[“Do you think anyone Daoist kills is a good person?”] [“Life and death are nothing to me. If you won’t accept it, fight me.”] [Not an academy story] [“You cultivated from martial arts to become the Dao Ancestor?”]
I’m Xu Le, a Daoist known as “the Depraved Taoist,” the biggest lunatic in the high-martial world and a scourge to the Daoist sects.
After transmigrating for nineteen years, I finally awakened the [Cultivation Through Merit] System.
But the System is strange: I can only earn merit by committing evil deeds.
Xu Le just grinned. That suits me perfectly.
“Compassion can’t save beasts. Only thunder can purge these demons!”
And so
Good deeds? Not interested!
Merit? I’ll max it out the wrong way!
Level up at lightning speed and blast through the high-martial world!
[Burned the little bird of a spoiled young heir from a wealthy family, physically helping him give up lust. A good deed! Merit +500]
[Killed the school beauty’s fiancé with lightning, helping her cultivate the Ruthless Dao. A kindhearted soul! Merit +1000]
[Blew open a Martial Saint’s tomb and burned his zombie corpse, returning him to nature. A great act of kindness for all under heaven! Merit +10000]
[Enslaved a foreign god, letting him experience what it feels like to be weak and reminding him never to forget his roots. Heaven-shaking kindness! Merit +100000]
The evil forces: “I want to file a complaint! That mad Daoist is more depraved than we demon lords! He kills people and then makes the survivors sing his praises!”
The young prodigies of every nation: “Prodigies? What a joke. Never mind, I’m off to massage the legs of our beloved Daoist Xu.”
Rift monsters: “I woke up and the sky had fallen! How can someone like that exist? He only attacks below the belt. My butt still hurts!”
The starry-sky outsiders: “If you don’t nerf him, how are we supposed to play?”
Years later, Xu Le’s halo of merit shines over the whole cosmos.
“This Daoist doesn’t cultivate good karma. I just love killing and arson. Anyone want to face tribulation? I’m your tribulation. Hand over the merit!”
I think it's pretty good. The content is novel and some of the processing is OK. But there is too little content now. The shortcoming is that your introduction seems to be a cool novel template, but after reading the content now, the protagonist is in the growth stage, and the cool essay template is also behind it. At present, it looks like normal novels, not brainless, and sitting around trying to write an accurate world view and foreshadowing. The introduction can be slightly changed. Then there is the content. If there are more updates, it will look fine, but currently there is little content, and some rhythm points do not have a good effect. To put it bluntly, it is not particularly exciting. I feel that this has something to do with the time limit that I want to create. I want to be reasonable and normal at the same time. The protagonist needs to grow up, be reasonable, and need to explain, which leads to a little delay. It is a bit difficult to choose. In fact, I think you can add 1-2 such routines to make it feel better. In addition, the protagonist is a Taoist priest. In this setting, there is thunder. Why don't you come and help me? The summary is that it is a bit novel, the content is okay, but the rhythm is not well grasped. But tomatoes can't be so demanding. I think it's okay, but there is currently little content.
(I saw 17 pictures) Why don't you give the master the red medicine?
Such a magnificent idea, thank you for your work.