The Demon Book of the Ending Law: I Learned the Skill of Killing Gods by Playing with Cats

I will fulfill my promise to read your book, and the book review is also here Let's talk about a few common mistakes newcomers make: 1. There are some problems with the overall logic, which should be a problem with the outline. When the protagonist saw the monster for the first time, he directly said "Is this weird?" I thought this was a foreshadowing. The protagonist would have some knowledge about monsters. After watching it for a while, I found out that there was no one. There was another person who directly said rotten corpse. When seeing this kind of monster for the first time, no one would think about what to call it unless it is very distinctive, such as a paper man. When they go to the library and gymnasium, the protagonist and the male protagonist talk to other people and take action in a few words. This is obviously not in line with this kind of mentality similar to the advent of the apocalypse. Many people cannot accept the sudden arrival of terrifying things, and will be more or less resistant to thinking about fighting these monsters. 2. Take it with you in one stroke Many things in the article are mentioned in one stroke. Generally, one thing ends in a few lines, including looking for books, talking about it, etc., Resulting in the whole book being too fast-paced and without a sense of substitution. The description of the environment can be strengthened. For example, the death of the girl in Chapter 5 is good. Of course, it can be expanded a bit, such as the performance of the girl's birth. Desire, you can't just write that she said she didn't want to die, you can write, "She grabbed her own throat with one hand, staggered close to XX beside her, stretched out her hand, and whispered her last cry for help: 'I... Don't want... To die... Save...' Before she could finish her words, she had already lost her last breath." 3. Too idealistic To put it simply, this means taking it for granted. You can write whatever you want, as if there are no barriers. The protagonist's ideas are always quick and action is always correct. What is written is too easy to be seen. A typical example is "I am playing with my brain, you give me 3s talent". This is also what the author wants to write. The protagonist thinks that the villain can think of this, so he thinks of it. What the protagonist thinks is what it is. This will lose the point of interest and make people have no interest in investing in the book.