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A very good Demon Slayer fanfic, basically non-toxic. It can be eaten with confidence. If there is a problem with the heroine, the author's description of the heroine's emotional line is very delicate, and there is no brainless inference. The protagonist is also hard-working and talented, unsystematic, and has multiple heroines. Currently, it is certain that the three Butterfly sisters, Mitsuri, and the two daughters of Ubuya Shiki Yaoya are also possible. If you can't accept it, you can consider the multiple female protagonists as a poisonous point. Anyway, this new book is indeed excellent.

I finished reading it in two days. Overall, this book did not ruin the original work. There was no lag and no disaster in seconds. The combat power was very reasonable. At the same time, it saved the elder brother Shinobu. The most important thing is the relationship between the protagonist and the heroines. It is so sweet. Oh, sweet hair. (Qiuqiu. Com kills me) is a really good-looking Demon Slayer fanfic. The only regret is that it ended in a hurry for various reasons, and many parts were not expanded on. But at least it is a perfect ending for me. I am very happy and satisfied.

Having multiple heroines in the harem is a test of writing skills, but this novel is obviously very well controlled in terms of emotional description and plot development. As a fan of harem novels, I have to give this five points to everything. [Praise]

It's very good-looking, and the protagonist is gentle and kind. More importantly, he didn't reproduce the knife in the original work, so I have a good impression of him. However, this book has multiple female protagonists, which I don't really like, but I can accept it. If you can't accept it, don't come to see it.

@Pai Mingshang Author, look at me, look at me, I will give you some suggestions on the names of moves: Swallow Blowing Snow, Ice Sky Mist Flower Slash, Frost Slash Ice Flower, Snow Mist Lotus Flower, Burial Ice Flower. [Understood][Understood][Understood] The book is very interesting. I like the main character's character. Come on.

Yes, yes, Kanae's novel is good, but I hope you will continue to work hard and never update it. Update a few more chapters, preferably four or five chapters a day without updating it. I still like it very much as a harem fan. I hope you won't update it. Update more and don't let me down my love! ! ! !

How can I put it this way? I have read a lot of Demon Slayer doujins. This book is my favorite for the atmosphere of the male and female protagonists in it. I won't comment on other aspects because many other fans have already commented in detail. To be honest, I couldn't calm down for a long time after reading it. Maybe it was the contrast between the cruelty of the original work. I was really immersed in this book and couldn't put it down for a long time. After reading this book, I smoked one after another on the balcony. I even envied the bond between the male protagonist and the female protagonist. The most immersive part was the last daily chapter, which I couldn't put down. My most selfish wish is that the author can write a separate book dedicated to the daily life of Butterfly House. I don't have enough words to fully express my feelings. It's hard to explain the beauty to you [crying]

This book is very well written. Among all the demon slayer fics I have read, eight of them are Megumi who died and the other two turned into ghosts. I feel like it is impossible to defeat Shinobu without writing her to death. There is also a single female character who knows that Megumi is Shinobu's only one but still writes her to death, just like letting the male protagonist take advantage of it. It's really boring... If you can continue this seriously, I probably won't want to read other Demon Slayer fandoms. [Like][Like]

I finished reading it in one day and felt very good! The protagonist is strong and gentle, and he is a Chinese medicine doctor who has his own kindness in helping others. He plays a significant role in the plot, unlike some books that use the guise of Chinese medicine and have no effect at all in the middle and later stages. Overall, it's really good, and it gets better and better as you look at it from behind.

It's good, but the male protagonist doesn't seem to be a time traveler, but he behaves quite modernly. It's a little fragmented, but it's innocuous. As for the knife breaking, it can only be said that his ability is limited (no hook or script), as long as he can save this generation of Demon Slayers from having a good ending. Okay, he should be a time traveler. He has been a young man for 12 years. He recognizes the names of the characters and can cook modern cuisine. But sometimes he doesn't act like someone who has traveled back in time. It's a bit awkward. It should be about the plot later. I'll throw it away and watch the performance.

This book is really nice. It is not like the emotional line of the protagonist in some novels, which just accepts every one when it comes. It seems very urgent, and it is not as warm as the long-lasting relationship. On the contrary, the emotional lines in the book are laid out very slowly. They came together naturally after going through many ups and downs and spending a long time together. Especially in the last few chapters, you can see the tranquility and relaxed atmosphere of daily life in the words, as well as the warmth of the flowing water, which makes it particularly comfortable to read. The improvement of the protagonist's combat power depends entirely on his hard training day after day and his solid progress step by step. It also made up for many regrets in Demon Slayer and gave all pillars a happy ending.

It's a good read. I love reading it. I'll read more. This book makes me even more sure that tomatoes are not red. Seriously speaking, the pace is tight and non-toxic. It may be a bit watery at times, but it's okay. The characters are also portrayed quite well. Highly recommended.

Nice! The emotional descriptions are delicate and the characters are well-developed! I just hope that the harem will be greatly expanded! Take down the three sisters of Butterfly House, Mitsuri, Midouzi, Hinai, Rika, Tamayo, Xiaokui, etc.!

It's really good, but a little short. There are a lot of foreshadowings that haven't been filled in. But this book makes people want to read it, and the combat power is not particularly broken. Some of the protagonists of Demon Slayer fandoms can almost casually kill people in an instant, which makes people not want to read it at all. So this book is excellent in my opinion

Great! Super awesome! ! ! I approve of this book, it is the most enjoyable fanfic I have ever read. The kindness and gentleness of the protagonist, and the finale where everyone survives, feel like they are about to be turned into ashes. The only shortcoming is that it is short, but there is nothing I can do about it. After all, the author has to work hard, so I understand.

Oops, this book is very good, but there are too few. I wonder if the author can see this comment. I hope I can write it longer, or write about diversity. Well, I have also read a lot of fan fiction. For example, there is a salted fish with a score of 9.7, Which is not bad. It talks about traveling to another parallel time and space, which is the main line of the original story. I hope the author can do this too. Otherwise, it feels like there is too little and it is not enjoyable to read. From the bottom of my heart, I feel that this book is well written. Or write about the protagonist traveling to other places, which is a diversification point. But cheers for the author!

I think it's pretty good. It's considered the first echelon of Demon Slayer fan fiction. Don't give up, author! The reason why you can't become popular is because you haven't updated it, and you haven't watched it too much, which makes you really depressed and panicked.

This book is the first one I read after I started reading Tomato. After finishing Demon Slayer, the ending was too tragic and I felt very empty. I just found a fan and started chasing. I had never read Tomato before, but I was very surprised when I started reading it. The content is completely in line with my yy, and it also helped me to have more characters when I was yy. The overall writing style is okay, but the plot direction is very good. He has taken those regrettable characters into his harem. Basically all the CPs in the original work have formed his own group. The usual description of love is quite sweet but it is still a little lacking, because there are definitely many battle scenes that are very different from the original work. I still prefer to watch the interaction with the heroine. The ending was too rushed, and the pace became a lot faster from the middle, which is a bit regretful, but overall it is still very satisfying. Now I can't find anything remotely similar in Demon Slayer fandom [crying]

The best Demon Slayer fanfic I have seen so far. There is no system and there is no gift girl. It is really great. It is just too short and not enough to read hh () The author, please do your best to code words. Please don't stop updating. This book has become my spiritual food 2.0 [Send Heart]

It's quite interesting, the plot is coherent, and it's updated quickly and excitingly. However, the heroine is not sure, so I hope the author will not abandon the book and update it slowly. [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

There are still many highlights. I think if some people find it bad, it may be because they don't like to dismantle the official version, or they didn't like it very much because they wrote it for CP. Overall, this novel is worth picking up. I came here just for Chanel👅

After reading it, the pace is very fast. If you can accept the harem, you can really read it. The main plot actually occupies very little space, and is more about daily life. The author will also add some pictures, which makes it very enjoyable to read. Let's not talk about the combat power. Although the main plot is very different from the original work, it makes up for a lot of regrets, which is good.

Top-notch writing, whether it's daily life or fighting. The author carefully inserts pictures that fit the plot. The painting style is very good. It is the best Demon Slayer fanfic I have ever read so far. It also has emotional foreshadowing. There will be no inexplicable situations. One copy of a good fanfic is enough. Of course, you can also recommend it to me if you think it is good. [Shy]

The chapter about the meeting in the pillar is very well written. At that time, Nezuko was stabbed by Feng Zhu and then beat Tanjiro. The helpless Tanjiro and Nezuko at that time made people feel distressed and very angry with Feng Zhu's actions. Fortunately, the author wrote it very well.

Critical review: Now that I see it, the emotional scenes are well written, and the three Butterfly sisters also won them all. It's just that the battle scenes were a bit poorly written, and I didn't understand some parts. Others were pretty good, highly recommended👍

It's full of regrets. The pace in the middle and later stages is too fast. I skipped a lot of foreshadowing in order to keep up with the progress. It would be great if I could keep writing according to the pace of the early stages. It would definitely be a masterpiece. But overall, the shortcomings do not hide the good points. It is worth watching.

It's good-looking, I love reading it, the content is very sophisticated, and it refers to many original works and second creations. It can be seen that this book has a score of 9. It is my favorite harem (because almost all Demon Slayers in 🍅 are single women) and the speed is very fast, so I can give it a high score

I think this is the most comfortable book among Demon Slayer doujins. It integrates well into the original work and makes up for some regrets.

Although some of them are a little unsatisfactory, the author's writing is already very good. Nowadays, there are more and more high-quality Demon Slayer fans. The protagonist written by the author is not the best or the strongest among the many Demon Slayer protagonists, but Asashi is already among the best in being deeply rooted in people's hearts. Come on, author, come on [shy]

It's quite interesting. It's my first time seeing Rika Shiki as the heroine in a writing product. I want to see more of these clips, is that okay?