Fifty, I Married Someone Secretly and Had the Backing to Dare to Fight Back.

The subject matter is quite novel, but the narrative method is not very good. It does not look like a novel, but has the feeling of an autobiographical narrative, and the way of expression is a bit uncomfortable.

The protagonist has a lot of inner activities, and there are a lot of narrations, and the protagonist is always tense in his heart. What kind of heart is this? Is it possible to change the way of speaking? It's my personal feeling. If you like this kind of writing, you can read it...

So far, the plot is okay and the characters are good, but there are too many psychological descriptions and I feel that the writing needs to be improved. Come on Are they two heroines? It's too long and exhausting to watch your mother fight against the best, isn't it? You can look at Jin Jin's perspective and become a group favorite, okay?

The plot is pretty good, but there is too much inner drama.

She is beautiful, fair-skinned, has brains, and fully uses her own advantages to do anything. It is so ecstatic. There is still a daughter who still has space, is smart, and is obedient. I can only say that the heroine has a good destiny. She also has brains and her own advantages and opportunities. She is really amazing.

I really like the interaction between Lao Ren and Duo Duo, each character is written very vividly.

I hope the heroine's mother won't have any more children, as having a heroine is enough.

Duoduo is a very smart woman. Men just like this kind of woman. She can show weakness, act coquettishly, talk well, and knows how to handle someone. As long as she wants, Duoduo's life will be good or bad. She has no parents to rely on, and her father is very irresponsible. The person chosen by Yuyu is not very good, so why not choose Gu? When going out to do tasks to protect the country's talents, you should also have a sense of boundaries. Since you have already made it clear to your superiors, you should not let Yuyu call him daddy, and be entangled with the protected person, and cannot explain clearly. It is easy to break the relationship between the family and the couple again and again. The author has a new understanding of green tea white lotus

The narrative method in the early stage is indeed very tiring, but it is much better in the later stage. The story is rich in content, and the description of the internal environment of the army during the famine period is particularly vivid. It is very logical among the period articles I have read, and it is worth watching.

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It looks good, I recommend everyone to read it, the subject matter is novel

Personally, I think Cheng Haojun is not worthy of Mianyu. He is not as attentive as Gu. Others are very good.

The little green tea who strives to make progress is worthy of encouragement. After all, he is not hurting others. It's just that the transition between Duoduo's inner drama and reality in the early stage feels a bit disconnected. In fact, the inner drama can be less, and just have the green tea set meal. Readers will pay for it [laugh][laugh][laugh]

I love looking at it👀, and I love eating this green tea cake [laughing]

It's a very novel theme, both mother and daughter have traveled through time, and both have golden fingers! Good looking, the male protagonist is a bit love-minded, I like it😍I like it

The writing is very objective and true. It really reflects the plot of that era. If you didn't pay attention to the plot and drew a sentence, someone would report it casually and say that your life would be lost. It was like that. It seems that the development and construction of the motherland is not easy. The author also writes very carefully. Super pretty.

It feels very interesting, there is so much inner drama, I am a real drama queen [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]

It's beautiful ~ I want to see Shura Field

Good-looking, novel subject matter I have to raise it again. I saw that the woman who destroyed Jinyu's family sent a secret mission to find a man with a family. I was a little confused. Is Jinyu going to change men?

If you like to look good, come on!

It's so fragmented, with inner activities everywhere.

If Cheng Haojun can't explain clearly, replace him with Battalion Commander Gu.

It's good, except that the heroine is a bit pretentious, but who doesn't want to meet such a stupid beauty who sticks to him all the time? Just like when a kitten comes over, you will brush it.

This book is very good. I didn't feel like I didn't want to read it even halfway through it.

It's so interesting, hahahaha, green tea is refreshing and refined, full of desire for life, it's so beautiful

It's so good. I hope the author will update it a lot. I would like to see Duoduo's eldest daughter move in together.

Very good-looking, very good-looking, very good-looking, very good-looking

The author writes very well, no matter how many updates there are, it will never be enough. I like reading this novel very much

It is very well written and I love reading it. I follow it every day.

No man can escape the clutches of the vixen Green Tea Girl. The interaction between the male and female protagonists is so sweet.