Penetrating into Male Videos? Then I Will Ascend First

It's very interesting. It writes a lot about the male protagonist's peeing and the heroine's views on male and female marriage. The third brother doesn't talk about ten years in Hedong and ten years in Hexi like the male novel. Don't bully young people into poverty. Generally speaking, it is very interesting. The author should send more [blowing kisses] [blowing kisses] [blowing kisses]

The author writes very well, and I give it five stars because it has surpassed 80% of the female immortal novels in all aspects. The female protagonist will not be too soft-hearted and puts herself first. I temporarily stopped at chapter 38 because I have actually read a lot of male videos, and I am used to the protagonist's character design. The female protagonist has made great progress, but for me, it seems a bit too moral and aggrieved. Some plots are a bit inconsistent. The heroine keeps explaining why she wants to save people. There is really no need to explain. Over-explanation is the behavior of a weak person seeking recognition. Of course, the author may have his own market considerations, best wishes

Hi, originally because the author's character of the protagonist was too contradictory and too morally arrogant, I wanted to give it a three-star rating and forget it. However, because the author's ideological core still has some shining points that I like. For example, the love for girls may be a bit contradictory, but overall I still love girls. The natural gender tendency made me stay. Then as I continued reading, I was humored to the point where it was upgraded to four stars. Maybe I am more emotionally happy. After all, reading novels is just for leisure and entertainment. Attached is the part that made me laugh: "Such a good seedling! Such excellent mental control, my God! Why isn't she a fire spirit? Oh my god! Damn it, the formation mages earn less and work hard and are tired. How lucky are they to have such a good seedling! Why! Why! Why can't the alchemist meet such a good seedling!", I simply sympathize with the complaints about making less work and being tired. The book is not very good, but it is not particularly bad. The author may be in the awakening period of women's thoughts, or in the transitional period, and he wants to criticize the false love, discrimination, and devaluation of women in male and female videos. This part is there, and it is good, but at the same time, the details are not handled well. For example, at the beginning, the part about the brother's breakup of engagement and the family relationship was a bit stuck. Nothing was said and nothing was done. However, it got stuck at the key point, nothing was done, and action was taken after the fact. The subsequent description of the protagonist's morality is too exaggerated in many places, and the heroine is put too high. In fact, if it is the protagonist's own thinking that is a fierce struggle, then those struggles should be hidden in the text, rather than explained in words. Additional explanations will give a sense of fragmentation, which is actually a sign of insufficient writing power. Come on, I hope it will become smoother as I write. I am still looking forward to the direction of the world shown in the introduction of this book.

Not bad! Still being serialized! I feel that everyone's opinions are quite pertinent. It would be better if the author could have time to go back and revise some of the previous articles. Overall, there are no flaws in the writing style, and the perspective is relatively fresh, but I always feel it's a bit lacking. Please give the author a big boost! The author is great... I am waiting for you to come back (waiting unswervingly (not in a hurry) (I can still live for many years) Editor 2: How should I put it? The more I read, the more I feel that many of the low scores in the comment section are because they have read too many fast food novels. The author spends a lot of pen and ink to describe and portray the character's heart, which makes Qianxue's character more three-dimensional. People will think and struggle. Nothing is absolute. There is no absolute good and evil in the world, and there is no absolute family affection and reason. This is consistent with a person, a living person. The author portrays Qianxue really well, a girl who comes to a different world but does not forget modern education, a girl who is really working hard but is also simple and ordinary. To be honest, if you really like watching mindless movies, you might as well go out and turn right.

The plot is great, but what attracts me more than the plot is the character of the protagonist. The protagonist does not agree with the saying that "girls should be rich and boys should be poor." Girls can also grow through setbacks; the protagonist firmly believes that "family members can rely on themselves, but they will not rely on them." He always holds the initiative of his destiny in his own hands and strives to Try to improve your strength instead of placing your hopes on your brother Long Aotian; when you encounter unfair treatment in the clan, you will not tolerate it again and again, but rely on your talent and status to directly ask for it in public, even if you don't need it now, you still have to get what you deserve. I really like this type of heroine, keep up the good work

It's nice to watch, and the heroine has delicate emotions. When the worldviews of the two worlds collide, she will make less than correct decisions, but that's okay. She was just an ordinary person before the time travel, and after the time travel, she only awakened memories after a certain age. She is not an AI that can think like a program. She only cares about gains and losses and does not care about emotions. She is a living, flesh-and-blood person. At the age of 12, when she is full of dreams and has such a sense of justice, she is as energetic as the sun at eight or nine o'clock. She doesn't want to just indulge in the dark world, and she doesn't have so much energy to light up the world. I am looking forward to the story behind it^ω^

It's really good. It's my first book review since reading Tomato. Although it's not finished yet. But the growth path of the baby girl is really interesting. Those who watched it in the middle of the night felt warm [send heart] [send heart] [send heart]. The most important thing is! It's so exciting. I read novels on the Internet just for the pleasure. If I want to torture, I can only torture men! ! ? So cool! ! And it's not mindless, it's simply more enjoyable! ! ! !

It is a relatively new novel, with a feeling of cultivating immortals in continental Europe. The heroine has a very good character. She works hard in cultivation and uses resources when needed. I really like the character of the heroine. It's just that this fiancé hasn't appeared yet, and I don't know why I don't want them to be together hahahahaha. Let's wait for the author to follow up on the article's direction later.

The article is quite good, but it is too didactic. Even if I agree with the author's point of view, it still affects the perception. Writing is about exporting opinions. Of course, it is normal to be biased, but it is fine to tell the story in the novel, and it is OK to imply praise and criticism, but don't go out of your way to convince the readers in the plot like a debate.

Everyone's image is so full. My father is not a real feudal patriarch. He cares about his children very much. He thinks he can't take care of the baby and cries secretly at night. Brother, he is not the kind of stinking and arrogant man like "Long Aotian" on the male channel. He is too cute to argue with his sister. I'm embarrassed to say that I care, but he saves money to buy gifts for his sister. He collects "goldfinger" wool to give his sister elixirs. Our sister is the cutest and most adorable. A very self-reliant baby who is not shy about expressing love. She can speak her thoughts directly to her father and brother. She also has a mushroom head. She feels like a very cool girl. She is also very decisive and takes action when necessary. It's so cool to kill the long-tongued man in the family! ! Not enough to watch!

It's good-looking. I think the heroine's sense of morality is fine. This is not the Virgin, but the conscience that everyone should have no matter where in the world they go. The most important thing is that the heroine herself has the ability and confidence to do this.

It is a novel that is worth reading and a bit counter-conventional. It is very interesting and has two points worth mentioning: there are some special settings. For example, the author sets menstruation as a good time for women to practice. It is no different from usual, and will only discharge particles the size of soybeans at the end. The descriptions of women are very full, even if they are small characters. From a certain perspective, this book can be regarded as a group portrait of women. Recommend.

Oh my gosh, DaDa's book is still so beautiful. The writing style of the previous book about a woman wearing a man's body was shocking enough. The material used in this book about cultivating immortals is even more solid. I feel that DaDa has set up a world view with many knowledge points to learn. Moreover, it is the kind of plot that is both routine and exciting. Although the protagonist is no longer strong, but It's the people around the protagonist who are indistinguishable from the protagonist. The invincible Liushuang [Admiration] [Admiration] really likes Qianxue's tough character. The novel girl is able to understand it well. The method of controlling spiritual power and compressing spiritual power, as well as the familiarity with the plot routines of Xiu Xianwen, feel like she is playing me, super real! ! A strong person can walk sideways. He is really at the level of a goddess. Just... Can you give me more updates? [Please give me more updates] [Please give me more updates] [Please give me more updates] I can't see enough.

It's great to watch, but it's a bit tiring to watch. There are too many descriptions of the heroine's psychological activities🤣.

The plot is novel and the writing is very interesting. The heroine is a person with a kind heart, a moral bottom line, who puts herself first, and makes reasonable use of others to gain benefits. I have read a lot of time-travel and ascension (immortality) stories before, and many of the protagonists directly kill those who compete with them for resources. After all, the heroine of this story was ten years old when she remembered her previous life, and it was only two years later. Many people don't understand why the heroine is so holy and doesn't kill Lu Qi and the little girl. My personal opinion is that the heroine's moral sense in the previous life of peacetime is still very clear in two years. If she has a moral sense, she will naturally not take action, so the heroine is willing to bear the cause and effect and let them go. I don't think there is a problem, but some moral plots are not handled well, which affects the viewing experience. The character of the heroine in this book depends on personal acceptance, but the plot is okay. If the subsequent plot is not delayed, I think it is pretty good, putting aside the flaws.

It's very good-looking. I don't understand why the rating is so low. The setting is also novel. [Like] [Like] [Like]. Chinese people don't lie to Chinese people. I don't regret reading it. It's just a bit short. I'll read it after reading it.

It's a very interesting book. I think the low score is mainly due to the fact that the number of readers has not increased. In addition, the book still has only a few chapters (more than a few dozen chapters). Please support it with five stars. I hope the author will continue writing. That's the title of the book. It introduces the social background and the identity of the protagonist, but at first glance, it has a sense of relationship like "My Governor's Mother". Before reading the introduction, I mistakenly thought that the main plot was about a fox pretending to be a tiger, a sister fighting a brother, but after reading the text, it became clear that it was actually a brother fighting a sister () Of course, the title of the book can also be interpreted as meaning that the protagonist, as a relative of a certain dragon, is suspected of being killed by the aura of his lone star, or something else. It is mentioned here for reference only. I have read the text and it is clear what the real main plot of the article is #gesture.

It's so beautiful. It's a very novel feeling. It's the first time I read this kind of book about Long Aotian, a strong man and a strong woman. It's really good to read. The author's writing is also very good and delicate.

I won't think about it if I don't watch it for a while, because it looks good and I always want to keep it, but when I look at it, wow, I want to take a look and see how beautiful it is [Love] Qianxue has grown from a little mushroom to a sapling. I look forward to her continued growth!

I finished reading it without realizing it. It's quite novel among the immortality writings I've read. I'd like to give it a 5 to encourage you. I particularly like the heroine's character. Although some people criticize the heroine's character for being a bit too virginal, I think it's okay because some of the good deeds the heroine does have their own reasons and she seems to have her own personality. I quite like it. Similarly, regarding the character of the heroine, I hope that a male protagonist will not suddenly appear, such as the fiancé or something, and then after having sex with the heroine twice, the heroine will suddenly change her personality. I hope the author will not make this mistake. The plot is also okay, the family love described is quite real, very relaxed and enjoyable, I love watching it.

It has the feeling of a good-for-nothing young lady and a peerless thief in the past. The promotion and growth of the heroine are described very delicately. Every time she narrowly escapes death, it is not that complicated and the growth is very fast, but it is very interesting to watch. In addition, I want to hold up a sign for our male guest Lu Qi, come on, come on. Although he is not the kind of sunny and normal person that the heroine likes, the little beauty is really beautiful, and I can feel that he has suffered a lot even before I saw the rest of the story. I really hope that he will not fall in love with him. And since he was the first one to appear, I would have preconceived notions. The first one is always important, so I immediately regarded him as the male protagonist [crying] [crying]. And his character is very interesting, he has that crazy feeling of a madman. I know that the heroine as a normal person will not like it, but I think his follow-up may develop into a dark green tea where the heroine pretends to be normal? Even if the hostess ignores him, he will hide in the corner in the dark. The hostess will nuzzle him like a puppy and beg to be petted. She will also turn on the green tea mode when other male guests are present, and she will pretend to be pitiful because he looks so fragile.

It's rare to see Feng Aotian, so happy and at ease. I hope that Xiaoxue's CP, which has not yet appeared, will not be too much of a hindrance, and that Xiaoxue's brother and sister-in-law will be sweet as soon as possible.

The subject matter is relatively new, but the writing style feels more like a stage play [laughing and crying] The author is outputting his own thoughts, but this writing method feels like the narration of a stage play. Personally, I feel that this form of output is not suitable for novels, but there may be people who like it. The content is pretty good

This article is really good to read. It has a refreshing feeling of going against the routine. Moreover, the heroine takes the initiative to look for opportunities, has a relatively clear story line, and firmly walks her own path. She does not steal the opportunities of the male and female protagonists in the original plot. She follows her own heart in terms of interpersonal communication and has her own set of methods and principles for dealing with others. At least it makes me feel comfortable and not artificial. As the heroine grows up, we can also see some of her thoughts and concepts growing up. Perhaps her thoughts sometimes are not very consistent with readers' impressions and concepts of the world of immortality. Some readers may think that the heroine is overly sympathetic or too kind. Letting the enemy's daughter go is equivalent to letting the tiger go back to the mountain. However, I think this is exactly the reason why she traveled from modern times to immortality. The fairy world has no distinctive characteristics that distinguish it from the world of cultivation, and I think the heroine only has basic sympathy and compassion, and is not as kind-hearted as the Virgin Mary. Everything she does is based on the premise of her own safety and prosperity. I think there is nothing wrong with such a great heroine. So I really like this article.

In fact, the author is a very thoughtful person, and he can also express his thoughts in words, giving people a novel feeling. The method of cultivating the heroine in the article is also ruthless and stable. The overall feeling of the article is good. , But there is a problem. The author describes his thoughts in too much detail, and the length is a bit long, which makes the reading a bit unsmooth. Maybe you can try to delete it a little bit. The book review should also add points. It stops at the emotional line. It is a bit slow, but it is acceptable. After all, the child is very small, and there will be controversy if there are too many emotional lines. In addition, the heroine is really busy, so just keep the rhythm of sitting down. Finally, I hope you don't give up. I have read several novels this year that love to interrupt, and they all have shadows.

Everything else is fine. It is a good book. There is only one point where the protagonist seems to identify more with the identity of a woman than the Mu family. When other women infringe on the interests of the Mu family in order to protect their rights, she seems to internally agree more with the position of that woman, the one who breaks off the engagement in the article. Maybe I was overthinking it, but at that moment I clearly felt that compared to the protagonist's father, the protagonist, and her brothers, a small family of four or five, she recognized the general position of women more. The protagonist may not care much about the person who came to break off the engagement, but when the person who came to break off the engagement did something that could be interpreted as safeguarding women's rights to a certain extent, the protagonist would agree with the stranger's move to a certain extent, even if it harmed the interests of the protagonist's family of four or five. Apart from this, everything else feels fine. As a novel, it is quite enjoyable to read. I don't mean to look down on women or oppose women's rights protection. I just feel that the protagonist's way of classifying himself and outsiders is a bit strange.

It's very good. I clicked on the homepage and found out that I've also read the author's book Invincible Handsome Guy. The writing style is still a bit green but unexpectedly touches people's hearts. The plot is good and the writing style is good. The characters are full and have their own persistence and understanding. I recommend it.

The descriptions are delicate, the writing is gentle, and the characters are soulful. If you don't like psychological descriptions, you need to be prepared before reading it, but I think this is a plus point for this book. Including some descriptions of the external environment, the author's space will be longer, and there will be a lot of in-depth study of the world view of this article, combat power, psychological changes, abdominal slander, and jokes...×∞, What the author describes directly grows in my heart! [Love] Finally, there is the argument of this article. The author's description of the common routines of male and female fans and breaking the routines to be yourself is also very perfect! (You will see both male and female videos in the comment area) Let me sum it up, super, super, super recommended! ! !

How long has it been since I encountered a book that suits my taste? And it's still on tomatoes. I like it very much. The writing is good and the three views are correct. It is rare and rare. I like the character of the heroine: in the first part, although the heroine knows that the weak will eat the strong, she can combat the bullying of the weak within her own capabilities and give the weak a relatively fair environment; in the environment of the immortal world, she still retains a goodwill from modern society. I like the author's big analogies. Some situations that some readers may not understand well can be cleverly connected with examples from our lives or studies, which is beneficial to readers' understanding and increases their interest in reading. I like the author's writing style. The plot is well developed so far. The content is light and interesting, not wordy or complicated. It can be seen that the author has a certain language skills and it is pleasing to the eye. [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration] The only drawback is that it's not finished yet! ! ! ! ! ! [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry]

The three views are upright, and there are no poisonous points. I have been reading novels for 8 years. This book is indeed very good. Different from the mainstream fairy tales, which are about chance treasure hunting and magnificent events, this book is more delicate, whether it is emotions, landscapes or training details. I remember that when I first read the novel, my favorite part was the clip of the protagonist practicing. Nowadays, the novels have skipped this link, and only focus on the dangers of obtaining opportunities and the persistence of tempering the meridians. Some plots are handled very well and there is justice, but you will not harm yourself because of this justice. You will save a person just because you save it. You will not waste your time and turn around because he has difficulties and wants this or that. I will not harm others because of this justice, save the mortals and eradicate the bullies, and avoid the situation where the bullies will take revenge on the mortals in the future because of themselves. I like to read fast-paced systematic texts and urban pretense and slaps in the face. This book is not suitable for this book. This is a short clip about cultivation The wind was gentle, pushing the water flow faster. The sharp corners of the ice cubes in the water cut through the soft soil on both sides, but the water quickly mixed the soil. Through the repetition of damage and healing, the edges of the ice cubes gradually melted and became rounded. The river channel was taken away with the soil and became wider. I feel that the author is a female author. This novel has a tenderness that is not found in male novels. I am used to fast-paced bloody scenes, so it is good to come here to relive the true feelings.