The First Investor: A Fate-Chosen Heroine's Growth Plan

If you can catch one, it will save money. There is a systematic traveler in the world where the protagonist travels. Another time traveler with a system also destroyed the protagonist's master, and even let the protagonist run away in a one-on-one duel.

Yes, well written. , Each heroine has written her own character, unlike other dual cultivation books where women are just tools and do not deserve their own joys and sorrows. It's pretty, come on

I've found the chaff in my tomatoes again. Although there are still shortcomings, this book is obviously much more delicate than those crappy mindless novels. The author has his own rhythm (this is very important). Although some settings are very routine, he can feel originality (this is also very important). In addition, the three views are relatively positive (this is also very important). The rating is only over 7 points, but many negative reviews were sent after only thirty minutes of reading. Those kind of readers are already emotionless reading machines of cool novels. A protagonist who has suffered a burden and cannot retaliate within ten chapters will be disgusted by them. Their negative reviews just prove that this book is not the kind of mindless cool novel that is popular. Come on, author, I support you.

I have read more than 100 chapters so far, and overall it is pretty good. There are some minor flaws, but not major ones. I can't bear to give it 1 or 2 stars when I see a flaw. The main shortcomings are the running accounts of the first few chapters, the ending of the first volume is a bit sloppy and not exciting enough, and the connection between the first and second volumes is not smooth. Overall, what I like the most is the period of daily life after the protagonist enters the Yunmiao Sect. He slowly starts to establish the mistress, but later on it is taken over by the boss battle, and then he starts to jump with several years. But after all, it is written by a new author, so the requirements cannot be too high. Overall, it is a passing work.

It is rare to find a well-written book. It is very delicate. Although the pace is slow, it is very enjoyable to read. I have found the feeling of not sleeping at night in junior high school and staying up late to read novels. The characters are flesh and blood. Although I have a harem, it is not mindless. It has been a long time since I have seen such a great book written with such care.

A score of 6.5 Or above is considered high for this book.

The writing at the end is good, especially Lin Yinyin's character design. In the early stage, she was still a Neptune Green Tea. She devoted herself to the protagonist because of her resources. In the later stage, she truly fell in love with the protagonist. She practiced both skills and techniques to improve the male protagonist's realm. The full text is not aggrieved. I was not hunted down because of hiding resources. I was coveted by the golden elixir once. I also relied on the returned magic sword to self-destruct to drive away the enemy.

Five stars are encouraging but not suitable for most people. The plot is coherent, the setting is perfect, traditional cultivation, the characters are vivid, the description is perfect, the main line is clear, and the IQ is online. These are all advantages, and it is a great author. However, it is extremely depressing in the early stage, and it is not available until Chapter 159. When reading Shuangwen, there is nothing but a rich family. From the beginning to this point, it is all aggrieved. I believed the review until I saw 159, and was directly fooled into rubbing it hundreds of times. If you want to read a good book, I highly recommend it. If you want to read Shuangwen, I suggest you consider it carefully.

The first part may be more uncomfortable to read, maybe the writing is not yet mastered, but the second part is pretty good, and the talent will get better and better as time goes by. This game will not be returned to invincible before it is released. It is relatively slow in the early stage, and the pace will speed up in the later stage. Overall, I feel good for the time being, and some of the destiny heroines in this are tool people, used to earn rewards, and they can have unlimited nesting of dolls, so you don't have to worry about why some women are confiscated

It's really beautiful. Each heroine is vivid, and you won't forget about the other one. They are all connected very well. I really like reading it. I hope that more friends in the book world will discover this treasure novel.