Building a Nation in Douluo Dalu

You've enhanced Dou Er too much. I don't believe there are 300,000 titled Douluo in the original work.

When you see it, you can also write down the period in which Kiana was born. Otherwise, if there are many people in the future, they will ask about the Herrscher's ability, the final power, etc.

Damn, it's interesting and good-looking, but there are too few updates. Also, what is the specific power of the protagonist? In less than 100 chapters, he is preparing to destroy the God Realm. Will it be over in 200 chapters [face covering] [face covering] Why don't the author open a new book, don't use Douluo, it has a rating of 5.8 And 143,000 people have read it. If you didn't use Douluo, it would have become popular already.

The idea is very good, but the writing style is a bit immature, and the front part has a very serious composition style. [Perfect (S)] [Slightly worse (A)] [Can see (B)] [Average (C)] [Tolerate it (D)] [Just a lump (0)] As someone who has been reading novels for 9 years, my evaluation is: Idea or setting (S - interesting setting) [key to attracting readers] Writing style (D - the first few pictures have the style of writing when reading) [Necessary conditions for retaining readers] [The composition should be pretty good when reading😄] Linking up out of contextA Summary: The idea is good, but the writing skills are poor, so I need to polish my writing skills. Give me a follow first and see if you can give me a little surprise [blow a kiss] [blow a kiss], come on 😊 Newcomer.

The subject matter of this book is quite novel, and the content is well written. Compared with other Douluo fan fiction, the world view is quite large. The pace is also quite fast, but there are still some pitfalls that make it uncomfortable to read. First: In terms of combat power, the protagonist is set to control the life and death of imaginary numbers and the sea. It is understandable that he is too powerful and cannot take action. It is also understandable that the Human Soul Empire has developed a lot of technology for thousands of years, but it is very incomprehensible that he suffered heavy losses in the war with the three empires and one academy. Second: In the book, it is written that humans and soul beasts coexist peacefully, but the soul beasts in it do not play many roles. For example, in the academy, there is no academy that transformed into soul beasts. I hope the author can pay attention to this. Third: The overall combat power setting is a bit confusing, because in the book, the Empire of Human Soul seems to be very impressive, and I have started planning for the God Realm a long time ago, but there are still some shortcomings in other aspects, and it feels a bit magical. Everything else is quite good. You can read this book. The above are some of my personal opinions. They are purely for reference. I only say so much because I think it is interesting. I hope the author can continue writing and not end it.

It's very beautiful, very beautiful. I hope the author won't stop. I beg the author even more.

As long as there is a force like the protagonist, it will be no problem to fight against four, basically crushing it, but the protagonist has to fight to 55, and finally throw a nuclear bomb.

Why no Vita? I want to see Vita. Lord Vita, Lord Vita

Okay, it's been a long time since I saw a Douluo article [I understand]

So pretty, so pretty