"Fighting is fun!" Fast-paced, not brainless, micro-swordsmanship, the heroine is quantum, decisive and cold-blooded
That day, a reminder sounded in everyone's heart.
Pray! Tremble! This game has come to reality! Rejoice, all of humanity has been chosen to become players!
This is where the never-ending nightmare begins.
Qi Ling, this spotless young man, finally changed from a cute nerd to the chosen evil god after making choices again and again.
Many people say that he is evil and crazy. Even on the other side of the ocean and at the end of the abyss, the terrifying legend of the "Blood Kirin" has been echoing for a long time.
But this is all slander.
Qi Ling understood that if someone had to break through the "divine prison".
"Then I am the salvation and the only justice in this world. At this point, I say goodbye to humanity."
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Protagonist abilities: Prophet + Spell + Melee Master + Magic Sword Holder + Mad Genius Scientist + Stalker...
The introduction is weak → Readers, please move to the main text, thank you for having me.
Reader comments
(Superior) Five-star Orange-, 5 items A
Sense of substitution B, attraction B, plug-in B, setting B, writing A, imagination A, rhythm A, main line B, character A, logic A
Balance Penalty: None
Personal feelings: Not invincible, IQ, rigorous logic.
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1. Recommended Evaluation Criteria•11th Edition
(1) Evaluation items (for personal reference only)
1. Sense of immersion: The attraction at the beginning and the foreshadowing of the world view.
2. Attraction: follow-up attraction, follow-up reading.
3. Plug-in: The golden finger is reasonable and functionally innovative.
4. Setting: background credibility, system self-consistency.
5. Writing style: Does each paragraph promote the development of the plot?
6. Brainstorming: Whether each small story is connected to the main line.
7. Rhythm: Are you tired of reading or feel that the word count is low?
8. Main line: Whether all plots revolve around the core goal.
9. Character design: Is the protagonist's behavior consistent and whether the supporting characters are impressive?
10. Logic: Whether making money, cultivating, etc. Are consistent with basic cognition.
11. Extra points deduction: balance the scores of the first 10 items, data, economy, structure, three perspectives, supporting roles, time, geography, knowledge...
(2) Evaluation grouping (for personal reference only)
1. First impression: sense of immersion at the beginning, subsequent attraction
2. World background: reasonable plug-ins and background settings
3. Content: Writing • Promote plot, imagination • Secondary innovation
4. Structure: Rhythm • Overall coherence, main line • Close to the center
5. Details: Persona·Character design, logic·Consistent with common sense
(3) Ratings of recommended evaluation items (for personal reference only)
1. Specially recommended S level (+4 points)
2. Recommended Grade A (+2 points)
3. Acceptable Level B (+1 point)
4. No points deducted, Grade C (0 points)
5. Level D is not recommended (-1 point)
6. Personally unacceptable level E (-3 points)
2. Rating of online articles
(1) Shangshang•Online articles that I personally can't find fault with
Standard: No B rating, attractiveness S
1. Five-star red+: 5 items S, 5 items A
2. Five-star red: 2 items S, 8 items A
3. Five-star red-: 10 items A
(2) Excellent Internet articles that I personally feel most people like
Criteria: Rare and fine book, no C-grade rating, appeal A
1. Five-star Orange+: Total score is 18 or above, and 8 items are A or above
2. Five-star orange: and the total score is level 16 or above
3. Five-star orange-: 5 items A
(3) Shang Xia·Personally feel high-level online articles
Standard: common high-quality books, no D-level evaluation, attractiveness B
1. Five-star Purple+: Level 14 or above, and 4 A or above
2. Five-star purple: Level 10 or above
3. Five-star purple-: 8 items B
(4) Intermediate to upper level • Internet articles that I feel are of a high standard
Standard: Personal recommendation, no E-rating, attractiveness C
1. Five-star blue+: total score is 6 or above, and 6 items are B or above
2. Five-star blue: total score is level 4 or above
3. Five-star green: 4 items B
(5) Medium •Standard online articles that I personally like
Standard: no poisonous spots, no bright spots, attractiveness C
1. Four-star green+: total score is level 2 or above, and no E-level evaluation
2. Four-star green: total score is level 1 or above
3. Four-star white: 10 items C
(6) The next one: Standard online articles that I don't like
1. Samsung White+: Level 0, and no E-level evaluation
2. Samsung white: -1 level
3. Samsung White-:-Level 2
(7) Middle and lower two • Internet articles that I personally do not recommend
1. Two-star white+: level -3
2. Two-star white: -Level 4
(8) Middle and lower three • Internet articles that are unacceptable to individuals
1. Two-star gray+: -5 levels
2. Two-star gray: -level 6
3. Two-star gray-:-Level 7
(9) There is a lot of room for improvement
1. One star +: level -8
2. One star: -Level 9
(10) Inferior·Silent
1. Sporadic: -Level 10
(11) Xiaxia·Silent
It's good to read, but the first dozen or so chapters, which end at the Colosseum, are not very interesting.
But everything that follows is to my taste, and I think it's starting to feel good from the perspective of the protagonist. From the humorous and ironic class in the dungeon, the genius plan of the mastermind behind the abyss, the genius negotiation concept of the Underworld Hunt, and the Zerg invasion part, I saw a lot of hell jokes. I think it looks great.
Finally, congratulations to the protagonist for not being a human anymore! ! !
It's so beautiful, even Fat Susu applauded after seeing it!
Yes, the author himself praises Amway crazily! ! !
If you feel any inconsistency, you can reply here. I will revise it little by little before the book test. As a novice writing a book, it is expected that the results will be poor, but if someone is happy reading it, they won't bother~
It's almost 60 chapters now, and it looks pretty good. If the main character doesn't get frustrated after the main plot, it should be very interesting.
It's pretty good, so far there's no problem
So far, it's really pretty and exciting.
It's quite interesting, but the chapters are a bit short, and the world view is obviously very big, which makes me want to fatten up a bit.
I had fun writing it😁I frowned when I saw it. Is it just a hobby to torture people?
It's interesting, it's exciting, and there's nothing particularly bad about it for the time being (there is still some, just one or two chapters, just get over it)
(Superior) Five-star Orange-, 5 items A Sense of substitution B, attraction B, plug-in B, setting B, writing A, imagination A, rhythm A, main line B, character A, logic A Balance Penalty: None Personal feelings: Not invincible, IQ, rigorous logic. ─────────────────── #The following comments are for personal reference only #My account cannot leave negative reviews. Negative reviews will be invisible. Anyway, they will all be given five stars. #The overall rating increases, and there will be no negative comments in the comments. 1. Recommended Evaluation Criteria•11th Edition (1) Evaluation items (for personal reference only) 1. Sense of immersion: The attraction at the beginning and the foreshadowing of the world view. 2. Attraction: follow-up attraction, follow-up reading. 3. Plug-in: The golden finger is reasonable and functionally innovative. 4. Setting: background credibility, system self-consistency. 5. Writing style: Does each paragraph promote the development of the plot? 6. Brainstorming: Whether each small story is connected to the main line. 7. Rhythm: Are you tired of reading or feel that the word count is low? 8. Main line: Whether all plots revolve around the core goal. 9. Character design: Is the protagonist's behavior consistent and whether the supporting characters are impressive? 10. Logic: Whether making money, cultivating, etc. Are consistent with basic cognition. 11. Extra points deduction: balance the scores of the first 10 items, data, economy, structure, three perspectives, supporting roles, time, geography, knowledge... (2) Evaluation grouping (for personal reference only) 1. First impression: sense of immersion at the beginning, subsequent attraction 2. World background: reasonable plug-ins and background settings 3. Content: Writing • Promote plot, imagination • Secondary innovation 4. Structure: Rhythm • Overall coherence, main line • Close to the center 5. Details: Persona·Character design, logic·Consistent with common sense (3) Ratings of recommended evaluation items (for personal reference only) 1. Specially recommended S level (+4 points) 2. Recommended Grade A (+2 points) 3. Acceptable Level B (+1 point) 4. No points deducted, Grade C (0 points) 5. Level D is not recommended (-1 point) 6. Personally unacceptable level E (-3 points) 2. Rating of online articles (1) Shangshang•Online articles that I personally can't find fault with Standard: No B rating, attractiveness S 1. Five-star red+: 5 items S, 5 items A 2. Five-star red: 2 items S, 8 items A 3. Five-star red-: 10 items A (2) Excellent Internet articles that I personally feel most people like Criteria: Rare and fine book, no C-grade rating, appeal A 1. Five-star Orange+: Total score is 18 or above, and 8 items are A or above 2. Five-star orange: and the total score is level 16 or above 3. Five-star orange-: 5 items A (3) Shang Xia·Personally feel high-level online articles Standard: common high-quality books, no D-level evaluation, attractiveness B 1. Five-star Purple+: Level 14 or above, and 4 A or above 2. Five-star purple: Level 10 or above 3. Five-star purple-: 8 items B (4) Intermediate to upper level • Internet articles that I feel are of a high standard Standard: Personal recommendation, no E-rating, attractiveness C 1. Five-star blue+: total score is 6 or above, and 6 items are B or above 2. Five-star blue: total score is level 4 or above 3. Five-star green: 4 items B (5) Medium •Standard online articles that I personally like Standard: no poisonous spots, no bright spots, attractiveness C 1. Four-star green+: total score is level 2 or above, and no E-level evaluation 2. Four-star green: total score is level 1 or above 3. Four-star white: 10 items C (6) The next one: Standard online articles that I don't like 1. Samsung White+: Level 0, and no E-level evaluation 2. Samsung white: -1 level 3. Samsung White-:-Level 2 (7) Middle and lower two • Internet articles that I personally do not recommend 1. Two-star white+: level -3 2. Two-star white: -Level 4 (8) Middle and lower three • Internet articles that are unacceptable to individuals 1. Two-star gray+: -5 levels 2. Two-star gray: -level 6 3. Two-star gray-:-Level 7 (9) There is a lot of room for improvement 1. One star +: level -8 2. One star: -Level 9 (10) Inferior·Silent 1. Sporadic: -Level 10 (11) Xiaxia·Silent
It's good to read, but the first dozen or so chapters, which end at the Colosseum, are not very interesting. But everything that follows is to my taste, and I think it's starting to feel good from the perspective of the protagonist. From the humorous and ironic class in the dungeon, the genius plan of the mastermind behind the abyss, the genius negotiation concept of the Underworld Hunt, and the Zerg invasion part, I saw a lot of hell jokes. I think it looks great. Finally, congratulations to the protagonist for not being a human anymore! ! !
It's so beautiful, even Fat Susu applauded after seeing it! Yes, the author himself praises Amway crazily! ! ! If you feel any inconsistency, you can reply here. I will revise it little by little before the book test. As a novice writing a book, it is expected that the results will be poor, but if someone is happy reading it, they won't bother~
It's almost 60 chapters now, and it looks pretty good. If the main character doesn't get frustrated after the main plot, it should be very interesting.
It's pretty good, so far there's no problem So far, it's really pretty and exciting.
It's quite interesting, but the chapters are a bit short, and the world view is obviously very big, which makes me want to fatten up a bit.
I had fun writing it😁I frowned when I saw it. Is it just a hobby to torture people?
It's interesting, it's exciting, and there's nothing particularly bad about it for the time being (there is still some, just one or two chapters, just get over it)