She Was Taken by Her Father to Be the Wife of Yazhai

Let me tell you my opinion. There are many third person voices in this book, which I think is a shortcoming. There are very few first person voices. With two female protagonists, I think it is better to post directly or indirectly. In your book, there are more indirect ones, and they are more implicit, and there are not many direct ones. One chapter, too many unimportant words. Then, the best thing about this book is that it is relatively ordinary and everyday. Give it a try and maybe someone will like it.