meant to show that there was a problem between these two people, but it was still the same problem. I had forgotten this little point after watching it overnight, let alone the serialization (my personal memory is also a factor). For example, after the male protagonist discovered that the person lying on the hospital bed was not the female protagonist, he used a sentence to say that the male protagonist would not touch her again, and then there was something happening outside and the door opened. It was only mentioned once in one sentence and it would be easy to miss it if you read quickly (I am not even sure if it was only mentioned once or if I missed it. For example, Mr. Song was unconscious and suddenly appeared in the dark room, so I feel that I missed it). Apart from the details, (personal feeling) the plot moved too fast after the heroine went to see Mr. Song in the finale. The dozens of chapters from meeting Mr. Song to the end reveal too much information to the reader (in this case, me). It is about identifying the villain, trying to catch the villain, struggling against the villain, and also writing about the villain's early layout and planning. The same number of chapters does not have such intensive information output in the early stage. I wish I could use more words to explain this large amount of information. But overall it's really pretty and quite novel. The author worked hard on coding ~ The above does not serve as any guidance, just an afterthought. Usually I don't have any feelings after watching it, and I basically just leave a date and add a sentence to check in after watching it. I don't know why today, but my feelings were quite clear and obvious, so I wrote them down to keep in mind.

The subject matter is novel. The male protagonist is the female protagonist's upbringing. He wanted to take care of his old age but ended up falling apart, but he still became the heroine's salvation. The female protagonist is a doctor of medicine with a very high IQ but mental illness. Time travel is no accident. A fanatic with the talent of Kanyu spied on the heroine in the future world. Seeing the heroine's talent and achievements, he wanted to use the drugs studied by the heroine to control the world on the human body. He could only bring the heroine to the same world, so he designed the death of the heroine and brought the heroine and the murderer who directly killed the heroine to the 1970s. After decades of planning, he was finally killed by the male and female protagonist. The writing is interesting, the characters are interesting, and they all come and go with a lot of brains. However, many details of the story are not explained clearly, and some places feel strange without connection. Moreover, how the villain master induced the female protagonist's brother to kill the female protagonist in the future world when he is not in the same time and space, and how he took them to the past world is not clearly explained.

Although the reading time is relatively short, it can be seen that the author is of high quality. When I clicked on this book, I just thought I had read an ancient novel that was more suitable for my taste. However, the novel refreshed my understanding in just a few chapters. I really feel that the author has achieved innovation. She has created a new world for templates and genres that have been written badly. The core of this novel is still in line with contemporary times, and it does not seem inappropriate because it is an ancient theme. I feel that the characters are very full, and they are very decisive, such as moving and taking revenge. I like this rhythm very much. Compared with ordinary rebirth, I think saving myself is the greatest. I feel that this novel is not just to highlight the greatness of the male protagonist. It is more about shaping the female protagonist, shaping the female supporting role, and shaping each of the extraordinary female characters. Although some characters are a bit annoying, we cannot deny the heroine of this article because of the villain. I feel that the heroine is really perfect. Anyway, I love it [laughing] [send heart] [send heart] [love]

This is the first time I wanted to read it but didn't comment on it in the middle. I feel sorry for the author's low rating and the low number of reviews. It's really good to watch. There are eight hundred scheming little wolf-dog brothers, all eyes are on their wives, and then there are radars all over the world detecting love rivals, regardless of gender [laughs] Crying] [Laughing and crying] [Laughing and crying] The male protagonist respects the female protagonist very much and does everything he can to realize the dream of the female protagonist. Their relationship is also very interesting. [Hold face] [Hold face] [Hold face] The female protagonist is very attractive and has charisma. Hahahaha, I would love the male protagonist more if he were more yandere.

I particularly like the characters. The tone of the male and female protagonists is too palatable, and the plot is a bit unable to arouse emotions. I hope the author will continue to work hard. I think the author has a lot of talent. I will pay attention to it decisively [Sending Hearts]

I finished reading it. Oh my God, it's such an awesome book. I'm uneducated. To be honest, the title of this book is too ordinary. It looks like a very old-fashioned romance style. At first, I almost wrote it off without thinking about reading it seriously. The more I read, the more shocked I became, completely subverting my imagination! The heroine travels back in time with the thoughts and vision of modern people. She is in an era when materials are scarce and development in all aspects is lagging behind. She has no love brain at all. The plot of the whole book is connected very well, and each link is connected very smoothly. The calculations and secret conspiracies, large and small, are all well written, and the order is clear and not confusing at all. The plot also quietly incorporates secret and interesting settings such as 749 rounds, laying a lot of foreshadowing, and the more you watch, the more you get into it. I have been reading novels for more than ten years, and I have seen countless good books, but this one really shocked me. Maybe I didn't expect that Tomato would have such a book? I really advise everyone not to be dissuaded by the title of the book, and read it with your heart. It is definitely a treasure masterpiece that is delayed by the name. You will not lose money if you invest in it!

This is my first time reviewing a novel. This novel is so brain-burning. My first reaction after reading it was: I thought it was just an ordinary period novel at first, but then my imagination became more and more interesting, and it even involved 749 games. The villain boss Gu Fuchen peeked into the future - the heroine Gu Shengnan discovered the coagulation factor R used to treat malformed hearts, and used it to deploy the "Heart-Strengthening Project" to rule the world. They wanted Gu Shengnan to cooperate with them, bewitched Shen Qing, planned Gu Shengnan's death, and let her come to Gu Fuchen's era, and eventually became Lin Si. If you think about it, this novel hints from the beginning that it is not simple. In this era, some people are repeating Gu Shengnan's life. At first, I thought it was a parallel world or something, but after reading it, I realized whether these were situations Gu Fuchen used Shen Lin to recreate, and Gu Li is not Gu Shengnan after all. The "plot" happened Deviation, and because Gu Fuchen went to the countryside, he discovered that these could not quickly get the "plot" back on track, causing Lin Si to grow up for more than ten years. After that, Gu Fuchen still used Shen Lin's desire to control against Lin Si, kicking off their battle of wits and courage. I thought the plot was developing bit by bit, but in the end I discovered that it was a big web. First, it was the appearance of Lin Si that made Shen Lin disdainful and dissatisfied, which led to Shen Lin's frame-up of Lin Si and Shen Chengyi; it was also the mismatch between Lin Si's talent and experience that aroused suspicion; then the appearance of Shen Qing in the previous life and now Yun Shenqing, led him to export tungsten wire, collude with foreign forces, harm compatriots and other behaviors that endanger national security; then there was the emergence of an underground military factory, which was run by Yun Shenqing, and all conspiracies came to light... However, all of this was actually planned by Gu Fuchen. He used these people to weave a big network. The purpose of targeting Lin Si was to wait until Lin Si was desperate and then appear as a savior to better allow Lin Si to cooperate with him. Gu Fuchen underestimated Lin Si's business intelligence and Shen Chengyi's fighting strength that she had taught him. In the end, all the plots went bankrupt.

When Lin Si rescued Gu Li, she was not saving herself from her previous life. No one in her previous life could save her from the abyss, so she took the initiative to make friends as a flat person, helping her avoid disaster time and time again. Shen Chengyi and Shen's mother were Lin Si's light. Shen's mother used love to dispel Lin Si's nightmare left by Gu's mother in her previous life bit by bit. Shen Chengyi lured Lin Si step by step to take root in another world, so that she never dared to love, but in the end she slowly accepted love, making her become more alive from lifeless.

A 400,000-word book with a solid storyline. Tangled up in the past and present, the crazy and sinister Yun Shenqing is just a bitch. Unexpectedly, the boss is actually Gu Qingshan's father, a lovable character who wants to rule the world. It's a pity that I didn't see the male and female protagonist's baby, I want to see it~

The author is so great, and the heroine is so smart that she deserves to be called a genius. Every place she looks at carefully and every person she helps is paving the way for the end. No step is in vain. I'm about to fall in love with her. The author is really great. I really admire how he came up with such a story.