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The protagonist is really so kind and gentle! Even if someone tries to kill your sister or even almost gets shot in the head, in the end you just beat them and give them a few punches as a lesson. It's really too shameless [making a face]

Hmm... In the early stage, I could feel that the author wanted to make Yu Qingchen more three-dimensional and have a reasonable reason to be exposed to the dark side of the academy, so he wrote some knives, but unfortunately due to lack of writing power, it had the opposite effect [face covering]. However, the writing style and penmanship in the second volume are much better, unlike the previous one which was a bit stiff and awkward. There are really few articles about super guns on Tomato. I would like to support the author. I hope the author can work hard [blowing kiss]

It's not too much to give yourself a five-star review [I learned]

The author actually writes well and handles the details well. There may be some flaws in the first few chapters or the lack of writing power when trying to write about the dark side of Academy City, which makes some parts feel very frustrating. But overall, it is a pretty good novel. I hope to update it as soon as possible and write more [Thoughts]

What a great work, I feel like one of the few that can write a fan work like this. The changes are very reasonable and wonderful, so that I can't see the abruptness that is common in fan works. In the early stage, it was indeed, um, there was a knife, the knife was ruthless, and it was true that Yu also suffered a lot, but I feel that the author really put his emotions into creating a character. It is more realistic and in line with the works of the forbidden world, especially when I feel that the author is really creating a real, complex protagonist with personal brilliance - Yu. Yu is contradictory and real, strong and fragile. He is a hero, but at the same time, Yu is still a child who pursues love. What I see is a A very complex character, or I feel that this work has really created a three-dimensional character that I feel is real enough to be remembered in my heart. I'm sorry that I don't have the language skills to express my feelings about this work clearly. In one sentence, it can be called a "work" in my heart. To look at and appreciate it, it is beautiful anyway. I don't know why the rating is low. It may be a bit weak and not a good novel, but it is definitely a good work. In my mind, it can be rated 9.0 For its writing style and conception. It is really amazing. Thank you to the author for presenting such a wonderful novel. It is really a very weighty work.

Although it is a fanfic, surprisingly it does not require any basic reading knowledge. I forgot about the original plot and enjoyed reading it.

I think this is one of the best Tomato Electromagnetic Gun fans, but it's just too few. I just ask the author to keep updating.

It was indeed a bit stiff and awkward at the beginning, but in the early stage, it was really written in the dark and dark style of Academy City. It may not be very friendly to children who like to read mindless and cool novels, but anyone who has read the current part of the forbidden novel should be able to understand it.

I can't get enough of this, I really like this kind of plot, it's not the kind of mindless and cool novel. Even though it's a tomato, I'm still with you. I'm starting to fill in the content of the New Testament for future plots, I hope you won't be disappointed!

Alas, there are too few forbidden books. Although there is still a lot of room for improvement in writing, I still support five stars.

It's pretty perfect. It's one of the few articles about super gun. I support it.

There are no shortcomings except for the slow update. Can the author please strengthen the second brother? I don't ask for a 50-50 match between the prisoner and the protagonist or a lower ranking. At least it is about the same as the angel (Gabriel) [Blow kiss]

The pacing in the early stage is too slow and a bit delayed, but overall it is very good, the plot development is generally reasonable, the male protagonist has a good personality, and there is no harem plot. After the plot officially starts later, it is still very comfortable to watch.

It's okay if you skip some chapters, otherwise your blood pressure will rise easily.

Although the emotional details of Qi Zhi and some characters are a bit uncomfortable, it is quite enjoyable to watch.

I skipped the first volume. I'm afraid that the image of Sister Yunyi will be too three-dimensional, so that her passing will make me less sad. The subsequent plot is getting better and better, and I think the handling of the Absolute Abilities Project is very beautiful. The Great Star Sacrifice chapter directly enshrines the gods. Actually, I originally wanted to wait until the Anbu War before writing a book review, but I was really tired of waiting [face covering] The big fight scenes are beautifully written and worthy of careful appreciation. At present, I think it is the No. 1 Tomato Magic fandom under the fixed deviation.

Personally, I feel that the writing in the Tomato fanfic is very good, and the faults do not hide the advantages. I hope it will not get lost [OK] [laughs] As for those who can't stand the deflated protagonist, they probably have read too many brainless novels, and they can't help it. This is a tomato. The protagonist has no memory after traveling through time, and is targeted again. It would be abnormal to play with those old foxes [smirking] [OK]

I think it's pretty good-looking

The first article may not be very good in terms of sensory perception, but the second article is much better.

I can't write anything lofty, but I enjoyed reading these few hours.

It's coming, it's a good book, don't worry about the low rating, in fact, patience is a god Come on, author, reach 20,000 words and give me a gift [smile][smile][smile]

It looks good! In the early stage, the protagonist suffered a lot due to his immaturity and was a bit shabby, but it's really good-looking.

Very good You Mo fanfic

Nice looking, but too "sweet"

I really need to support you when you write the forbidden novel.

After the personality correction punch, she looks much better

It's wonderful, the character description is very accurate and detailed, and the protagonist's image is very restored.

Very nice super cannon doujin٩(๑^o^๑)۶

It's a good super cool article, but it's a pity that so few people read it.

Not bad, it satisfies some of the things I want to do in the forbidden world