[No System + one heroine + urban high martial arts + beast taming]
At the final moment, the time-reversal spell succeeded. As I stared blankly at the ceiling, the image in my mind was her half-mutated, half-human face, and the smile at the corner of her mouth.
For ten whole years, who could I trust? Who should I trust? What could I do? What should I do?
Zhong Huaifeng returned to the past, back to when he was eighteen, but he was lost. In this era on the verge of a spiritual energy resurgence, he knew what was about to happen in the future. But in his former life, he had become a manipulated slave, ending up an enemy of the world. He didn’t know whom he could trust, or whether what he once knew was true or false.
Then he saw her at eighteen, her image overlapping with the figure who had stood between him and danger at the end. Perhaps this second chance wasn’t for him to save himself, but to save her.
Spiritual energy had been fading for a thousand years, and no one knew why. The technological industry of human civilization, built on spiritual energy as its power source, became useless as that energy dwindled. By now, humanity had no choice but to develop fossil-fuel technology again. But in the year Zhong Huaifeng turned eighteen, spiritual energy began to return. Along with it came high-ranking spirit beasts, shapeshifting creatures made of spiritual energy. The rarest spirit beasts became prizes coveted by nations around the world.
You call yourselves gods? Then let’s see if you really are all-knowing and all-powerful!
At present, the writing is quite fluent. It is not a mindless and exaggerated "school beauty" and "Long Aotian" type character who really protects IQ. The language feels a bit dry; The narrative feels a bit monotonous. Since the author emphasizes the mistakes of the protagonist and the ordinaryness of the heroine, I think it may be possible to show the value and character of her unique soul in the details of the character's psychology and behavior. For example, the heroine's ordinary life suddenly changes, and power and knowledge that were unimaginable in the past are approaching her. Is it more attractive to depict the inner fluctuations and feedback of the character with more delicate strokes? Of course, the above also applies to other characters. For example, the "blacksmith" couple accepted the extremely high trust and completely exclusive deal offered by the male protagonist in a very short space. Is it enough to just rely on the sentence "I have checked your credit"? I haven't read much yet. It's my humble opinion. I look forward to the changes in the following articles to refute my expression.
It's a really good read about beast control. I've read a lot of beast control stories. The subject matter is very novel. I was a little put off by reading the introduction. I didn't expect the content to be so good. I didn't say it was particularly mindless and fun. The protagonist has his own thoughts. But as a beast control novel, beast control is like an auxiliary. It's more about borrowing power. It can't be summoned to fight much. I hope the author can let the male protagonist let go of his worries and cooperate with Yinglong as soon as possible. Overall, it is very good and worth reading.
As a new author, the writing is very good [like it], the logic is smooth, and the emotional lines are well described. It would be better to optimize the dialogue description. It is best not to just write the dialogue directly after all the names of the people and colons.
The novel is good, the emotional description is passable, and the explanation of cultivation is quite advanced and I can't understand it... Chapter 9 focuses on the questions, and I quickly liked it. The writing is a bit rusty, but this novel has a lot of room for improvement.
It's very good. There are no mindless taunts or cheeky jokes. There is no school beauty dog-licking drama. It's very comfortable to listen to. Keep up the hard work~
I support you, but after reading it for a while, I almost forgot about the front part of the book 🤦
It's very well written, keep it up.
There is potential and room for improvement
Wow, I just realized it was updated 12 days ago. Ah, ah, it's hard to find gold in the sand, say QAQ