I Use Sword Control to Bring My Wife to Immortality

Heard Chapter 293. A novel about time travel and immortality. Reading the comments mentioned that there is a system, I wonder if they are reading the same book? Not long after the beginning, the male protagonist is so poor that he wants to commit suicide, which is a failure. The heroine has too few scenes, and the couple both cultivate immortality. The heroine should also have independent performance and value. It feels like a vase, but not a very valuable vase. The setting of the male protagonist's mother is not good. She betrays the sect that has raised her for many years for the sake of the male protagonist's father who fell in love with her at first sight, which shows that the male protagonist's mother is ungrateful and white-eyed. There are too few emotional scenes between the male protagonist and the female protagonist. I feel that the author is not good at writing emotional scenes between men and women. The overall storyline of the novel is coherent and stable, but it is a bit too bland. Ignoring some minor flaws, it is still a good fantasy novel. Don't be a rogue when reading, just send a message and comment.

@ Is it a single female protagonist? It's up to the single heroine to write the label, otherwise I'll be frightened and afraid that you might start a harem. [Wronged]

Is it possible for my wife to practice spiritual practice? It's very good. Keep writing. Don't change the character of the main character. Later on, he will also be considerate, emotional, and have a clear stance. It's been a long time since I've encountered such a book that I could calm down and read.

Author, kill decisively, take a look first It's better not to reward the sword-dismantling skill. The system is too useless and the protagonist is too expensive. Factory, it's ten chapters. The main character can't be beaten by ordinary people without a sword. Let's reduce it by one star first and see how many stars it can reduce.

I saw the latest chapter 145, and I personally think it's okay. The system is pretty good in the early stage, but I can't keep up later. The system doesn't show up very much. The plug-ins can be turned up a little [laughing and crying] If you encounter trouble, at least you don't have to run away. In the previous article, I ran away once and was rescued once. . .

It's good. The sword control technique has a number of uses. This setting is also good. After all, the protagonist is just stronger than ordinary people. It is normal to have some restrictions on the methods of cultivating immortals. Of course, as the protagonist's training progress reaches full, it is better to cancel the number limit and instead consume mental power/internal power. The higher the proficiency progress, the less consumption and the stronger the power. Generally speaking, it is pretty good. Proficiency: 2000=eighth level, 3000=seventh level, 4000=literary level, every thousand corresponds to one level.

It's good-looking and can basically be used as a daily novel. I feel like reading a chapter every day is like living with the protagonist for a day. It's a pity that I can't practice these and that system.

Come on come on! The male and female protagonists get along very naturally. They came out of a small village together. The two orphans relied on each other to grow and progress together. The gentle and gentle Xiaowan accompanied her husband to travel around the world.

Seeing the protagonist's skills reminds me of the 98 Sword game. Li Xiaoyao also started with these two skills.

The realm is still too slow. It should take three days to advance to the land immortal. After seven days, I will have no rivals in the sky and on the earth. From now on, I can live a life without shame with the person I like, hahaha, hahaha, hahaha.

Although it is a bit regretful, the good reviews are encouraging. Writing a book is not easy. Overall it's fine. It is a pity that Master Shushan died in the battle with the Blood Dragon and the Sanren in red for the sake of the common people in the world. Master Shushan has a broad mind.

It's a single heroine, the heroine's role is okay, they basically work together, the heroine's growth flow is very average at the beginning, but her talent is very good in the later stage, but she is too simple and doesn't like to use her brain, it's so touching. I don't like the male protagonist's character very much. Sometimes he's a bit of a villain, sometimes he's quite selfish, and he can't always distinguish between priorities. My favorite part of the whole book is the single female protagonist. The male protagonist has a single-minded affection for the female protagonist. He will consciously keep a distance from other women and will clearly reject them! It is Yunxiu who appears at the end. Although she is a child, she does not keep the distance as she should. The other party is also a girl of fifteen, which is not young in ancient times. The most annoying female supporting character, Miss Lin, is very scheming. She takes advantage of the heroine and plots against the hero. She pretends to be the heroine's close sister. While she is intimate with her sister, she despises her in her heart. She despises the heroine at the beginning. When she becomes stronger, she misses the hero. The hero has helped so many times that it is annoying to watch. It is like endless poverty alleviation. The best lying woman in the whole article: Hei Niu and Yunxiu, relying on the male protagonist, soared into the sky. Both the male and female protagonists need to fight for life and death, and they have to practice step by step. These two steps can reach the sky [Eating Melon] The male protagonist's relatives, friends, and sects did not give such a great opportunity, but gave these two guys

It's a good article. It's a very engaging daily practice article. I haven't read an article on this subject in several years. The last time, more than ten years ago, Mortals still had this kind of trend, and it was popular for a while.

I personally think it's well written, and as expected, it's a single female protagonist. Please support me.

Nowadays, fairy tale novels are either evil cultivators or harems. This kind of novel has a single female protagonist, and the female protagonist is very gentle. She and the male protagonist grow together with each other. It is rare to see novels in which the male protagonist is outside and the female protagonist is inside. I like it very much.

It's okay. The protagonist looks like a normal person, and the various descriptions are also okay. However, the protagonist's behavior before and after is very strange, which is considered poisonous, but most of the poisonous points have explanations. The rating is about 8.5. It should be lower now because there are fewer people.

It's good, you can watch it, just don't have a harem

OK, this book is also very interesting. I finally read it for him today. But, I want to ask the author, why is there no scene of eating? There is not even a scene of kissing on the lips, woo woo woo [crying] [crying] [crying] I hope the author can add a little bit more of this when writing the book @ Okay, author, I will always support you, and I will read it as soon as you publish it. Dear fellow Taoists, I look forward to meeting you in the next book. I hope the author can add more emotional lines in the next book. After all, the emotional scenes between the male and female protagonists in this book are too bland.

Developed steadily in the early stage, and then started to venture into the world [smile]

Very good, ok! Come on!

It's really good, a fair review.

Nice! The plot is engaging, and although the protagonist is a little bit naughty and almost androgynous, it makes people feel that the protagonist is very real and sunny. Novels about cultivating immortals rarely have this style, which is unique and has creative potential.

Fighting monsters, upgrading and completing tasks, the place is getting bigger and bigger, and there are more and more masters. The hurting person's surname is Xiao, the same as his mother. He may be his uncle or cousin.

It laid the foundation for the future sequel of Fairyland. Overall, the novel is still too sloppily written, the characters and emotions are not delicate enough, and the time span is too tight. But it's still a good work, it doesn't have a lot of fluff, and it can pass the time.

I've read a lot of straight-forward stories, but this book is a little different. It feels like a fairy sword, which is pretty good.

The writing is smooth, the storyline is compact and engaging, and the language is concise. Five-star reviews recommend reading!

It's really okay, there aren't many big drawbacks! The story is relatively smooth! Why is the rating so low?

The narrative rhythm is gentle, humorous, and the plot is reasonable. It is a good book

The novel structure and humor make it refreshing for readers. There is no system, time travel, pretentiousness, waste and other plots. It makes life more joyful and makes you smile when you look at it. At least 9.2 Points are required.

Although this book has a low rating, I think it is very readable. It is not sluggish and does not overly describe the inner world of the characters.