I Built a Mountain Gate in Uncle Jiu's World

(Superior) Five-star Orange-, 6 A's Sense of substitution A, attraction A, plug-in B, setting B, writing style A, rhythm B, imagination A, character design A, main line B, logic A. Extra points: none Personal feelings: Excellent article on cultivating immortals, with the background of the end of Dharma + casual cultivator + sect + zombie. Blacklisted and posted again ─────────────────── #Objective evaluation. If you have different opinions, you can evaluate it yourself. This way it should not be blocked. 1. Recommended Evaluation Criteria·Ninth Edition Revised (1) Evaluation items 1. Sense of immersion: The attraction at the beginning and the foreshadowing of the world view. 2. Attraction: follow-up attraction, follow-up reading. 3. Plug-in: The golden finger is reasonable and functionally innovative. 4. Setting: background credibility, system self-consistency. 5. Writing style: Does each paragraph promote the development of the plot? 6. Brainstorming: Whether each small story is connected to the main line. 7. Rhythm: Are you tired of reading or feel that the word count is low? 8. Main line: Whether all plots revolve around the core goal. 9. Character design: Is the protagonist's behavior consistent and whether the supporting characters are impressive? 10. Logic: Whether making money, cultivating, etc. Are consistent with basic cognition. 11. Extra points deduction: balance the scores of the first 10 items, data, economy, structure, three perspectives, supporting roles, time, geography, knowledge... (2) Evaluation grouping 1. First impression: sense of immersion at the beginning, subsequent attraction 2. World background: reasonable plug-ins and background settings 3. Content: Writing • Promote plot, imagination • Secondary innovation 4. Structure: Rhythm • Overall coherence, main line • Close to the center 5. Details: Persona·Character design, logic·Consistent with common sense (3) Rating of recommended evaluation items 1. Highlights: S-level 4 points, A-level 2 points 2. Standard: 1 point for Grade B, 0 points for Grade B 3. Defects: Grade C - 1 point, Grade D - 3 points 3. Rating of online articles (1) Up, up 1. Red+: Total score is above level 30 2. Red: Total score is 26 or above 3. Red-: 10 items A (2) High-quality and bright web articles 1. Orange+: Total score is level 22 or above 2. Orange: Total score is 18 or above 3. Orange-: 5 items A (3) Shang Xia·High-level online articles 1. Purple+: Total score is 14 or above 2. Purple: Total score is level 10 or above 3. Purple-: 10 items B (4) Upper-intermediate and high-level online writing 1. Five-star blue+: total score is level 6 or above 2. Five-star blue: total score is level 4 or above 4. Five-star green: 5 items B (5) Zhongyi·High-standard online articles 1. Four-star green+: total score is level 2 or above 2. Four-star green: total score is level 1 3. Four-star white: 10 items C (6) Middle 2 and 2·Standard online text 1. Samsung White+: Total score -1 level 2. Samsung White: Total Score -2 Level (7) Middle and lower three•Flawed web articles 1. Samsung Gray+: Total score -3 levels 2. Samsung Gray: Total Score -4 Level (6) Xia Shang·Web articles with great flaws 1. Samsung Black+: Total score -5 levels 2. Samsung Black: Total Score -6 Level 3. One-star black +: total score -7 levels 4. One-star black: total score -8 levels 5. Two-star black: 10 items D One star is an invalid rating, two stars is the lowest rating (7) Medium•No rating (lower middle to upper middle) (8) Inferior • No grading (middle to lower to lower) (9) Xiaxia·Malicious 1. The first stage: total score - below level 10 2. The second stage: total score - below level 20 3. The third stage: 10 E

This book is very well written. I like it both in terms of the world macro and the cultivation system! The only drawback is that I personally think the name should be changed and don't refer to Uncle Nine. I thought it was about catching ghosts and killing zombies, but it turned out to be about cultivating immortals! Haha [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]

Good looking😄Love(⑉°з°)-♡Look, like😍Look It's a very good novel about the fantasy world. It's not like other novels where you travel to Uncle Jiu's world. You're either doing this or that with Uncle Jiu, or you're just eating and drinking. I died speechless in vain. A sect like this needs to be strong and have a goal. I am one of the rare best. Although there are some minor flaws, it is still very good. At least this novel is worth recommending to you. Mainly, I feel that what you wrote, the author, still suppresses the protagonist a little bit. To strengthen the sect, you can try to recruit as many disciples as possible. Also, you haven't described the peaks of the Ziyan Mountain sect where the sect is located. This can be described later in depth. To add a bit of strength to the sect, it is to describe it as tall as possible, don't you think? After all, it is a sect that has been promoted, right? In short, it is always a good thing to bring things like spiritual trees and spiritual veins back to Sanmen in the air. Just take them home. There is a little bit of a sect, which is essential if you want to strengthen the sect. Just those two of yours, that won't work. Looking forward to updates from the author

Yes, I was poisoned only in the fourth chapter. The setting is very exciting. I cheated at the same time, but I couldn't use it after cheating. It's so annoying [crying with laughter] [crying with laughter] [crying with laughter]

Good-looking. A breath of fresh air in the world of immortality. Slowly developing and positive. The biggest difference from other immortality novels is that there are no messy things, it is clean and refreshing, and the more you read, the more comfortable you become. I hope that in the end the author can develop into a great sect, a great sect in the upper world, and a holy land in the plural world. Come on.

This is like a book. Other Jiu Shu fans can't wait to become invincible from the beginning.

It's quite good-looking. It doesn't have any bells and whistles, nor does it kneel down and lick Uncle Jiu and other series 1 protagonists.

It looks good. You can add some martial arts sects, such as Wudang, Emei, Shaolin, Chongshan Sect, Tomb Digging School, etc. These sects don't have to be too strong. In this era of warlords, these sects have withered and are no longer what they used to be, but they still exist. Just like us now, some of these sects still exist. You can also add some forces under one person. What do you think, author? Updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates ][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates] For later resources, I really hope that the author can write about the Bermuda Triangle, a forbidden place in the underwater world. There should be treasures there, such as space stones in meteorites to refine storage space materials.

The subject matter is very good and very novel, um, I quoted some, the world view of Uncle Jiu. From what I can see so far, there are not too many poisonous points. At least it is not like those. The protagonist must be on the way to become an immortal. Then for some reason, if he accepts a Ren Tingting, either Ren Tingting or a White Fox Silence (~_~;), a person who will definitely become an immortal or a time traveler from another world, I see that the woman can't walk. This book personally feels that it has a goal. As I read it, I feel that the goal is to carry forward the Taoism and become an immortal. Well, from what I have read so far, it lacks some introduction. Normally, disciples should offer a stick of incense to their ancestors every day.

The Emperor with a Wry Smile, those with high poison resistance can take a look [smile]

I originally wanted to give it four stars, but after reading the comment with the most likes, I saw that the book was not taken seriously. The protagonist and his master practice authentic Qi training methods (there is no spiritual energy (gold finger) that cannot be cultivated in the Dharma Ending Era), so they practice slowly. The apprentices they accept are taught in accordance with their aptitude, catering to the method of cultivating the soul in the Dharma Ending Era. I think the other settings are quite reasonable. A group of people who don't read books seriously are hardcore. I'm convinced. It's a 5,000-hour bookworm certification. Those who are bookworms and like Uncle Nine's fan fiction can take a look [like] [laugh] [eat melon]

The theme of this Jiu Shu book is very good to me. It will carry forward and strengthen the sect in the era of the end of Dharma and make the sect stronger. I hope it will not collapse.

Taking the world of the end of Dharma as the background, mixed with Uncle Jiu's world view and settings, the original plot slowly unfolds, and there are also small worlds, three thousand big worlds, the underworld and the fairy world, and they progress layer by layer. It is a rare good book of the end of Dharma.

This book is very comfortable to read, there is nothing poisonous, and the writing is not messy or watery. The subject matter is what I have always wanted to read. I created a sect in the world of Nine Balls and recruited a large number of disciples, and I rarely interacted with Nine Balls and others without licking them.

It's the second best book I've read this year. The writing is smooth and he should be an old-school author. This kind of novel was very popular 10 years ago, but now it lacks innovation and creativity. Moreover, the protagonist of this novel is a eunuch.

Not bad, very good. It has a sense of substitution. It doesn't blindly lick Maoshan like others.

The writing style is average but not very vicious. Mainly because I have never seen this kind of subject matter before. It is quite interesting to watch it for the first time and support it. It was okay at first, but after a hundred chapters, he allowed his subordinates to kill monsters indiscriminately without harming anyone. His three views were not good, so he took back the five stars at the beginning and gave up the three stars and left.

I really like this plot of raising the upper limit of the sect bit by bit, just like ordinary people working hard to make money and then buy a house and a car, improving the quality of life bit by bit. Although geniuses are good, ordinary people are the vast majority of people!

Liangcao, through the name of Uncle Jiu, Su Daowen, does not follow the main plot of Uncle Nine, and has no system. It relies on not being too powerful to improve its strength, recruit disciples, and expand the sect. What is more reasonable is that it is no longer about traveling across the world to gain good luck, but is extending to the fairy world, with high- and medium-level fairy worlds. But it's relatively easy to do it a few times in the early stage of the spell battle, and then it's all about practice and opportunities. A light transition, if you don't like the invincible start of a harem of girls, it's worth recommending. Feel

It's okay. People who can accept being dull and boring can take a look. I can't accept the practice setting in this age of end of the law. The mana is just like blue, but it can't be restored by itself. It's no different from practice. If you use up your mana, you have to practice it again by yourself. In this way, the more you fight, the weaker you will be. If you use your mana too hard, you will become a mortal directly after a fight.

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The story is simple and not complicated. It has inheritance, the opportunity to practice magic in the Mufa era, and treasures that can convert spiritual energy. It is easy for people to accept and hopes to update it quickly.

The writing is quite logical and relatively novel. I just hope there will be more updates.

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Very good, finally I am no longer apprenticed to Uncle Jiu.

This is the first time I have read those novels about the world of Uncle Jiu, and the author writes them very well. The characters and plots are logically layered and three-dimensional. Keep up the good work and hit new highs [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

Not bad, very good and worth recommending🤙👍

It's quite good to watch. The first time I watched the background panel was Jiu Shu World, which silently strengthens a small sect. The plot content is quite good and not outrageous. Personally, I think it suits my taste better.

I have read so many novels about the world of Uncle Jiu, and the ones I have read are basically about Shinto, and Golden Finger of Immortal Way is particularly exaggerated. In this one, the author Golden Finger's writing is not so strong. The early stage is more solid, and I look forward to the follow-up.

Yes, although some places are not smooth enough, the overall flow is still very smooth. Certified by a twelve-year old reader, you can read it.