After Time Travel, the Little Senior Sister Wants to Stay Away from the Male Protagonist Every Day

The writing is good, the storyline is good, not too slow, the male protagonist is good, the female protagonist is good, the supporting characters are good, everything is good [love] [love] [love], the only bad thing is that it hasn't been finished yet, and it's hard to wait for the update [crying] [crying]

The heroine in the book is really smart, witty, and strange (because she is a modern person). Later, her best friend in modern times also entered this novel, and the story became more interesting. This book is really worth reading more.

The male and female protagonists are so sweet, I wish there were more emotional lines [blowing kiss]

It's super cool, I finally have a heroine who has a long mouth and can complain. Will use its own resources

I have read several novels about cultivating immortals, but I still like this one. The female protagonist is strong and cute. The male protagonist is centered on the female protagonist and thinks about everything for the female protagonist. I tell you, Chu Jing, don't love her too much [laughing] The supporting characters are also lively and interesting. Anyway, it is a very good novel. I only ask that I don't forget to read the book. I don't know what the world is when I beat the king.

The heroine never suffered in the whole process. She was pampered by her masters and brothers, and her emotional line was smooth all the way. Although the first two lives were painful, this life is really fun. I think the author is also quite interesting. Every time the writing was very difficult, I felt like the sky was going to fall, but it ended like this. In the next edition, I thought there was going to be a demon world war, but in the end, I just accepted the demon world to add buffs to the young couple. The inner demon in the upper world felt like it was finished when I heard it, but the result was just like that. I thought the heroine was going to die once, but the puppet flashed directly. ，，，，， [There is no question of uncleanness. Don't worry, everyone will watch the ending and the happy ending. The villain will not die again and again, but that's all.]

It's quite good, but the writing is a bit immature, but the plot is very good, so please give it a try, author!

The author is great! Come on! Come on! Come on!

The plot and everything are great, but the author sometimes makes typos by mistake, and the writing feels a bit rusty. I believe the author will get better and better [top post]

The main reason is that I really like novels about cultivating immortals, and I like the character of the heroine in this novel very much. It is not abusing the heroine, but it is a good read. There are also many female characters with vivid personalities in the book, which I like very much.

Looks good, this vicious female partner is quite good at being a good person, the group's favorite

I really like it. I really like it very much. I used to be impatient when I read novels only from the front to the back. After reading this novel, although I haven't finished it yet, whenever I have free time, I will think about it and I will become very excited when I was a child.

I feel that the plot and everything are pretty good, but the word "but" appears frequently. There is one in two or three sentences, and sometimes there are two or three in one sentence. For those who like to listen, it is really torturous. I suggest you use less "but" this catchphrase, it will basically appear in everyone's dialogue, which makes people very uncomfortable.

The heroine is super good at using her own resources! And the heroine is super super super super cute! Like it, like it, like it, it looks very good so far! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Beautiful, clear logic, I really like the heroine

It's really good-looking. Apart from some settings, Tongtong is a person with very upright views and the heroine is also very good.

When can Wen Ci and Chu Jing be together?

Could the author please not use so many exclamation points? [Crying] There are some places where it feels inappropriate to use exclamation points. It is a very plain sentence, and adding exclamation points seems to change the tone.

Everything is pretty good. The writing is also pretty good. The plot is also pretty good. I'm quite satisfied with the male protagonist. The female protagonist is a lively little sun type. The plot has ups and downs. It's a bit long [face covering]. I'm a little tired from watching it. My personal opinion.

One of my favorite books, cheers to the author.

Yes, it came from the novel's tweet, but the blogger who updated this tweet has not updated it, so I read the original article. I can only say that the plot I have read so far is very interesting (ﾟﾛﾟ)｣ You must read more, it's really beautiful, I'm obsessed with it (#^.^#)

Very nice. The heroine is neither stupid nor stupid, and the story is not difficult to understand [shy]

Don't pick your butt😓😓😓You have a virus on your hands🤢🤢🤢It will infect your butt😫😫😫The butt is also poisonous🤨🤨🤨😋😋 before you eat it Food 😋😋😋 is easily poisoned 😵😵😵 La la la la la la 😆😆 don't pick your butt 😓 la la la la la don't pick your butt

It looks good, but it doesn't have many updates. It is best to do 10 sticks a day.

Highly recommended, throw your mind away and just watch it

Super super beautiful. The more you watch, the more addictive you become. I haven't skipped a single picture.

Thank you for the update, author. It's so well written [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

I think it looks good, and it fits my three views

Wenwen is so beautiful! Support support support greatly [send heart][send heart][send heart]

It's pretty good to watch, but there's a plot in it that I feel is a bit like the plot of Evernight Galaxy, but it's still okay.