Arknights: I Love All of You Mouth-To-Mouth

Order one for yourself [laughs crookedly] Let me put it this way, when the score of 6.8 Came out, it really made me feel uncomfortable. We don't know how this rating mechanism works. A handful of bad reviews can ruin a book. But you know, those who can really resonate with Arknights always have kindness and justice in their hearts, and I also have a little persistence, so I won't have the idea of ​​discontinuing updates in the near future. Friends who have seen it and want to make our books better, please give us a thumbs up and we will work together.

This is a seriously underestimated book. I was almost fooled by the rating at first, but after reading a few of them out of boredom, I realized that I was wrong. The protagonist is very clearly portrayed. Every time he encounters a problem, he reacts like a normal person. There are no embarrassing plot points. It is very nice. The author will update quickly. If you update 10 times in a row, the gifts will be huge [smile][smile][smile]

As of now, it's very shocking. Everyone is telling me that it is my responsibility, but she came to hold me and hope to protect me. This was my original intention when I played the second game. Isn't that the girl I am looking for? Thank you, the author, for letting me see my ideal love story again

Let me talk about my personal feelings after reading Chapter 113. The simulation time is too long, basically 20+ or even more chapters, which will make many readers who come to Shura Field lose (like me, although I am not disgusted with simulated plots, long-term simulations make it difficult for me to have the desire to continue reading) Generally speaking, this work is quite good, at least on the Tomato platform, it is considered a high-end work. However, it seems that the male protagonist will not follow the original plot line, but will collect the memories of reincarnations to repay the love debt owed (but I guess it will still follow the main plot, after all, I am not good at it. The male protagonist or the author will give up the opportunity to fight with the knife)

There are some hidden dangers in the later stages of simulation writing, that is, as the number of simulations increases, the bond between the protagonist and many characters will gradually hinder the advancement of the plot and the expansion of the world view. In other words, the content of "Shura Field" will occupy the space of the article, which requires the author to properly handle the emotional arrangements between the characters. And I think the most important and basic thing about Ark's text is to describe and develop the worldview well. After all, Ark's worldview is also a highlight of Porridge. At the same time, it should also be noted that after the simulation, it is best not to deviate too much from the original setting of the character. For example, if Linguang gives up or becomes less determined on her path of knighthood in order to fall in love with the protagonist, will she still be Margaret Linguang? Finally, overall, this article has just started, and the content is still very good. I hope the author can write better in the future and bring you a high-quality Ark article. Please! I really need a good Ark novel to read! !

Although it is a fan, the plot is smooth and not jerky, and the characters are naturally not stiff. Not to mention looking at the simulation area, the writing is considered to be good in the whole tomato, but it is a bit slow. When can I have three chapters a day, it will not be a problem to compete with the one next door to grab the top spot of the porridge fan [Thinking]

So far, it's still great, at least much better than most other types of Ark articles on Tomato. If I have to say a shortcoming, it's that the updates are a bit too slow... There are no other problems. The book is very good.

I don't understand why this book has such a low rating. The simulated Pegasus boy's relationship with Casimir, Margaret, uncle, Tolan and others in the first paragraph perfectly portrays the conflict between the infected and the non-infected. It also constructs an image of the infected who dares to fight (personally, I feel that it is as amazing as the fighter Tallulah). After that, the Qi city line did not rely on advanced civilization technology to directly kill it. Pulling the general to the island, laying out the plan to save the frost star patriots, perfect realization of the dream. Looking forward to the follow-up ah ah ah [Adoration]

The subject matter is very good, but the shortcoming is that there are too few. I recommend ten chapters a day [Like] [Like] [Like] The writing is good, the subject matter is good, and the plot is good. Three good students said it is

The simulation part of the author's dungeon is quite good, but the daily breaking points between simulations are a bit poorly set (it feels a bit OOC, and the operators can't say such things), but I feel much better after the second simulation.

Yes, the writing is okay. It's actually quite good if you don't think about it, but the settings are also logically toxic. Generally speaking, just look at the pictures quickly. I personally think it looks more comfortable.

Whether it is Linguang or something else, it can be clearly seen that it is not random writing. The author's writing is very good, and okay, I can use it to overlook some shortcomings, such as some characters' understanding of allotropes being a little too straightforward. The main plot may be a little lacking, but that's mainly because a lot of writing is used to describe simulations. A small number of words will bring less storytelling. I hope that the chapters in the future will get better and better, and they must be implemented smoothly.

It's a cool article, the writing is so good, but it's porridge, and the popularity is not very high. I hope our author will stop being a pig, it's very good-looking, and I'll give you some money when I get rich [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]

Support me. My favorite type is a simulator that matches the world view, but most of the back of the island is not filled with the male protagonist's harem.

Finally someone has written a mock article about porridge. The author is so awesome that we love you so much.

It looks good, I just wish the plot could speed up a bit The author's plot made me switch back and forth between comfort and discomfort.

It's nice to watch. The main storyline breaks away from the abstract and is refreshing. The simulated plot can even be read as a short work, which is reasonably sensational and creates emotions. It can be seen that the author wants everyone in Terra to live a good life and realize those regretful dreams. It is a very interesting book and the writing does not have any riddles, it is all about emotions. Don't worry and you will be done.

The writing is good and the characters are well drawn, but there are too few. I recommend writing more than 10,000 words per day [laughter]

A very nice fan of Arknights novels. It is funny and touching. It is not too porridge but just right. If the style of this book is consistent, I want to read 10 million words.

Woo woo woo, Wadasi, author Sang, what should I do without "Arknights: I Love All of You Mouth Teeth" [I'm about to cry]

Boss, don't you want us? [Cry][Cry][Cry] Boss, we respect your teeth

I feel like the simulation part accounts for too much. Maybe it's because I'm not used to reading simulation books [face covering]

I am giving four stars because I am afraid that others will say that I am not giving good reviews, but it is indeed not bad but there are too few people to watch it. If there are more people, the rating will probably rise quickly (come on, my writing brother, if I find out that I don't write, I will die)

It's really beautiful, but one photo every day is a bit not enough.

It's very interesting. I love reading quick updates. Damn it, I've read all the Ark books I can read. [Cry]

It's rare to see a good-looking Ark with all the details in place.

I watched the latest part in one breath. Whether it is the writing, the plot setting of the novel, or the understanding of the plot of the porridge, it is very good. The only regret is that the update is a little slow, but this is also a slow work and careful work! Must give five-star praise

It's been 200 days since I added the summer vacation, and suddenly I found that there is no comment yet [face covering]

It's been so hard chasing this journey, woo woo woo But all I can say is that it was a worthwhile trip. I have nothing else to ask for, I just hope that the boss will not forget that he has an unfinished book [crying][crying][crying]

The only Ark simulation I've seen so far is considered a standalone one, but I can't let you be like it.