Volleyballno Aggression, I Want to Be a National Champion

I read from Chapter 1 to Chapter 79 in one go. The protagonist's shaping is great and his growth is visible to the naked eye. The game with Jing Dashan was superbly written and full of visuals. The author's description is smooth and flowing, and the rhythm is well controlled. I like it. Everyone who loves Owl Valley Academy very much! Looking forward to the development of the story later!

It feels different from other volleyball articles. The protagonist does not have super talent. When I first read it, I just saw the helplessness of ordinary people under the light of genius. But the subsequent plot is different. Ordinary people also have shining points. The characteristics and personalities of the characters are very delicate. In addition, the high-scoring writing style makes my eyes shine. I hope the author will stick to it.

It's good to read. It's been a long time since I've seen a volleyball male protagonist with such a full personality. He doesn't have a super powerful system, and he's not so talented that no one can beat him. The character is great! He is a baby who would be very popular if he appeared in the original work! The animal sculptures are super cute, the birds are super cute even if they are small and bushy, and the bird parents are super gentle [Sending Hearts] But in fact, the only regret is that there are too few climaxes, and the plot of the male protagonist is a bit flat, and even has no sense of existence (no malice, just personal opinion) because the author writes it from the perspective of the male protagonist, so we can see a lot of things about Takuma, but from the plot (I have read Chapter 88) from other people's perspective, Takuma's presence is weak and gives me a feeling. In my opinion, Ah Zhen is very cute, soft, very serious, relatively dedicated, and even self-mutilation. I noticed that the male protagonists looked like Sakuza, Momo, and who else (few of the supporting characters had a deep impression on Takuma, and they didn't make new friends). In fact, I thought that the Cat Team would have more descriptions and bonds. Just like that, seeing that the one who knows Takuma the most is Xiaohong's mother, I feel that Takuma lacks such a person who can understand him, enlighten him, and even explore him in depth (oh, what am I talking about?) That's probably it. I understand that the author's wife wanted to write a male protagonist who is normal and close to life, but the male protagonist is mostly written together with the other two first-year students, and his presence is not as strong as the two of them. It always gives me the feeling of a background version of the threesome [crying] The only highlight so far is the goal of hitting Jing Taoshan (although I lost in the end) Is there any plot point that allows the male protagonist to communicate and have a heart-to-heart relationship with other people alone, so... But this is the author's first book and I was very surprised. It is really well written, the writing style is also great and the story is eloquent. The characters are very full-bodied, great! (I have written so much again... I rarely write book reviews) But the more I write the book reviews for this article, the more I want to say. Mrs. Explain's article touched me deeply, so I keep talking about it until now. Come on! The cute plot has been commented on in the paragraph review, so I didn't praise it again in the rating [send heartfelt] Many of the things written here are the points that I feel deeply about now. (A few suggestions, I hope the author will not give them.) I actually read a lot of articles that I think I have read, but basically I couldn't read most of the articles that attracted me in the introduction (because I am impatient, and also because the article suddenly shocked me). Only a relatively small number of articles have many advantages that kept me reading until the end. So what I want to express here is that the many suggestions and feelings I wrote earlier are not to say that your writing is not good, but my feelings about this article after seeing it now. I have been following it until now, which is enough to prove that the articles written by my wife are very good (I have really good taste)! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

At first, I actually thought that the author gave the protagonist a hidden genius setting that was always ignored by his parents who were not very fair, and was bullied all the time in junior high school, so that he himself neglected his abilities. I didn't expect that the protagonist is ordinary, he can be regarded as a genius among ordinary people. Moreover, the author's setting of the protagonist is also limited. It is obvious that if a boy is 173cm tall in the third grade of junior high school, it is not impossible for him to grow to 180cm or above in high school. It is obvious that even his younger sister is very tall, which shows that the family has good genes, but the author seems to have given him the feeling that he is the second most talented person for his age, and even his height is oppressive. And wasn't letting him enter Xiaogu just to let him untie his heart knot step by step and realize how powerful he is? Unexpectedly, every time I read the commentaries, I found that even the author was describing him as an ordinary person, but readers believed in him and looked forward to his future success. I felt a sense of sadness when I learned that he ended up doing something similar to training because of his talent, like Makoto Tachibana in Free. Maybe it's because I've seen too few works with ordinary protagonists. I rarely write book reviews, but this book made me depressed. It seemed like a cure, but in fact the protagonist was depressed in his own world, so I couldn't help but comment. The protagonist, like a life trapped in a glass bottle filled with two-thirds of water, has struggled to open the escape lid, but the opening is limited and very small, making it difficult to escape, so he simply or can only build a nest under the bottle mouth, and can still feel the wetness of the water surface and the bad memories it brings. I currently can't think of a way to officially become the main character before the senior year of high school graduates (maybe it won't be until the main character's second year of high school.) Well, generally speaking, it can be seen that the author writes with care. Although my mood after receiving the goods is worth two stars, I will give two more stars for the author's care. (Currently watching Chapter 98.)

I like it very much, like it very much. In the past, when I read those articles, I almost glanced at them and focused on the points I was interested in. However, I really took this book very seriously and read it word for word. I was particularly afraid of missing any details. Because this book really touched my heart. It currently has 146 chapters. I am not a patient person, but I can really insist on reading this book without reading other books or doing other things. Many of the emotional scenes in it touched my heart. I am probably a tearful person, but some of the tender moments in it filled my eyes with tears. In my opinion, I like Takuma's soft-spoken character, and I also like his lively character. While reading, I felt that he was a little dull, indeed a little slow. I like the way we get along with the Teak family. I really like this sense of propriety and distance. I like everyone in Xiaogu. They are very warm, just like the sun, but also like the moon, very gentle. I also like people from other schools, and I can feel their dazzle from the author's words. Many of the author's words are very powerful. I think the author didn't think that much when he wrote this book. He probably just wanted to write the book well. But when I read it, I really learned some of the spirit in it. I think it's really wonderful. Generally speaking, the characters are very rich and full of flesh and blood. It has a certain writing style, not to mention how wonderful it is, it is very gentle and warm, and can give people a feeling of strength. The timeline is not too confusing and can be understood without using any brain power. That dividing line is pretty cute. This is a growth-oriented protagonist, and this speed is acceptable and suitable. This should be one of the best (best) fanfics I have ever read.

Beautiful! It can be said to be the best volleyball fanfic ever! ! The protagonist does not know the original plot, there is no time travel, and there is no system. There is a golden finger but it is not very powerful. It relies on its own efforts. I think this is the essence of small volleyball! Moreover, the protagonist's path is not a badly written one where you use your strength to create miracles or attack and win all the way. It can be seen that there is a lot of own thinking in it. I am very much looking forward to where everyone can go! There is no main character, and getting along with the characters is also very natural and cb-oriented! There is no other character who cares for the protagonist inexplicably, it is just pure boyishness! In Xiaogu, we don't all focus on writing the popular character Mutu. The proportion of appearances of other characters is very well balanced, and the daily writing is also very good! It's great that there are no descriptions of the original plot. When reading fan fiction, you have to read the original plot! The only drawback is that the pit is too shallow, so write quickly!

Mrs! Really awesome! The writing style is really delicate and the problems are portrayed very well, and I have read many volleyball fanfics. This is the one that I think depicts Mutu and Xiaogu the best so far, because Mutu in my heart does not have "problems" all the time, and Chiwei does not really "coax" unconditionally (I think). I see that now it is very natural, and it is very consistent with the volleyball novel in my mind. Anyway, keep it up, I will keep waiting for updates! It looks really good. I really can't give it up.

The writing is detailed, which does not mean meaningless plots and details, but the shaping of the protagonist's character and experience in detail. If you just want to watch the game and kill everyone, it won't work. Takuma is a very good and cute male protagonist!

Everyone is so cute. After all, this is what a sports show should be. People who watch it feel warm in their hearts. How old are we all? Why are there so many villains? I can't do it anymore. Teacher, you wrote the protagonist's mentality problem so well. I've been crying. I can't even wipe away my tears.

It's very nice to look at. Because there are so many pavilions in the front, the characters feel quite full, and I can control them well both in daily life and in competitions. I really like Xiaogu, I feel warm every time I watch it! You like the character of the protagonist very much. The character is consistent throughout and the progress is accumulated bit by bit and not abrupt at all. The family aspect is also very good. Give the author a big five! [Laughing][laughing]

The characters in the article are vividly portrayed, vividly highlighting the personality characteristics of each person, further expressing the author's writing style, and making us readers deeply involved. The only regret is that the number of words is a bit inadequate. I hope the author can consider my critical comments and supplement the shortcomings of the book.

Super pretty! ! This is one of our favorite volleyball articles on Tomato! But the current rating is really not impressive, so I'm here to support my wife! Keep up the good work (≧ω≦)/!

What a group of cute little animals! The emotional lines make my heart warm, they are like a group of gentle and heart-warming little animals! Seeing Yuzuki getting better little by little, I'm really happy for him [crying] The writing style seems a little immature, but it's innocuous. Overall, it's good. I hope the competition can be written in more detail and more fluently, the better! Come on! [Blowing kiss]

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Fuck, this careless sourness, Fuck, it's awesome. Oh, it's so good-looking and delicious. Muamuamuamua author, you are my washing powder! Xiaohong and Xiaozhen are so cute, hey hey hey hey hey hey hey... Hey! Hey! Hey!

It's very interesting to watch. The author's descriptions are very cute. People who read it will feel soft in their hearts. The character of the protagonist is also soft, but he is also growing up [Blow kiss]

What a warm feeling

It's super beautiful, and the protagonist's character is very three-dimensional. I feel so sad [crying]

Very beautiful... Very delicate and everyone is cute! There is no praise for the main character or any description of his exquisite appearance! Well shaped. After watching Hart Soft... Owl, we love you! My brothers and sisters are so awesome too! Just one update every two days is not enough to see TT quickly catch up.

The characters are vividly drawn, which I personally think is very good.

It's beautiful, I started chasing it a long time ago [Sending my heart] @AYYAYYA Do you look familiar to me? I am number one on your reward list hehe

Very interesting, looking forward to the follow-up story

Not bad, pretty good-looking.

Super good-looking, tied in one go.

So pretty

It smells so good! ! ! I eat eat eat

Very nice! I can only say that fortunately, little Tuozhen came to Xiaogu from high school [sending my heart]

This book is pretty good, I really like the main character

It's really nice to watch, and the character descriptions henhaoq

This book is very beautiful and the writing style is very delicate.