Sorrowful Wild Geese: Live Well, Pianpian

It took me a day and a night to read the current text of more than 600,000 words. Overall, the plot is not a big problem. Even as a sister work, it is of a similar level, but it may still be lacking in emotional expression. It can be seen that the author wrote carefully about Pianpian's psychological transformation process and changes in emotional attitude, so the overall problem is not big, but there is still a slight sense of fragmentation between the lines, and it seems that the future plot direction will be clearly felt. I don't know if the emotions in the dialogue description are coherent between Pianpian and Zhihui. I hope that my writing skills will become better and better day by day, so please keep writing [asking for more explosive updates][asking for more explosive updates][asking for more explosive updates][asking for more explosive updates][asking for more explosive updates][asking for more explosive updates][asking for more explosive updates]

So far, everything looks good, the writing is above average, and fortunately, the author seems to have done it by hand at the moment, and the plot is also good. The handling of the two lines is a little bit worse, but it's not harmful, and there are few poisonous points. Maybe the system hangs too much, which will make some people feel bad, but I think it's okay. At this time in the late tomorrow, without cheating, I can only take Pian Pian to hide in Tibet, shave my hair and change clothes. Are you willing to see it? The author hopes that the more he writes, the better. Don't give me half-read things that I haven't read yet.

Please support me. The disadvantage is that I feel that the plug-in is very powerful but the performance is not very good? Maybe it's mainly because of the redemption of Pianpian. I don't know how to arrange it in the later stage. Maybe it's because he returned to his hometown to retire after conquering the world? I feel that the protagonist currently has no desire to become emperor 🧐

It's good-looking, the plot is in place, the protagonist's IQ is online, and he is decisive in killing. However, the emotional line towards Pianpian is just right, and Lin Pianpian's reaction is also very real. Unlike other books where he is devoted to Pianpian as soon as he redeems himself (Pianpian after entering the world), Pianpian is The inability to let go of the prisoner and the attachment to the protagonist are vividly depicted. They are very complicated real emotions. In short, it is over. It looks good, but it doesn't look good to me. Having said that, my lord, I still want to see you ten times a day🖐🏼😭🖐🏼

The Aihong fan is of the highest quality, and can even be said to be top-notch. I am a hungry person who came from "The Lost Young Man". This book can effectively relieve Pian Pian Control's hunger and thirst. The author is very diligent and updates three times a day. Please support Kouya (≧∇≦)/

In my heart, this is the best fanfic. Pianpian always deserves the best love. No matter how bumpy the future may be, how many difficulties and obstacles there are, Zhihui will always firmly choose Pianpian and stand firmly by her side 💕💕

On the whole, except for some incomplete historical knowledge and the system's excessive plug-ins, the rest of the descriptions are still acceptable. If the author wants to describe the grand war plot scenes, he still needs to supplement his knowledge. And the most important point is that he cannot not play with Pian Pian for the sake of the main line of saving the country. Pian Pian is flesh and blood 😢 😢, not a foil and not a decoration. Give Pian Pian more space.

Although it is a systematic article, it is the first time I see someone who wants to redeem Lin Pianpian at this point in time like me, and also thinks about how to change the overall situation. I would only think about going to sea or simply taking Lin Pianpian back to modern times. The author's handling of the relationship between the original character and Lin Pianpian is quite nice [like it], but the beginning is a bit humble 😄 But it deserves recognition, after all, there is no force.

The content of this book is wonderful and interesting, and the plot is full of ups and downs and is fascinating. The writing is beautiful and contagious, and the knowledge is rich and deep. Both the plot design and ideological connotation are excellent. I highly recommend reading.

It's good-looking. The male protagonist dares to love and hate. If he likes it, he will say it directly. He doesn't mince words, which is also consistent with the male protagonist's identity as a time-traveling game player. The emotional description is good, the narrative is also good, and the elegant character design is basically consistent. I hope Lao Da can continue to make more movies.