When he woke up, Shi Yu discovered that he had transmigrated to another world and acquired what seemed like the perfect life for a protagonist: a face fit for stardom, an adorable younger sister, and a childhood sweetheart.
However, fate proved far crueler than he could have imagined. His younger sister was suddenly diagnosed with a terminal illness, and the merciless grip of ALS was closing in on her.
Struggling through despair, Shi Yu refused to give up on the slightest hope and did everything he could to find a miracle that would cure his sister. Just as he was on the verge of breaking down, a mysterious “dating assistant” app appeared out of nowhere, seemingly bringing a chance for things to turn around.
As his sister's condition miraculously improved, Shi Yu gradually began to sense that something was amiss...
“My sister is acting strange!”
As the author said, this is the perfect love plot in the author's fantasy, but if we look at it in reality, there will be many unreasonable scenes and designs. The protagonist's childhood sweetheart and the protagonist's shield are quite interesting to write, but there are still many loopholes. Also, the function of this setting of the system seems to be to provide protection convenience for the protagonist and his family. His appearance seems to be to protect the protagonist and the people around him. Is the protagonist's sister actually his biological sister? Still not related by blood. This is what I want to know the most, because the author's description of this characteristic of his sister is a bit strange. It's not like a brother controlling the protagonist, but more like a boyfriend and girlfriend. All I can say is that it's great. If the protagonist doesn't know how to write about a brother controlling his sister, he can actually read books written by others in this category. If there is no blood relationship, who is the protagonist going to choose? It is impossible to always be pulled between two people in the urban storyline. If you are mainly about love, you have to go through the marriage hall. Who would you choose if you are not related by blood? Qingmei or younger sister? Is it going to end with an open ending, a side story, or just choose one or two of them? Of course, if you accept both, there is a very real problem. If Long Aotian's harem novels were not just emotional essays, harem would really not be suitable. Love is selfish, no one wants to share their significant other with anyone else. Even if they are best friends and playmates since childhood, in reality most of these people end up making troubles that are ugly. The author's description and control of the plot are a bit lacking. Is the main plotline an emotional dispute or is the protagonist the plotline? Fighting against those who want to harm your family still relies on emotions. An open ending or a perfect ending that runs through the relationship. If you are interested in love novels, you can take a look at the system in it. It is equivalent to providing some conveniences to the protagonist, not focusing on the system. My evaluation of this tree is two stars. I will see how well it is written later, and then I will make up for the stars. But I really don't like this kind of thing.
Just average. It's a new book. I understand.
The emotions are delicate. I hope the author can update more. It's hard for me to comment. It's a really good book. Alas, I entered the little dark room. This book is actually quite well written by the author. It's just that I don't know how to end the emotional line at the end. But overall, it's very well written. I'm a new writer. Although I can't finish it, I'm a staunch younger sister. Haha.