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Please support me. The disadvantage is that I feel that the plug-in is very powerful but the performance is not very good? Maybe it's mainly because of the redemption of Pianpian. I don't know how to arrange it in the later stage. Maybe it's because he returned to his hometown to retire after conquering the world? I feel that the protagonist currently has no desire to become emperor [exploration]

It's good-looking, the plot is in place, the protagonist's IQ is online, and he is decisive in killing. However, the emotional line towards Pianpian is just right, and Lin Pianpian's reaction is also very real. Unlike other books where he is devoted to Pianpian as soon as he redeems himself (Pianpian after entering the world), Pianpian is The inability to let go of the prisoner and the attachment to the protagonist are vividly depicted. They are very complicated real emotions. In short, it is over. It looks good, but it doesn't look good to me. Having said that, my lord, I still want to see you ten times a day🖐🏼😭🖐🏼

Although it is a systematic article, it is the first time I see someone who wants to redeem Lin Pianpian at this point in time like me, and also thinks about how to change the overall situation. I would only think about going to sea or simply taking Lin Pianpian back to modern times. The author's handling of the relationship between the original character and Lin Pianpian is quite nice [like it], but the beginning is a bit humble [laughs] But it deserves recognition, after all, there is no force.

On the whole, except for some incomplete historical knowledge and the system's excessive plug-ins, the rest of the descriptions are still acceptable. If the author wants to describe the grand war plot scenes, he still needs to supplement his knowledge. And the most important point is that he cannot not play with Pian Pian for the sake of the main line of saving the country. Pian Pian is flesh and blood [cry] [cry], not a foil and not a decoration. Give Pian Pian more space.

The content of this book is wonderful and interesting, and the plot is full of ups and downs and is fascinating. The writing is beautiful and contagious, and the knowledge is rich and deep. Both the plot design and ideological connotation are excellent. I highly recommend reading.

In my heart, this is the best fanfic. Pianpian always deserves the best love. No matter how bumpy the future may be, how many difficulties and obstacles there are, Zhihui will always firmly choose Pianpian and stand firmly by her side [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts]

Nothing but good looks. Flaws do not cover up strengths.

Although it is short in length, it is well written. Come on, author, and don't stop updating.

It's good-looking. The male protagonist dares to love and hate. If he likes it, he will say it directly. He doesn't mince words, which is also consistent with the male protagonist's identity as a time-traveling game player. The emotional description is good, the narrative is also good, and the elegant character design is basically consistent. I hope Lao Da can continue to make more movies.

It's very good. It's a rare fanfic of "Aihong" written since the 17th year of Chongzhen. The author will update it more.

Good looking The character description is very good and three-dimensional.

I hope more people will watch it

It's too short. It's too short. It's too short. Can the author update 100 chapters a day? It's so good.

Good looking. Love to watch quick updates.

It's so beautiful. Is there any?

Okay, I can see that I have learned about history.

It's okay, not ugly, but the shortcomings are real (in terms of money)

It's very beautiful. Why are there so few people watching it? [Exploration]

Very good, although the length is short, it made me see changes. At least there are many good ways to save Lin Pianpian.

One of the few excellent works in Aihong fan fiction, the plot is set in the period of courtesans, the emotional plot description is very delicate, and the writing style and writing skills are excellent! Come on, great author!

Good book, keep going, keep at it

It's pretty. Come on.

The country is not in ruins, it looks good

The writing is good and beautiful.

I don't have the ability to comment, but the book is very good

Looks good, Pianpian always deserves a good ending