In the blink of an eye, Lu Ren arrived in a completely unfamiliar game world and began a journey of survival in the apocalypse. A story about meeting a person, going through a series of events, and finally becoming a qualified Kentucky Superman.
Reader comments
I am actually the first book reviewer. Let me tell you, I just read ten chapters. The author is a novice, so some parts of the writing are slightly awkward. The author's writing style is not bad and I think it will be better if he writes more later. But I actually want to ask the author, is he really planning to write Zombie? I have read a lot of zombie books on Tomato, but almost no one can persist to the end. Because the audience for zombies is too small, the results of the books are very poor. How about trying another track? A post-apocalyptic style where the system army without superpowers overwhelms the zombies? I see that there are many books in this field that have good results. Of course, this is just a suggestion. Finally, please come on, author. If this book becomes popular, I will be the first to give it a five-star rating. [Sinister smile]
I've read a few chapters and I think it's good, the fighting is exciting and the behavior is smooth.
The following are suggestions, for reference only.
Without affecting the rhythm of the story, the four thousand words can be split into two chapters to make the chapters more attractive and attractive to readers.
You can add some MODs with zombies as the background
There should be some other mutated types of zombies. It shouldn't always be common zombies, running zombies, and zombie waves. There can be some mutant animals, infected and normal ones [smile]
That's all for now, and then I recommend the author to refer to these books to find inspiration, Tomato's Zombie: Revelation Interrupted, Apocalypse: Survival in the Wilderness at the Beginning, Apocalypse: A Vampire at the Beginning, No Way to the Doomsday
The most ruthless person in the apocalypse
Tomato is another book that kills its seedlings. I hope I can finish it well.
After reading it, five-star praise! I just don't know when to give space ability and when to get on base.
Why don't you study and practice skills? Are your resources extremely scarce?
I am actually the first book reviewer. Let me tell you, I just read ten chapters. The author is a novice, so some parts of the writing are slightly awkward. The author's writing style is not bad and I think it will be better if he writes more later. But I actually want to ask the author, is he really planning to write Zombie? I have read a lot of zombie books on Tomato, but almost no one can persist to the end. Because the audience for zombies is too small, the results of the books are very poor. How about trying another track? A post-apocalyptic style where the system army without superpowers overwhelms the zombies? I see that there are many books in this field that have good results. Of course, this is just a suggestion. Finally, please come on, author. If this book becomes popular, I will be the first to give it a five-star rating. [Sinister smile]
I've read a few chapters and I think it's good, the fighting is exciting and the behavior is smooth. The following are suggestions, for reference only. Without affecting the rhythm of the story, the four thousand words can be split into two chapters to make the chapters more attractive and attractive to readers. You can add some MODs with zombies as the background There should be some other mutated types of zombies. It shouldn't always be common zombies, running zombies, and zombie waves. There can be some mutant animals, infected and normal ones [smile] That's all for now, and then I recommend the author to refer to these books to find inspiration, Tomato's Zombie: Revelation Interrupted, Apocalypse: Survival in the Wilderness at the Beginning, Apocalypse: A Vampire at the Beginning, No Way to the Doomsday The most ruthless person in the apocalypse
Tomato is another book that kills its seedlings. I hope I can finish it well.
After reading it, five-star praise! I just don't know when to give space ability and when to get on base.
Why don't you study and practice skills? Are your resources extremely scarce?