神人魔法少女太多了！

The writing is good, the main plot is quite attractive, and the male protagonist is not the type to moan without reason. I was still thinking that Xingkong would be defeated sooner or later when he fished like this, but the new plot hit a brick wall and was blocked [face covering] It's just a bit watery, and it's a bit cumbersome in many places, which is criticized. However, there are relatively few themes like magical girls. I generally recommend it to fans who like to watch this kind of movies. I can't feel the charm of Bai Zi, I stick it hard, it's so boring to watch

Finished reading. I actually don't read many magical girl novels. But most of them are of this type, retiring to life after being invincible. Then he loses his vest under various circumstances. But I have to say that the writing is really excellent and makes people feel like their eyes are shining brightly. As for Bai Zi, I don't want to talk about it. It was okay at the beginning. After all, I thought she was the heroine. The more I look back, the more I feel like she is just a roadside character. As for Feng, I actually didn't feel anything at first, but the more I looked at it, the more I felt like it. Not crazy, not a monster, understands Hope's preferences, is very measured, knows what to do and what not to do, and is also the first person to know Zhiqiu Hope's vest, what's the gold content? No need to say more, right? And now she's a fake girlfriend! Everyone who understands understands. Finally, I hope it gets better and better [blowing kiss]

So far I personally think it's pretty good and not toxic. [Like] And it's a daily unfolding, which is the type I like to watch. [Blowing kiss] I have been chasing it for about half a year, and I personally feel it is not toxic. [Understood] The plot is also quite good. [Like] It's just that Hajimaru has few updates and is not enough to watch. [Please update]

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This book is very interesting, with a lot of plot twists and smooth writing style. It is very interesting to read. Comfortable... The protagonist is a bit lazy and has the taste of sandwich sauce mixed with it. I personally like this kind of arrogant, lazy, and a little bit naughty character, and I look forward to seeing her wearing a flat waist and wearing a vest... Alas, love debt, alas, a crazy magical girl

One of the better books in the magical girl genre, it has shortcomings but is overall good. However, the reason why the protagonist is separated from other magical girls is a bit heavy, and there is a bit of a lifespan theory. I feel that the ending is not good. My impression after reading Chapter 200 is that if the protagonist's mentality does not change significantly later, staying anonymous for the rest of his life is the best ending. Finally, please be less persecuting Baizi. Stealing a wheelchair for a disabled person is too CS. Moreover, after the wheelchair is in the hands of the protagonist, there is almost no scene. It is too CS.

This magical girl is a superhero-themed story with a post-modern narrative. It is not considered a romance, or the romance part accounts for very little. And there is not too much description of the process of saving the world. It focuses on the daily life of the protagonist after he retires. He is said to be a magical girl, but the protagonist is more like a soldier who suffers from PTSD after experiencing a cruel war (it may not be appropriate to say this, but it almost feels like this) The protagonist is a hero who saves the world, an invincible existence, and an eternal end. However, the protagonist has an awkward and twisted personality, worries about love and does not dare to accept the love of others. Some readers may think this is her shortcoming. In fact, this is what she sacrificed to save the world. She sacrifices too much, leading to worries about gains and losses, and she appears to be stubborn when she cannot love. She may seem invincible, but she is actually a girl who lacks love in her heart. It seems to be ordinary, but in fact it reveals the protagonist's heart to the readers little by little, and at the same time it is joyful and funny. As for the battle between the heroines, the author has portrayed the heroines in each chapter very well and they are all cute. Bai Zi has a high IQ, is yandere, and is more delicate than sick. Kaede is a well-behaved and obedient maid who is an evil maid, but she doesn't walk a tightrope beyond the red line, which is also very cute. (The premise is that the plot will not get too complicated later). Sanae is a carefree and cute cat girl who regards the protagonist as her best playmate. Snowmobile treats the protagonist as the object of admiration. In fact, this book seems to be trying to gain favorability among a few people, but in fact, I think the protagonist only likes Leia from beginning to end, and thinks about it day and night, and is very upright. I secretly think that this magical girl from the sanctuary who has not appeared is the real heroine. [Sending Hearts] So readers who support Kaede and Baizi, please stop arguing and just join me in supporting Leah. (See the picture below) Time will prove that this is a good work

(Personal evaluation) The overall evaluation is pretty good, and it can be considered a good one among the books I have read. Of course, we must first exclude those outrageous remarks. By the way, this vest exploded too slowly, and the one next door exploded in Chapter 106. Ahem, of course, this is not a deliberate smear, so in what form does the author plan to explode the vest? The update is too slow. There are already 300 chapters of Miscellaneous Fish Haji Wan, and the vest has not dropped yet. Why do you need four to five hundred chapters to drop the vest? Hurry up, I want to see the river of blood, Hakimaru, hurry up and burst the hope vest, we'll be fine with this

The initial impression was weird, but as Hope's role increased, the impression started to improve. Hope made people feel very cute, but as soon as the male protagonist was switched, there was a sense of agency. If you don't want to hear this in the comment section, Hope is really a dynasty, and we need more Hope.

What a gem, the cutest novel in the world of comedy. The retired magical girl's cute thinking logic is different from ordinary people's, and the slightly realistic story background creates a wonderful spark. I am the kind of person who likes to read comics and anime. After watching the interesting plot, it is difficult not to laugh out loud.

This is the book about magical girls that I have been following for the longest time on 🍅. In my opinion, it is undoubtedly a good book. The protagonist returns from the war to start a battle of vest defense, and is unwilling to see her former comrades. I think it is because the protagonist does not know how to face it, and she is almost immortal and does not want to accept loss anymore. For Bai Zi, I personally don't like it because I can't accept this kind of love that you love but don't want. Maybe it's because I am a pure love boy, and I don't object to other people liking it. Finally Quantity! ! ! Produce! ! ! Type! ! ! Tea! ! ! Tea! ! ! Pill! ! ! Don't mess with the fish! ! ! Update soon! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

A very classic magical girl themed article, but the author should have deliberately discarded the poisonous points of existing related works. The overall plot is very smooth, but the writing style needs to be improved [Thinking]

It may be a bit selfish, but this book is the best magical girl transformation text I have ever seen, even better than Pineapple. I like this book very much and hope the author can give this book a perfect answer. You must write it down [cry][cry][cry]

The story is interesting and the writing is great. I like this kind of book. A good-looking sand sculpture of a magical boy (fog), which satisfies readers' curiosity about opening the box, so when will you stop, hurry, hurry, hurry [please update]

It's good-looking, there are no surprises, and the relationship between the progress and the characters is well understood. Other genres have long lost their vests. I didn't expect the author to keep interesting and write such a long part of the plot that has not completely lost their vests. I am looking forward to the time when the vests are dropped, and I hope it won't stop people. The plot is monotonous and boring, and the protagonist is completely female. What should most authors of Tomato novels say about male-to-female transformations? It gives me a very wretched feeling, like the Ice Cream Assassin. Moreover, when a male transforms into a magical girl, those novels are like those when the vest is removed. The female supporting role is like being in heat, causing the characters that attracted me before to become OOC. The relationship conflicts between the characters are sometimes not well-controlled enough to attract me. Sometimes they are too good and sometimes they are not radical enough or do not fit the character. Just like the person next door is not your teacher. In that book, although it was very exciting to write the moment when the waistcoat fell off, the plot was not very good, just like 🦌 it was released on CD after it was finished. In short, I hope the author can continue to work hard and keep the size right. This is a magical girl novel that is very worth reading.

It's good so far, no routine. The protagonist has no internal friction, is always content, and lives a happy life. The protagonist's combat part is basically one move per second, and he will not be affected by various debuffs, and there is no disgusting "Xiao Qiang" character. It is truly an invincible and light-hearted article, and the content of the jokes is up to standard, not bad jokes forced into the text.

"At that time, Lord Hope was holding the corpse of the ghost beast in his left hand, and pointing to the rising sun with his right hand and shouting." "Every brick and tile in this city is soaked with hope!" "Every streetlight shines with hope!" "Even the rats in the sewers should be full of hope!" "Every speck of dust dances into hope in the storm!" "Every window reflects the reflection of hope!" "The echoes in the subway tunnels chant hope!" "The wandering poet's strings vibrate with hope!" "Even the cracks in the tombstone have sprouts of hope!"

It's very interesting. I've been playing memes but it doesn't feel particularly abrupt. Magical girls' memes are really in line with the trend of the times (sigh). I just like the refreshing feeling of repeatedly pulling characters in the book. Who knows, my family. PS: When do you want to show off your vest? [Sinister smile]

The plot of this book is really interesting and exciting, but the author likes to write long and difficult sentences for some unknown reason. One or two sentences are okay, but the problem is that the whole article is like this, which makes it easy to get tired when reading (well, it may also be the reason for my lack of reading ability), but because of this, this book can make it impossible for me to read it all at once, and it becomes a long stream [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]

The plot is compact and interesting, and the characters and worldview of each character in the ensemble drama are very distinctive for a magical girl-themed work. It has the flavor of a knife of hope. I hope the author can mass-produce more chapters of this novel.

It's very interesting. The author has handled the plot very well. I feel that the author has always had an outline, and he has sorted it out very clearly. Although it is a bit cumbersome, it is also very good. The author must not cut off when he reaches the climax of the story. It is normal for a novel not to be liked by everyone. After all, everyone has their own preferences [laughs] Onslaught, anchor, there are many readers behind you who support you, ୧(๑•̀ɜ•́๑)૭✧Onslaught

My second favorite book, the first one is an enlightenment work. It has such a huge impact that it can only be ranked second. I really like this book, so the label is all on my xp. The author must not stop updating it. Can he write about magical girls for a lifetime?

In fact, the whole book is quite attractive to me. Who doesn't want to see a boy who turns into a magical girl lose his horse? And there are many places that made me laugh, and the content is interesting. It's not unacceptable for a book to be toxic, and I don't care much about the content related to Bai Zi in the comment area. But, but, there are many places that I have to read over and over many times but I may not be able to understand them. There are often long and complicated sentences. There are even some places where I fainted while reading and had no idea what was said. After reading, I even forgot the previous parts. However, it may be my own problem, so I will continue to wait and see.

I've read it twice now. 5 Stars is not really worth 5 stars, but I hope the author can write the follow-up plot well. This version of the plot is quite good in the early stage (I haven't seen the if version of Bai Zifa Li, so I won't comment), but in the middle stage, the heroine of this article cannot be decided, the emotional line cannot be integrated into the main line, and the daily content drags down the progress of the main line, which is not good in the senses. Fortunately, the author should have figured it out, and the subsequent plot is progressing more normally, but the emotional line seems to be still being laid out (Lea, Baizi, and Feng all seem to have a chance. It's hard to say until they want to completely lose their horses. It may even be more complicated after they lose their horses. After all, the author has not yet given a good solution to the lifespan theory). Looking forward to a good development in the future [please update]

There is nothing bad about what I can recommend, and it may be a little unreasonable, but this is what is normal for this subject, and the quality is considered good. I will recommend it with five stars.

Yes, there is a protagonist who is a little decadent and funny in the seriousness. I look forward to losing my vest and being pushed by a yandere one day [eating melon] The plot needs to be accelerated.

The plot density in the early stage is a bit low, and it contains too many explanations. Although it is right to put the explanations in the content of the article, it is a bit unfriendly to readers who are impatient (I am). The storyline is okay and the author's ideas are not cookie-cutter. Overall, it seems OK. If you don't have a book to read, you can start it.

A very interesting light novel type. It is about saving the world and pretending to be dead. The daily life of the protagonist is to protect his identity as a savior. There are also some characters from the same period as the protagonist. They are basically invincible in the world and cannot die. They are very funny and godlike in their actions. They are a bunch of gods.

It is very creative, but the writing style needs to be improved. The plot is limited by the writing style. The author can improve the writing style by increasing the amount of reading (the author can read some modern literary novels to become more comfortable in writing). Maybe the effect will be better. I look forward to the author's subsequent updates. After reading a lot of the later ones, there are far fewer typos and misuse of related words, and the plot is quite comfortable. Good luck, author.

I have read Chapter 22 so far. Each chapter has more than 2,000 words, which makes it 40,000 to 50,000 words. The first three chapters are dull. The subsequent plot is not much different from other novels of the same type. They are all the same routine. Hiding the identity and encountering various accidents promote the development of the plot and discover the memes of the protagonist. But compared to other novels in the same channel, the advantage of this book is that the author's control over the rhythm and the portrayal of the characters are all above passing standards. Although there is a sense of boredom at first glance and there are no relatively exciting and fascinating chapters in 50,000 words, but compared to other books of the same type, it is not trapped by the barrel effect. Although it is dull, it will not be poisoned to death. You can taste it with peace of mind, and you can expect that the subsequent plot will be more exciting. The author will break out of the circular framework and write his own story.