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It's really good-looking. Rather than saying that it doesn't fit the tone of Western novels, it's better to say that the UC line is so cruel, and the author is really serious about sorting out the timeline to make the whole story reasonable and orderly. It is very friendly to me, a person who even knows a little bit about the Gundam world view but has not finished watching the UC line, and there are also some supplementary comments on the appearing units. Regarding the author's previous complaint that the brainwashing drama was criticized by most people, I can only say that many people did not think about the rationality and logic of the plot when watching it. They were only angry because they saw the cute and innocent Lily being defiled by dirty adults and being forced to spend her life (if you only read the previous introduction about brainwashing) with her. If the author had said something about the possibility of getting rid of brainwashing in the future, the readers' mood would have been much better (I haven't seen the UC line, if not, just assume I didn't say it)
An extremely hard-core Gundam book Point out the interesting and interesting points Let's make the point clear first 1: Don't watch it if you think Duck is a bigoted person (after watching the theatrical version, no one will think so either) 2: If you want to have fun fighting, you won't be able to see many battle scenes on July 22nd. 3: The perspective is not on White Fortress. So far, there is not much plot with White Fortress. Next is the good stuff The author is familiar with UC history The protagonist has a good mind This book is pure love The protagonist has high combat power Miss Serra is so beautiful The author is passionate about selling hooks (?) The protagonist does not engage in mass murder The protagonist has normal outlook on life Miss Serra is not a coward Miss Sierra's perfect mobility The character has a normal mind Some of the Federation and Zeon ultimate mobile suits that have not been shipped from UC have appeared. The character's combat power is normal People say: Duck. Those with unrealistic illusions should not read it. Please pay attention to the word hardcore The author's writing ability is absolutely no problem, and he has absolutely kept the history of UC in mind and memorized it repeatedly. There is absolutely no need to worry about this. But just because the author knows a little too much about UC, the book he wrote is somewhat bald, which is very surprising in a software like Tomato, which is generally popular for its cool writing. In other words, everyone has never eaten such strong spicy food. Therefore, for some relatively harsh plots, everyone should not emotionally target the author at the first moment, and start sniping on the spot, and then the author will be taken away and write a separate chapter to give a fierce explanation. Don't be completely self-centered, and you should understand others to a certain extent! We need to stop this Titans and A-LAWS behavior!
Personally, I like it very much. The emotional line is a bit fast which is a major drawback, but considering this is the author's first book, the level is still acceptable. The lack of pictures is another major flaw, but the plot is good. All in all, I think it's basically four to five stars, with a personal rating of 8.6 The more I read, the more awesome it becomes. The real attraction of this work is the power struggle. Strictly speaking, it doesn't make me feel very OOC. It's just not suitable for this market full of cool articles.
This article is not systematic and not brainless, but it still has some fun points. The overall level is top-notch among tomato fanfics. The disadvantage is that the Gundam theme will be less popular than the mecha theme (including animation and games) that is gradually declining, and the audience will be relatively small.
It's super good-looking. Except for a few battles that are a bit mediocre, everything else is okay. I like the operation of the forces from scratch, as well as the policy planning, body design, fleet design, etc., Which is very in line with my taste [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]
Among Tomato's Gundam fics, there is a rare work with a strategic orientation. It is also the IF line of Yamei's early appearance. In addition to the relatively fast parts that require oyw, the overall rhythm is also good. Good luck to the author.
The viewing experience is very good. I hope the author will continue to work hard. I just ask not to enter the palace. After all, Gundam writers are pitiful and UC is even rarer. There is also the possibility that the current plot has not been fully developed yet. I feel that the character creation is a little thin, and it seems more like pushing the main line. I hope that more psychological changes of the characters can be added [Like] I hope the author can write more hahahaha, I feel like it's not enough and I don't dare to read it [Adoration]
It's rare to find a good-looking serious UC fanfic, it's finally not a hodgepodge of fast travel, system, and machine combat🥹 It looks good, it really looks good. If I were to rate it, I would give it full marks.
The writing was okay, but the part about my sister being brainwashed gave me shit. I hate that my family was targeted, but I can accept it. I haven't read the rest yet, but I will continue to read, hoping that the follow-up will be double revenge (if you don't have the ability now, it's okay, but after you have the ability, it won't be good if the protagonist doesn't take revenge)
The big refrigerator looks fun👍I want to play too [Adoration] Love comes from TTS [Love] The author does know a lot about the history of UC, and his inferences from the perspective of political games provide a lot of reasonable speculations on the rise and fall of the organizational power of UC generations for people who just use Gundam as cartoons to pass the time. Originally, I was looking forward to writing until the end of Lin Youwei's turmoil, but I just had to follow the author's own pace.
It is a rare good article among Gundam fans. It has its own thoughts and routes. It is a three-dimensional view that can be written by a normal person in the primary stage of socialism. It is not like those weird and cool articles written by some magical people in the feudal cyberspace.
Although there are some unsatisfactory aspects in the plot, the author perfectly expresses the dark side of the UC world. After all, you can't just read novels to read cool articles, right? This is just my personal opinion [Salute]
Considering that there is such a dearth of Gundam fan fiction at the moment, I think this book is still relatively good. After watching Gundam for so many years, I have learned more and more about it, and I can't help but want to use the comment section to criticize some people who brainlessly promote UC narratives. The UC series of works has developed so far. From a humanistic perspective, at least based on my ability, I can't find any faults. The level of Baldhead in this area cannot be said. But in the political and military aspects, Tomino's performance is really hard to describe. As a literary and artistic worker, and also a generation that grew up in Japan after the war, Tomino and his group live within the framework of the US-Japan security treaty, and live in the comfort zone of "politics and war are dirty, and I don't need to get involved." They can criticize everything but are not responsible for anything. This kind of mental dilemma of intellectuals makes their "criticism" slide in one direction in the end: human beings are stupid and there is nothing they can do about it. Of course, we cannot blame them. The impact of environment and personal experience on people is immeasurable, but as fans, we should objectively recognize these shortcomings instead of mindlessly praising them. Pointing out problems will only lead to criticism. The Newtype concept envisioned by Tomino in his early days seems to me to be a kind of political despair to a certain extent, believing that change cannot be achieved through organizations, systems, and struggles, but must rely on the awakening of a more advanced race. (Of course, in recent years, NT has become closer and closer to superpowers born for fighting) Therefore, in my opinion, the profoundness of UC is the profoundness of the humanistic level. It packages these humanistic themes in a political and military shell. So many people feel that these tragedies are insights into society and reflections on war. Actually no, it is a personal story told with a political theme. Tomino did this, but we fan creators who live in completely different environments and have completely different understandings and values can also create something of our own. As for the military aspect, there is nothing to say, Tomino is an amateur. Jpg
I have only read some Gundam works, but the author's descriptions are really detailed. There are some machines, battles, and characters that I don't understand, and he explains them all. It's very comfortable to read [Like] [Like] [Like]
It's a very good novel, and the author also knows the setting of Gundam very well. But I really don't understand how Ray Bill was removed from power. After the intervention of the protagonist, the backbone of the Rebier faction was present. How did the Federation manage to bypass the Rebier faction in negotiations.
It's pretty good. Come on, Duck Catcher Unit 2.
Writing fan fiction is difficult. Writing fan fiction about the UC era is extremely difficult. As a rare UC Gundam work, I hope the author can write the ending he wants🌹🌹🌹
Update it quickly, or you will be court-martialed for being too slow to update. Is there any problem with giving this novel five stars? Let me give you four stars first and be conservative. Nowadays, there are few people giving ratings, so give five stars first, and then lower the rating if necessary.
It's great, at least in the same genre, it is an undoubted masterpiece. It is currently the most comfortable to read among all the Gundam-related content on Tomato.
Well, I have checked all kinds of information in detail, and it is relatively reasonable. Although there are some reversals in some places, this reversal is quite interesting. There is no system, more of a prophetic effect from the dimension of the fourth wall. However, as the story develops, the fourth wall is no longer so effective to a certain extent, which is actually very interesting. After watching Kilke's The Witch, I saw that the author was really gentle. As expected, the old bald man himself had to play the role. It was really depressing and desperate. I would also like to thank the author for giving those characters a different life and saving them a lot of confusion. Thank you.
I learned a lot as a Gundam novice. The protagonist made up for a lot of regrets, and the character is also quite likable. The author's updates and reply strength are both full and very dedicated [full]
Can the author send a picture of the characters that appear? I haven't watched it for so long that I can't tell who is who. It's very well written, I hope it can be completed smoothly [Like]
I have read more than a hundred chapters so far, and I feel a subtle sense of powerlessness. I can't help but feel unhappy. It was like a restaurant with a sign saying "Beware, there may be poop". I walked in doubtful, but found that the food was delicious. Halfway through the meal, the chef came over with a smile, grabbed a piece of shit and stuffed it into my throat. I stood up in shock and anger. The cook pointed to the sign at the door: "Be careful, there may be poop." So I had to sit back angrily, unable to say anything more. The rating may change after I finish watching the rest of the plot. If you haven't read this book: You can give it a try. The One Year War is very well written, and it's considered one of the best written works on Tomato. After reading it, write quickly!
When can updates be resumed? It's really beautiful [crying]
Support me, the author must not enter the palace. But is the protagonist a new human being? Will there be a machine with crushing performance in the future? [What]
There is such a fine and fine health in foreign persimmons, 99%! A rarity! Mouth melon! The author has completely understood the idea of black bald head! Our favorite plot is written by Bald Black! When we watched Z Gundam, it was a huge shock to our young minds! Only the plot written by Black Bald Head is a masterpiece!
It's a great book, why is the rating so low? It's a good book, but after reading too much of Heishencan, I couldn't stand it anymore. I still support the author and write what I like. It's good.
It's a very interesting book, the character settings are not occ, and the plot is creative. It is worth recommending. [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]
It's a great Gundam. It's not mindless. The protagonist has a clear goal and a mature mentality. The only problem is that it has a script. By developing and accumulating power through little cracks, the twisted UC universe becomes less twisted. The author writes very carefully and connects many works in the UC era. It can be seen that he has searched for information very responsibly. I learned a lot about the plot. In short, the plot is great. It has a UC feel without being embarrassing or disappointing. It has endless aftertaste.
It is relatively good among Gundams, mainly because there are no plug-ins and systems, and unlike most Gundams that almost follow the original plot, most of the plot aspects of this one are based on side stories and settings, which makes it look less boring.