This was the first time I wrote a novel, so I wasn't so meticulous, and many pronouns were gradually replaced with words that were closer to reality. It is convenient for readers to understand. If you have any questions, you can leave a message. I will check them one by one. If there are any recommended directions, I will follow up in time.
Reader comments
The writing was okay at the beginning, but sometimes it was a bit messy, but I got back to the topic immediately. The fighting content was well written, exciting and not dragging out. Unlike other novels where I write four or five chapters for each battle, the summary is clean and neat. Most of what I wrote is what I imagined will happen in the future.
The writing was okay at the beginning, but sometimes it was a bit messy, but I got back to the topic immediately. The fighting content was well written, exciting and not dragging out. Unlike other novels where I write four or five chapters for each battle, the summary is clean and neat. Most of what I wrote is what I imagined will happen in the future.