"When he woke up, Shi Yu found that he had traveled to a different world and had a seemingly perfect protagonist's life - a face that could be a star, a cute sister, and a childhood sweetheart.
However, the cruelty of fate was far beyond imagination. My sister was suddenly diagnosed with a terminal illness, and the ruthless threat of ALS was approaching step by step.
Struggling in despair, Shi Yu did not give up any hope and tried his best to find a miracle to cure his sister. Just when he was about to collapse, a mysterious "dating assistant" app mysteriously arrived, which seemed to bring about a turning point.
As her sister's condition miraculously improved, Shi Yu gradually noticed something unusual——
"There's something wrong with my sister! "
Reader comments
As the author said, this is the perfect love plot in the author's fantasy, but if we look at it in reality, there will be many unreasonable scenes and designs.
The protagonist's childhood sweetheart and the protagonist's shield are quite interesting to write, but there are still many loopholes.
Also, the function of this setting of the system seems to be to provide protection convenience for the protagonist and his family. His appearance seems to be to protect the protagonist and the people around him.
Is the protagonist's sister actually his biological sister? Still not related by blood. This is what I want to know the most, because the author's description of this characteristic of his sister is a bit strange. It's not like a brother controlling the protagonist, but more like a boyfriend and girlfriend. All I can say is that it's great. If the protagonist doesn't know how to write about a brother controlling his sister, he can actually read books written by others in this category. If there is no blood relationship, who is the protagonist going to choose? It is impossible to always be pulled between two people in the urban storyline. If you are mainly about love, you have to go through the marriage hall.
Who would you choose if you are not related by blood? Qingmei or younger sister? Is it going to end with an open ending, a side story, or just choose one or two of them? Of course, if you accept both, there is a very real problem. If Long Aotian's harem novels were not just emotional essays, harem would really not be suitable. Love is selfish, no one wants to share their significant other with anyone else. Even if they are best friends and playmates since childhood, in reality most of these people end up making troubles that are ugly. The author's description and control of the plot are a bit lacking.
Is the main plotline an emotional dispute or is it the protagonist? Fighting against those who want to harm your family still relies on emotions. An open ending or a perfect ending that runs through the relationship.
If you are interested in love novels, you can take a look at the system in it. It is equivalent to providing some conveniences to the protagonist, not focusing on the system. My evaluation of this tree is two stars. I will see how well it is written later, and then I will make up for the stars. But I really don't like this kind of thing.
Just average. It's a new book. I understand.
The emotions are delicate. I hope the author can update more. It's hard for me to comment. It's a really good book.
Alas, I entered the little dark room. This book is actually quite well written by the author. It's just that I don't know how to end the emotional line at the end. But overall, it's very well written. I'm a new writer. Although I can't finish it, I'm a staunch younger sister. Haha.
As the author said, this is the perfect love plot in the author's fantasy, but if we look at it in reality, there will be many unreasonable scenes and designs. The protagonist's childhood sweetheart and the protagonist's shield are quite interesting to write, but there are still many loopholes. Also, the function of this setting of the system seems to be to provide protection convenience for the protagonist and his family. His appearance seems to be to protect the protagonist and the people around him. Is the protagonist's sister actually his biological sister? Still not related by blood. This is what I want to know the most, because the author's description of this characteristic of his sister is a bit strange. It's not like a brother controlling the protagonist, but more like a boyfriend and girlfriend. All I can say is that it's great. If the protagonist doesn't know how to write about a brother controlling his sister, he can actually read books written by others in this category. If there is no blood relationship, who is the protagonist going to choose? It is impossible to always be pulled between two people in the urban storyline. If you are mainly about love, you have to go through the marriage hall. Who would you choose if you are not related by blood? Qingmei or younger sister? Is it going to end with an open ending, a side story, or just choose one or two of them? Of course, if you accept both, there is a very real problem. If Long Aotian's harem novels were not just emotional essays, harem would really not be suitable. Love is selfish, no one wants to share their significant other with anyone else. Even if they are best friends and playmates since childhood, in reality most of these people end up making troubles that are ugly. The author's description and control of the plot are a bit lacking. Is the main plotline an emotional dispute or is it the protagonist? Fighting against those who want to harm your family still relies on emotions. An open ending or a perfect ending that runs through the relationship. If you are interested in love novels, you can take a look at the system in it. It is equivalent to providing some conveniences to the protagonist, not focusing on the system. My evaluation of this tree is two stars. I will see how well it is written later, and then I will make up for the stars. But I really don't like this kind of thing.
Just average. It's a new book. I understand.
The emotions are delicate. I hope the author can update more. It's hard for me to comment. It's a really good book. Alas, I entered the little dark room. This book is actually quite well written by the author. It's just that I don't know how to end the emotional line at the end. But overall, it's very well written. I'm a new writer. Although I can't finish it, I'm a staunch younger sister. Haha.