海贼的巅峰！从罗杰团实习生开始

The relationship between Roger and Roger, who is also a father and friend, was so well developed, especially when I visited the prison at the end. I have read so many pirate fanfics, and the last one that made me feel so good was Mario [I almost cried]

It's very beautiful, and there's absolutely no sense of time travel. I can say this as a native pirate, but I also have a modern sense of joy. I just feel that I didn't save some of the characters in the original work, which is a bit regretful.

So far it's very interesting, this is the Pirates fanfic I've read. The characters are most consistent with the original work, and the language and style of work are both pretty good. Not so indecisive, nor like a mad dog that kills everyone on sight. It's everyone else's fault you say, but there are lives under your hands. Nowadays, many fans are acting like crazy. I also like Pirates because the protagonist group doesn't kill anyone, and there are adventures and friendships that can be completely entrusted to the companions. I don't know what other people have watched while watching One Piece. When it comes to super powers, many comic books and movies are about super powers. Why do you have to watch One Piece? It's freedom, companionship, adventure, dreams. These elements are the real charm of One Piece. How dark the world is, the protagonist group faces the impossible again and again without flinching at all. The main character in the group wasn't injured, and no one said anything about it. Ah, it's not my fault the world is too dark. I can't be too merciful, ah, so no matter who it is, it's okay for me to kill anyone. There's something wrong with his fucking brain. These people were dragged away from Internet addiction when they were young, right? Are their brains broken? The author has done a very good job in this regard. So far, it is very restored to the original work and can well reflect his own things. The scale is just right, it can kill people, but not indiscriminately. You can help others, or whatever you do, it's all about yourself. There's no need to bother. If you are interested, you should participate even if there is no benefit. It's just that the protagonist's combat power is a bit too exaggerated, but it's also limited. It would be just right if it was more difficult to face the three major players in the future. But this is a personal opinion, the author can just read it and ignore it. The reason is that at a certain distance, the Shining Fruit will teleport. The speed difference is definitely not big. From a distance, the Shining Fruit is no different from teleportation. Even if the big bear who is closest to teleportation comes, or Ioka may not be able to escape Kizaru's attack. It's over, that's all╮(•́ω•̀)╭

Absolutely domineering! ! ! ! ! It's pretty (づ￣3￣)づ╭❤～

Good-looking, very good-looking, a highly recommended novel about pirates

It's really good-looking, a very good pirate fanfic

I have watched it for a long time and I really like the character of the protagonist. There is nothing poisonous about it (Xiao Sha has not been transgendered [laughing evilly])

It's great. I love watching it. It's a pity that I discovered it too early. How can I finish it in such a small amount? I finished it in half a day. What the hell? Let the foreigner next door see you and you won't be able to write a book. Write fast and hard, 100 chapters a day!

The characters are very good, good reviews

The writing is good, the style of painting is basically consistent with One Piece, and the coolness is just right. The character's personality is quite outstanding, but the positioning of the protagonist is a bit vague. At least I can't understand what the protagonist is planning to do now. The rest can be regarded as excellent. It is a good little white novel.

It's very consistent with the characters, tone, etc. Of the original work.

It's a rare opportunity for Tomato to read the latest chapter of the book in one breath

This is a breath of fresh air among One Piece fan fiction. It's not embarrassing. Anyway, it's one of the best ones I've read so far. Just like this. But I still hope that the protagonist can be kind and pursue some pursuits, such as helping the revolutionary army. Because the revolutionary army cannot achieve great things and has many shortcomings, it can be written more.

Start by cultivating books and giving them reviews, fearing that you will die from them. Hurry up and rate it. Others you see can do the same, and you can also get free gifts. There are fewer and fewer good Pirates fandoms, especially there are too many discontinued ones and they need to be taken care of.

A very good pirate novel, a very good pirate novel, refreshing and clear, with basically no poisonous points or mentally retarded plots. The plot of the clone in Chapter 20 is a matter of opinion. Anyway, let's deduct the star first.

It's pretty good. The main character is quite normal, and all the choices and details are quite to my liking. For example, I didn't want to take too much care when I saw Tangtang's Oden getting off the ship, and it's difficult to change Oden's character. But for those who have been on the ship together for a while, I would like to remind you to properly handle the captain's posthumous son Ace. After all, Garp is pure free-range, and he just doesn't know how to do it. It's a disaster, but it's weird to keep Ace near a red light street. Although the living conditions are top-notch, it's okay to be too lazy to care about the secrets of the World Government and O'Hara's affairs. I just saved a Robin. I'm used to not saving it, so it doesn't matter whether I save it or not. I also have a good relationship with the red-haired Bucky. There's nothing toxic about it to me. Somewhat rare in tomatoes, five stars

The top pirate novel has no shortcomings except that the update is too slow. Of course, some people may feel that the protagonist is a bit cold-blooded. I have to take back what I said, this book deserves five stars before the protagonist joins the Valley of the Gods, only four stars after that, and only three stars after he starts making Dark Nika.

A very good pirate novel. I came here after reading the fan series on Bilibili.

This is the best One Piece book I have ever read. Whether it is in terms of character setting, world structure, or negotiation, it is quite reasonable. Come on, come on, strive for ten updates a day

Well, I haven't seen this type of pirate article in a while. It's not like you're invincible at the beginning, okay? Although it can still be seen that the gear is broken now Yes, but overall, this is a relatively good novel.

It's okay to read this book, it's very well written.

Not bad, not bad. It's been a long time since I've seen such an eye-catching pirate fanfic. I hope the author can keep up the good work. Also, please don't overdo it. It's boring to kill everyone with a single blow [laughing]

This is the first time I found such a great pirate novel on Tomato. I always feel the same feeling as the original novel while reading. This is the original pirate novel. It's really great.

The battle scenes in this book are very beautiful, and the details of the battles described are also invincible. In my opinion, it is invincible. It has been a long time since I have encountered such a wonderful book. If you like to read it, don't miss it! [Sinister smile]

The protagonist boarded the ship of the Pirate King at the beginning and rose rapidly with his super talent. Although there are some bad points in this book, such as the fact that Lao Sha is a female, it does not hinder his good looks. Come on, author, take good care of you!

Although it is a new book, the author knows how to play jokes and does not delay when it is time to fight. The number of words is smaller, but I really recommend it.

It is a non-systematic invincible novel, which is great, and it is very consistent with the feeling of a fun protagonist. There is no Madonna plot, and the plot is more reasonable. It is not disgusting and boring to watch without brains, but there is room for thinking. However, there are big jumps in the plot, such as training and so on. It can be seen that we want to get to the original main line of the animation as soon as possible, but there is a risk of being shortened and it may end quickly. This is also a common problem of invincible novels. I personally hope that the story will be longer, three or four hundred chapters? Maybe five or six hundred chapters. After all, even if the article is too short, no matter how well written it is, there will still be the worry of not being able to read enough.

It's really pretty. Although some small details are not ok. Like the little Satyr in Impel Down appeared too early. But the writing is really good. However, the protagonist's gun has been used less recently. But there should be more later, after all, they are used for cooking.

How should I put it? It may be because of the plot. In addition, the setting is strong and emotional, and it is heart-warming. There are no messy superfluous settings and plots. It is smooth and enjoyable to read, and there are no poisonous points. It is much better than most One Piece fans. It is very worth watching. I can't stand it anymore. When will it end? ! !

It looks good, and I feel that the protagonist is a very standard strong figure in One Piece. Whether it is fighting or daily life, he has a lot of imagination and writing support. As long as he writes normally and doesn't suddenly go crazy and make some abstract poisonous points, it can definitely become a masterpiece in Tomato Pirates.