A Tycoon's Life Is Just This Boring and Dull

I have read one or two chapters, but I can only say that it is average. For me, there are two big problems in just one or two chapters. First segment. Not well divided. It's dazzling to see, just one screen is full of words, just go and see how others segment it. The second is that there are too many inner dramas. I am just a casual passerby. There are too many introductions to the inner story, including the person's clothes, height, makeup, etc. It is completely unnecessary and it is already a superficial introduction. Even if the system I give you is useless, you are already considered to be extremely wealthy. Invite the gold digger girl you just met to come to dinner, and ask the male protagonist to get up and pull out a chair for her to sit down. Don't say that the newly acquired system has not adapted to the new identity, it will look ugly if you write it like this.

The punishment is terrible so I give you two stars.

Is it Gao Wu🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒