HPI Have a Little Secret

What a great writing style! The author's writing is so beautiful (screaming) The British style is very obvious, I feel like I am watching a very beautiful English translation [laughing] Every time I see the dialogue between the two little ones, I can't help but sigh, author, you have captured the essence of Slytherin. I love this kind of careerist [sending my heart] and the identity of the protagonist and the plot are also very interesting. I am looking forward to the next development [sending my heart] The interaction between the two is so interesting [loving] Finally! The author, please give me more updates! God knows how I feel when I discover a good article but finish it so quickly! Big cheers for the author! I will keep chasing it! O(≧v≦)o

Hello author, I am the parent of this account. Recently, my child has not been eating or talking, nor is he angry at all. He has no expression on his face, but I found that he only laughs and appears angry when he is reading Tomato novels. Later, I opened his mobile phone when he went to the toilet and found that he has been reading this book of yours recently, and I also found a critical illness notice under his pillow. His time is running out, and I can't do anything for him. The only thing I can do is I pray that the author will publish hundreds of chapters a day, right? I hope you can spend his last days with him and not let him die regretfully, please [please update]

I really like the two characters in your work. The two children depend on each other, support each other, and reach the top together. Although I still want to see a closer relationship between them, the author please update it [laughing]

🍅The comment section is old Riddler, I am not the Riddler anymore Senior Tom As soon as I read Chapter 20, I knew it was my favorite novel. The cute part is that the two puppets work hard to become human beings [laughing] and grow up together, and they even love each other on a daily basis. The comment section said that they were afraid of being abused later, but I think these two need to go through more. Only tempered gems can shine, and they can understand each other more deeply, and understand the relationship between the world and themselves. Ps. I really like this senior Tom! The description of the era background is also a rare level. I personally don't like HP's values ​​​​and don't like to read the plot of the original line. The second creation of a fan requires a new plot and something that the author wants to express. I saw it in this one, so I really don't care about OOC. The author's senior Tom and the protagonist have their own charm.

Very nice! [Full] The protagonist is a blood ally. He and Tom grew up together and have their own "ambitions". The setting is very interesting, the writing is very good, and the plot is unconventional! One wants to rule the magical world, and the other wants to be the monarch of magical animals (including but not limited to mermaids and centaurs). The protagonist is a loveless brain, two strong men, and they are inseparable companions. The author's writing style is very good, with the flavor of Western literature and mythological elements (such as the three goddesses of destiny and Avalon). If you like this kind of writing, you are in luck. I highly recommend you to read it. It is really beautiful! It's not embarrassing or inconsistent, and the more you look at it, the more you look at it. "My territory is vast, and yours will be yours to rule freely." "You will get your wish, future king of mermaids." "Of course, he will not forget his fellow travelers." (Ps, the author is a little slow in updating)

It looks good. It felt so good when Sauron said to Tom that it was just us.

It's good to read. There are very few articles about Pingzi and Tom, and even fewer are updated steadily. They are super rare articles. Moreover, Sauron learns to love little by little, and holds Tom without being completely lost. They are each other's anchor in this world, and their desire for exclusive possession of each other really makes me cry to death [almost crying]. It's so painful to me.

It's very interesting. The main line of the article is tenable. It is based on the blood alliance of ggad. It's very interesting. The writing is also very good. It's very addictive. It's the top HP fanfic I've read on Tomato. The emotional line is also very easy to understand. It's this kind of strange love, or It can also be called abnormal love. Either live together or die together. You are my possession. I give you infinite tolerance and patience. I tell you everything about me. You must stand by my side wholeheartedly. We are each other's special people and will never accept "betrayal". This is how I feel now. I couldn't get this kind of forced love before. After reading this article, I realized that I am so good at eating. I am very much looking forward to the subsequent plot. It doesn't matter even if it involves abuse. On the contrary, I feel that the abuse has increased the bond, fate, and even love between them. Say whatever comes to mind, my sentences don't make sense, please forgive me, I'm strongly amway

This book blew me away, it was so relevant and exquisite! [Cry][cry] It greatly depicts the growth environment of Tom Marvolo Riddle in a three-dimensional and vivid way. Sauron and Tom both grew up under the gunfire of war. Regardless of the wizarding world or the Muggle world, everyone was afraid of the carnage of war. The background of the environment they grew up in was a mixture of gloom, death, and despair. No matter who they were, people in this era seemed to have such sad souls. In such a gloomy environment, the peace of Hogwarts is a pure white land, warm and longing. Even Dumbledore hid the pain of the times and the indescribable sadness... The characters of Tom and Sauron are reasonably terrifying. Tom has seen the mutilated limbs under gunfire, bloody and desperate, so he is afraid of death; Sauron is a blank sheet of paper that understands nothing. After being stained with Tom's background, his soul has a clean foundation after being exposed to the kindness and "love" from his father. Oh my gosh! Watching it made me feel excited, yet depressed. That era was so terrible. There was wailing and despair everywhere, which was suppressed in my heart. I couldn't explain what it felt like. The sadness was indescribable. It could be sympathy or fear. Words are so magical! [Cry]

It's very beautiful. The whole logic, character design, and content are all very good. Please update it soon.

It's good to read, but it's currently being serialized. Can you please not abandon the book? Woohoo, I'm very afraid that it will never be finished as I read it. The character settings are very interesting, the writing is not jerky, it is more natural and delicate, and the character of the original protagonist is also very cute. I really recommend it.

It's quite good. In fact, it was mainly because I was too obsessed with reading novels at the time. Many of them didn't have ratings. This book was already at my uncle's house about a year or two ago. It was tied at that time, and then the author stopped updating it. I just put it away without reading it. I really couldn't find the book today. I found it when I was looking through the bookcase. I wanted to see if I had any ratings. When I found out that I didn't, I rated it by the way. I thought you had given up on the author.

I'm so looking forward to the sixth and seventh grade, write it quickly [I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying] The author is so slow to update, I won't have any books to read [I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying] It's simply not too good-looking [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]

This one is really good-looking, with Tom Riddle on the left and the original male protagonist on the right. The two male protagonists are quite sweet, but there are a bit few people, and the updates are not very fast. They need to be nurtured.

Author, believe me, persistence is victory, it's very interesting to watch, as long as it doesn't collapse in the later stage, the plot is very attractive now [Love] I like it hehe

Rouse's writing style is simply master-level, and the setting of "Double Crazy Batch" is really touching.

It's great. It's like a long stream of water but with a murderous intention underneath. You can try it. Tom's character design is basically okay. If you feel 0CC, it may be because of the different perspective. In short, it ranks among the top among the HP fanfics I read.

(づ￣3￣)づ╭❤～Like, praise, praise, I will always follow you. It's been a long time since I've seen a book that suits my taste, [Salute] (ω<)★Extreme pull, it smells so good, spin in circles, scatter flowers, and dance! It's just a little too little. I've been saving up to read it for almost half a month, but it's still not enough (o_ _)ﾉ Please add more, please break out, please do your best (ˉ▽￣~) ~~

The author's writing style is very good, and it also allows readers to understand the protagonist's mental journey and a sense of soul. These are built step by step. The author is very careful in the creation. I like the settings of the novel content and the various backgrounds. I like it very much. Come on, the author. I love you [love]

I particularly like the author's writing style, and, mainly, this book is crazy on my XP

It pokes me too much. Author, I declare that you are my god. It's so for my liking. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

It's very interesting. The overall tone is relaxed and happy. The characters are not that restored, but the characters get along very comfortably. I look forward to the update.

Very well written teacher! Two children who didn't know how to love, but after meeting each other, couldn't suppress the burning emotions in their hearts and tried to express their love with everything they understood. Oh, so romantic, so beautiful.

It feels super good-looking, and the protagonist has a lot of personality. At present, it seems that the protagonist is not a good person, but a different kind of bad guy. The two of them, Liddell and Liddell, are simply evil couples [admiration]. The relationship between the two is also very well written. Liddell is also a bad guy without whitewashing. It is in line with the original work and did not write him as a virgin. I highly recommend you to watch the two of them. Now they are simply rotten and selfish. ❤️The male protagonist is very personal and charming.

The writing is really good and the setting is very interesting. It is a book that respects my brain. I found a treasure. I haven't finished reading it yet, so I can't guess what will happen next. Every day I wonder how Sauron is between life and death. I can't guess how the two of them will be entangled throughout their lives. I'm so curious. Finally, I hope Tom won't be disfigured. After all, Harry Potter's appearance is the limit, which is such a pity.

Damn, even though there was a lot of foreshadowing, I forgot about the previous ones when I saw the latter part, but the protagonist is so appealing to me. This pair of villains is so exciting. I hope it can be completed smoothly. Wow🥹🌹The teacher wrote it very well and the writing is very good. I like this book so much. I am itching to wait for the sequel while waiting for updates. I read the comments about the plot arrangement and spoilers. I am looking forward to the story of seventh grade. Xiaosaoyiqing

Hehe, it looks good, but I feel that it may be a bit sadistic and scary later on. Please, please, don't be too sadistic, but I think the author's world view is still very good. The foreshadowing in the front is very good. It is very interesting and the writing is very good.

It's a beautiful treasure book (๑•.•๑) Your writing style is very good, and you can see that it is very interesting (I burst into tears). You are also very well-read. The ups and downs of the storyline are very novel, and the original characters are also very vivid. The interaction between the two is very easy-going and not abrupt, and very sweet. I like it❤️🉑 I will follow the teacher's conclusion👏👍🫰◝(⑅•ᴗ•⑅)◜..°♡ (I will follow up with a good long review when it is finished🥰)

Hello, author. I like this book very much, and it is currently at chapter 56. I have a question. The introduction says that there may be Hader, so will this book cover Harry's generation?

Wow, I really like this pair of CPs. The author's writing is really good.