[No system + single female protagonist + urban martial arts + beast control]
At the last moment, the time-traveling magic was successful, and she looked blankly at the ceiling. What came to mind was her half-alien, half-human face, and the smile on her lips.
For ten years, who can I trust? Who should I trust? What can I do? What should I do?
Zhong Huaifeng went back to the past, when he was 18 years old, but he was confused. In this era of imminent psychic recovery, he knew what was going to happen in the future, but he had become a manipulated slave and ended up being an enemy of the world. He didn't know who he could trust, and he didn't know whether what he once knew was right or wrong.
Until he saw the 18-year-old her, overlapping the figure that finally blocked him, maybe this chance to come back is not to save himself, but to save her.
Psychic energy has been decaying for thousands of years, and no one knows the reason. The scientific and technological industry developed in the human world based on psionic energy has become useless as psychic energy decays. Until now, mankind can only re-develop fossil energy technology. But when Zhong Huaifeng turned 18, spiritual energy began to recover, but with it came high-level spiritual beasts, a kind of mimic creature composed of spiritual energy, and rare spiritual beasts became the target of competition among various countries.
You claim to be gods, right? Let's see if you are truly omniscient and omnipotent!
Reader comments
At present, the writing is quite fluent. It is not a mindless and exaggerated "school beauty" and "Long Aotian" type character who really protects IQ. The language feels a bit dry;
The narrative feels a bit monotonous. Since the author emphasizes the mistakes of the protagonist and the ordinaryness of the heroine, I think it may be possible to show the value and character of her unique soul in the details of the character's psychology and behavior. For example, the heroine's ordinary life suddenly changes, and power and knowledge that were unimaginable in the past are approaching her. Is it more attractive to depict the inner fluctuations and feedback of the character with more delicate strokes?
Of course, the above also applies to other characters. For example, the "blacksmith" couple accepted the extremely high trust and completely exclusive deal offered by the male protagonist in a very short space. Is it enough to just rely on the sentence "I have checked your credit"?
I haven't read much yet. It's my humble opinion. I look forward to the changes in the following articles to refute my expression.
As a new author, the writing is very good [like it], the logic is smooth, and the emotional lines are well described. It would be better to optimize the dialogue description. It is best not to just write the dialogue directly after all the names of the people and colons.
It's a really good read about beast control. I've read a lot of beast control stories. The subject matter is very novel. I was a little put off by reading the introduction. I didn't expect the content to be so good. I didn't say it was particularly mindless and fun. The protagonist has his own thoughts. But as a beast control novel, beast control is like an auxiliary. It's more about borrowing power. It can't be summoned to fight much. I hope the author can let the male protagonist let go of his worries and cooperate with Yinglong as soon as possible. Overall, it is very good and worth reading.
The novel is good, the emotional description is passable, and the explanation of cultivation is quite advanced and I can't understand it... Chapter 9 focuses on the questions, and I quickly liked it. The writing is a bit rusty, but this novel has a lot of room for improvement.
There is potential and room for improvement
It's very well written, keep it up.
I support you, but after reading it for a while, I almost forgot about the front part of the book [face covering]
It's very good. There are no mindless taunts or cheeky jokes. There is no school beauty dog-licking drama. It's very comfortable to listen to. Keep up the hard work~
Wow, I just realized it was updated 12 days ago. Ah, ah, it's hard to find gold in the sand, say QAQ
At present, the writing is quite fluent. It is not a mindless and exaggerated "school beauty" and "Long Aotian" type character who really protects IQ. The language feels a bit dry; The narrative feels a bit monotonous. Since the author emphasizes the mistakes of the protagonist and the ordinaryness of the heroine, I think it may be possible to show the value and character of her unique soul in the details of the character's psychology and behavior. For example, the heroine's ordinary life suddenly changes, and power and knowledge that were unimaginable in the past are approaching her. Is it more attractive to depict the inner fluctuations and feedback of the character with more delicate strokes? Of course, the above also applies to other characters. For example, the "blacksmith" couple accepted the extremely high trust and completely exclusive deal offered by the male protagonist in a very short space. Is it enough to just rely on the sentence "I have checked your credit"? I haven't read much yet. It's my humble opinion. I look forward to the changes in the following articles to refute my expression.
As a new author, the writing is very good [like it], the logic is smooth, and the emotional lines are well described. It would be better to optimize the dialogue description. It is best not to just write the dialogue directly after all the names of the people and colons.
It's a really good read about beast control. I've read a lot of beast control stories. The subject matter is very novel. I was a little put off by reading the introduction. I didn't expect the content to be so good. I didn't say it was particularly mindless and fun. The protagonist has his own thoughts. But as a beast control novel, beast control is like an auxiliary. It's more about borrowing power. It can't be summoned to fight much. I hope the author can let the male protagonist let go of his worries and cooperate with Yinglong as soon as possible. Overall, it is very good and worth reading.
The novel is good, the emotional description is passable, and the explanation of cultivation is quite advanced and I can't understand it... Chapter 9 focuses on the questions, and I quickly liked it. The writing is a bit rusty, but this novel has a lot of room for improvement.
There is potential and room for improvement
It's very well written, keep it up.
I support you, but after reading it for a while, I almost forgot about the front part of the book [face covering]
It's very good. There are no mindless taunts or cheeky jokes. There is no school beauty dog-licking drama. It's very comfortable to listen to. Keep up the hard work~
Wow, I just realized it was updated 12 days ago. Ah, ah, it's hard to find gold in the sand, say QAQ