HP: the Eastern Trickster and the Dark Mark

It's a book that I like very much. How can I put it this way? I didn't expect that there would be another HP book in Tomato that made me so satisfied. Feng Xingchen is a real heroine. She uses all the power around her to achieve her goals. She is strong, confident and beautiful. She feels like a man and woman. To be honest, if I had such a reliable friend by my side, I would fall in love with her. I really didn't notice the relationship between Xiaolong and Xiaoduo at first. I always thought it was with Xiaoduo, but after reading it, I found out that it was with Xiaolong. I was very happy. After all, I really like Tang Tiantian's Draco~ When I read the book, I always looked at Tang Tiantian's face~ The author said that he will write the if line later. I don't know how to round out the early Xiaoduo line. I am somewhat looking forward to it. Can I write it tomorrow and write 100,000 words in two days? Just kidding~ Finally, author, please come on~

Yes, the setting is quite novel. This does not mean that the setting of the heroine Dongfang Xiuxian is novel. What is novel is that Dongfang Xiuxian does not stick to the plot. Many fans are chasing the plot (although it is normal, but I am watching the Snake Yard, and I don't want to know what the lions are doing every day). The plot of this one is relatively independent, daily oriented, and has plot content, but it is more about the life of the Snake Yard, which is good. I haven't found any clues yet. The emotional line is a little complicated. The heroine has been afraid to start a sweet relationship for some reasons, but it is a double arrow. Well, that's probably it. Here are some random thoughts I didn't update much when I thought it was good at first, and then I started to stock up on articles. I have been collecting them for a long time and I felt that I had no books to read today. Suddenly I remembered this book and found that the number of chapters was quite impressive. I started reading, and as I looked, I found that the author was asking for book reviews, because there was no traffic. I rushed to comment. If I have time in the future, I will do some reminders (usually when I have time, I feel uncomfortable if I don't read some novels every day) So finally, come on, author~

I haven't finished it yet, I'm in the middle! I feel that the highlight is the friendship between the little snakes. It is very warm and warm with Slytherin's unique loyalty and trustworthiness. For example, whenever something needs to be kept secret, they will take the initiative to use the Loyalty Charm! Unlike the typical representative of the Lion Academy, the predators, who fly the banner of bravery (actually they are reckless and ignorant, such as the early pursuit of Lily), hold up the theory of blood equality (actually the attitude is discriminatory, such as Sirius using Lupin's werewolf identity to get rid of the Sect), and shouting slogans of justice. (In fact, campus bullying is carried out in the name of pranks), self-righteous loyalty (in fact, how easy Wormtail's betrayal is), the author uses the small details of the daily life of the little snakes in the Snake Yard to write out the Slytherin-style bravery, loyalty, trustworthiness, glory, rights...

Highly recommend this HP fanfic! The heroine Feng Xingchen is so well portrayed, a real big woman, a female among females! ! A woman among women! ! Just kidding, I can't help but make this joke, but this book really has a heroine. Know how to use all resources to achieve goals, full of charm. The emotional line is also very cleverly designed. The early foreshadowing made me mistakenly think that CP was Xiaoduo, but it turned out to be Xiaolong. Thinking about it later, the interaction with Xiaolong was indeed sweeter. It was said that there will be an if line in the back. I wonder if there will be a CP with Voldemort? I really want to see the cp combination of the big and small dark lords. Now that I have written about the sweet love period, it is still a bit interesting, like watching a Harry Potter extra. Come on, author, I'm optimistic about you! Looks good! ! ! ! ! !

It's really good. I thought I had finished writing the book review, but after reading it twice, I realized I hadn't written it, so I hurried over to write it. I really like the heroine Feng Xingchen in this book. She is an oriental beauty. She is not a cute wife, but a real grown-up woman. Her brain is always online, and her cp with Xiaolong is also sweet. Now I am in my fourth year of writing, and I can be a professor in my fifth year. I am so happy. Feng Xingchen studied medicine, so I can feel her kindness and sense of mission to save people, which is very real. At least the classmates I know who are studying medicine (not 4+4) really want to save lives, so I can understand her temperament of wanting to save people. Finally, I hope you can write the if line earlier. I also want to give Xiaoduo a home! Come on! Big!

It's really good to watch. It tells the story of Feng Xingchen, a powerful heroine from China. It doesn't have too much plot in the original book. I quite like the three protagonists of the original book. There is no black mistress in this book. If I say it's a rant, it's more of a rant against Deng Xiao. But with GGAD, I can forgive the whole world~ As for CP, I quite like Xiaolong, but why do I feel that Xiaoduo is more suitable for Xingchen? Xiaolong has the mentality of a kid who wants to be loved by the stars, but Xiaoduo has been loving her silently. The author said that there will be an if line in the later stage, so maybe Xiaoduo's deep affection is burying the line? I have no intention of influencing your writing, you can just write as you like! I really like it and recommend it to everyone who wants to check it out! Finally, I wish you the best as you write, and don't stop updating! Come on, come on, come on!

It's really good-looking. It's a different style. It's completely different from the HP fanfics I've read before. There are so many life scenes in the Snake Yard. I really like this style. I really hope they are all happy. I love you so much, the author (´▽`ʃ♡ƪ)"

It's very interesting. It's my favorite book about Xiao Long that I've read in a long time. I'm the kind of person who abandons books very quickly. I didn't expect that I could keep reading it for several days in a row. It's really interesting and amazing. There's not much in the original book. It's very surprising. Highly recommended.

It's so good to watch. Great support for the author. I will keep reading. I really like the heroine of the Snake Yard and the small group of 6 people in Slytherin. Professor Snape deserves a good ending [crying] [crying]

The heroine Hua Guo, a demigod, Slytherin, CP Draco, became a professor in the fifth grade. Super pretty! ! ! Highly recommended! ! ! [Like][Like][Like]

This book is very good-looking. The characters are very three-dimensional and the personality is well developed. The heroine is very powerful. So far, she doesn't feel aggrieved at all. The tsundere dragon doesn't feel OOC at all. Overall, it is highly recommended.

This book is super beautiful. The strength of the heroine is very clearly portrayed. Because it may be an all-fiction novel, the emotions are multi-person. I like this kind of heartthrob novel, and the heroine has very upright views. At that time, she told Pansy and Daphne that they could marry her or be her best friend without being married. It was super, super good-looking.

"The Scourge of Hogwarts" is an online fan novel serialized on Tomato Novels. Judging from its content and style, the following comments can be made: Relaxing and humorous daily fandom This novel is more like an "everyday flow" work that can easily decompress. It does not have a heavy main plot, but focuses on the protagonist Feng Xingchen's campus life at Hogwarts. The story is full of interesting gags and unexpected "turnover" scenes, such as the first attempt at Weasley's trick shop, interactions with various magical creatures, etc., Providing readers with many relaxing and enjoyable reading moments. Imaginative plot settings One of the highlights of the novel is its unbridled imagination. The author has built a magical world full of fun, including some "sand sculpture" style plot settings. For example, the protagonist will "overturn" due to various unexpected situations, or have wonderful chemical reactions with other characters. This style injects freshness into the traditional Harry Potter fan themes, making the story full of surprises and laughter. Casual and loose narrative structure As can be seen from the chapter list, the narrative structure of the novel is relatively casual, even a little loose. The story switches freely between the main plot and daily fragments, sometimes giving people a feeling of "writing whatever comes to mind". Although this writing method enhances the sense of randomness and life in the story, it may also lead to a slightly weaker coherence and logic of the plot, which may require some adaptation for readers who pursue rigorous narratives. All in all, this is a Harry Potter fan novel with a relaxed style and wide-open imagination. It does not pursue a serious epic feel, but focuses on providing readers with a magical journey full of fun and imagination. If you like daily stories that are lighthearted, humorous, and imaginative, then this work may be a good choice. Copied [laughing]

It's very interesting, with a lot of daily life of the little snakes. Other fans just keep repeating the main plot, and some of them are tired of watching it. This one is very good, there is not so much main plot. I really like Theodore, will there be any plots about him in the future? The update speed is also quite stable, so don't stop updating! Great author, come on!

It's very interesting to watch. From Feng Xingchen's daily life to his love with Decorah, you can see Wind's cuteness and determination, his cold but gentle heart (*¯¯*), and the young lovers outside the main plot are also very sweet. ૮₍ ˃̶ ꇴ ˂̶ ₎აଲଇଉକ

It's a very good book. It tells a lot about the daily life in the snake farm, with a bit of comedy. I stayed up late to finish reading it. The heroine is very strong, I hope the character will not collapse in the future. Updates are considered stable, so please don't update constantly. Come on, author.

Looks good! I like the setting of the Chinese witch, and I also like the interaction between Xingchen and Xiaoduo, it's so sweet! Is it really not possible to do 1vsN? Although Xiaolong and Xiaolong are also very sweet! I really like it, and it has a lot of words. I could read it for several days! Marvelous! Hahaha Finished reading! Good looking! The daily life of little snakes is so beautiful! I will always follow you!

It's beautiful, it's very beautiful, it's very beautiful. This is the best book I've read among all the books. The plot is very [shy] and rich. The heroine has an IQ and is the favorite of the group. I like to read this kind of [admiration] [admiration] [cool] [blowing kiss]

Help! I must give this treasure book to everyone! I just clicked on it casually, but I got stuck right into it, and couldn't stop from the first page to the last page! Whether you are a bookworm or a novice who reads books occasionally, this book is for you! After reading this, I have one feeling: I won't lose money by investing! Just rush and it's done!

Looks good! There won't be too many storylines about the main threesome. I love watching the little snakes' daily lives! Keep it up!

Very beautiful, the heroine Slytherin, CP Draco

Very nice! ! He wrote about the daily lives of many little snakes, and the people in the snake house were ecstatic. They always felt that the people in the snake house were not simply bad people. After all, everyone has two sides! ! Come on, Dad! !

So beautiful! ! (Rolling) (Twisting) (Crawling) Jie Jie Jie author, please do it again! It's been a long time since I've seen so many updates, I love it! (Shadow walking) (screaming) (snarling) (squirming) Author I love you! I love Xiaolong so much! ! The big woman Feng Xingchen! (Twisted walking) (Quickly crawling) Can the author not finish it and update 100,000 words every day? I really like this kind of group portrait article! Can you please have more?

I really want to know if there is no cp or with cp, Draco and Theodore are the male protagonists [blowing kiss]

It looks good, the CP should be Draco

Very very Mary Sue, so far very friendly to everyone except Ron, especially Xiao Long and Severus. It was just that I was too close to Theodore at the beginning, and I thought CP was Theodore, but there was no scene later on where two men competed for one woman and turned against each other. PS. The text of each chapter has repeated requests for book reviews from the author (immediately following the text, not discussed in this chapter or what the author has to say). Listening to the book greatly affects the perception.

It's beautiful, has a good setting, and has a great heroine, but it's not always exciting! [Adoration]

It's very interesting. It writes a lot about how little snakes get along. It really writes about Slytherin students from a different perspective. Come on, the author!

New book, first time writing fan fiction, please forgive me, I will continue to work hard~

I like it so much, it's really, really good-looking. I like this setting. If I like the male protagonist, I recommend it.