Damn It, the Elixir Is so Effective That I Will Become a Bad Alchemist.

The setting is quite novel, but the writing is very direct. It is a lot of vernacular that directly narrates the story. When I read it, I felt that the writing was not that good, but although it was weird to read, the plot was pretty good.

There is nothing excessive, the progress is very fast, everyone has a long mouth, both the offense and the reception are normal, sweet, not aggressive, and very interesting, not a spoiled wife, both the offense and the reception are responsible, in general, there is no poisonous point, if you like to watch cookies, you can rest assured to watch it

The overall setting is quite good, but it feels like a detailed outline. The whole story is like running at 10x speed, ⏩⏩⏩⏩⏩⏩⏩⏩⏩⏩, the plot is super fast, and then it ends. [Shocked][shocked][shocked]

It ended so quickly, the whole story felt like it was at double speed. There was no big villain, and the plot was quite interesting. There was no abuse at all. The relationship was established quickly. It was a great read and there was no irritating plot.

It's a relatively new theme [laughing evilly], and the young couple is also very loving [sending hearts] If the author's writing style was better, I think it would be pretty good [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Super beautiful, highly recommended! ! ! !

Meow, meow, meow, I'd like to give some encouragement to new authors. I've already finished reading it, and I'm just typing it now. I consider myself too lazy.

Good-looking, super good-looking

It's really beautiful

Looks good, come on

Very good, very beautiful

Good, good, good, good, look good

It's okay, relatively bland

It ended a little too quickly~

Nice! Love watching! Not enough! ! ｡:.ﾟヽ(*´∀`)ﾉﾟ.:｡

I don't quite know how to describe it, but it's pretty cool anyway.

Damn it, Qi Ling hasn't met his parents, and his parents don't know he has a grandson (although maybe only his mother cares about it)

Like, it's so wicked, I like it, hahahahahaha

It's also very acceptable. Uh, no, I think this book is good. On the contrary, this book is very good.

It's really an evil green-headed fish [face covering] [laughing]. Although the previous plot feels a bit fast and it's not an orthodox fairy tale, I just think it's good to watch.

It's good to watch, the first part is more funny, but it's good to watch haha, especially the scene where the classmate falls off the horse, it's so funny.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, and the flowers are sprinkled at the end! ! ! 🥳🌸🌸🌸

Hahahaha, I don't know if this book is the kind of madness you want? But I like it very much, it's very joyful to watch. [Laughs] Really highly recommended, brothers and sisters, come and take a look [cool]

Can the author publish more chapters? [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts] The first lady is so beautiful and the story is interesting

Beautiful! It just ended too suddenly

It looks great, why is it rated so low? ? Come on author, highly recommended, highly recommended, sweet

I like the subject matter, the writing is average and I can read it, I quite like the character of the main character, and it has an awkward side story.

It's so good. I finished it in less than a day. The author continues to publish similar funny novels. The more the merrier.

This is the first time I read this style of writing. It's quite good. I support it!

Nice! The side effects are so funny! Hahaha