Journey to the West: Don't Be Afraid, Smoke Is a Normal Phenomenon

A good novel should be able to retain readers in three or five chapters, and feel good after reading two or three chapters. It should have many jokes but not too many jokes. There are some common sense mistakes in the front, but the author will correct them instead of being stubborn. This is already better than 80% of Tomato authors. The protagonist has a correct outlook on life, neither the Holy Mother nor the Demon King, and will not expose the evil deeds he has done just because he has saved the other party. When doing things, you have a proper grasp of your identity, and you don't criticize others aggressively. It's very comfortable to watch. Come on, author, I hope you can keep up the good work and not end it.

Tang Sanzang: Banshee, don't fall in love with me. If you fall in love with me, I will be a scumbag monk and make you hate me. When negative energy breaks out, I will absorb it! The plot of the novel is very interesting. I give the author a big five-star praise. I hope the author will work hard and update it. I will save it now because I can't bear to read it! Come on!

It's quite interesting. Wukong, Xiao Bailong and the protagonist are well portrayed. Bajie and Sha Seng are also okay. The rest are all OOC (compared to the famous novel Journey to the West). They don't feel like immortals. They hold grudges and have murderous intentions at the slightest thing, especially when watching Yin Bodhisattva does not have that otherworldly feeling at all. Instead, it is like the villain of Long Ao Tianwen. It is all about calculations. The leader of Tongtian, the Second Saint of the West, and Hongjun also appear in the article. This is because it is a fan of Journey to the West rather than a fan of Journey to the West [face covering]

"Crack" the gavel sounded! "Our book follows this story and talks about the love-hate entanglement between Guanyin and Chen (Tang) Xuanzang in the previous life. In the end, Chen (Tang) Xuanzang's body was not found. Whether Guanyin can hold Tang Xuanzang's waist in this life depends on how the resentful woman Guanyin battles wits and courage with Tang Monk with eight-pack abs. It depends on how G Lao Er writes it." "Pop!" The sound of the alarm sounded, predicting the plot of the future and going to see what Lao Er wrote! Exit! ! ! !

If you are not crazy, stupid, epileptic or crazy, what is wrong with you?

A different journey to the west, a different calculation! Measuring tribulations in Journey to the West is a bit of a joke to begin with, but it makes sense in the Age of Dharma End. After several calamities and life-and-death trials, the practitioners no longer want to play with the way of heaven, so they end the practice without measuring the calamities. The gods and immortals are in their respective positions, and their lifespans are infinite, without the risk of calamities!

Super invincible and beautiful^ω^

The flow of growth does not change much

Isn't the Zhoutian Xingdou Formation a great formation for transforming spiritual energy?

It's a pity that the tomato was cut in half

In it, Tang Monk has a good character, and the relationship with Wukong is handled very well. I personally think it is quite interesting [like]

The logic is clear, not a very cool article

The first few chapters are well written, but I don't know if there is any moisture in the later chapters. Come on.

It's really beautiful [thinking]

It was pretty good after reading ten chapters

Very good, very beautiful

Very interesting, recommended

Nice looking, keep it up author!

It's generous, I like it [laughs evilly]

Very nice and quirky

You have met one of Zeng Zun's conditions for reciting poems, please keep up your efforts.

It's very interesting. It's not the Virgin. I like it. It would be better if the author could update it ten times a day.

Rich in innovative content, much better than those that are the same

Yes, although there is no new plot, the new ideas can be said to be a good advantage.

The author is a great talent, this is the Tang Seng that readers want to see

It's beautiful, and the characters are well-drawn.

It's good-looking, although the plot is still cliché, but the author's writing skills are passable

Interesting, a different kind of disaster in Journey to the West.

Very good-looking, very good-looking, still pretty good-looking

Good luck to the author, he has great ideas.