Become the King of the Sea in the Fast Travel Story, the System Begs Not to Collapse the Plot

The writing is mature, the heroine takes the initiative very firmly, and I also like the world view. The woman is about the same height as the man, and the woman and the man lift weights together to build their abs. Moreover, every male protagonist is not greasy and has the highest sense of service, but he is not a coward. The female protagonist is also absolutely pure in thinking, but she is not a selfish and evil character. This really pokes me, who knows! The first world: Love cookies with core and healing properties, which not only relax but also give people upward strength. Some people may mind that the first world ends before the college entrance examination is over, which is a bit sudden, but I think it's okay (because I can't help laughing when I think about how good the food will be in the next world). Those who pay attention to the integrity of the world can avoid lightning on their own, but we will meet again later depending on the author's intention. The second world: I like Yuanyuan's attitude very much. She is not too entangled in the previous life, which is good. She is the heroine. I like every male lead hehe, they are really awesome. And she is really powerful. She is not afraid of starting from scratch, nor is she resentful that her previous efforts have been wasted. Yuanyuan keeps moving forward and can make her life better no matter what the situation. The ending is similar to the first world, but I like this one better because of course the more good men the better, can you write more male protagonists? I like it. I would like to praise another point that I think is good: n is very natural, there is no lengthy discussion about whether this can be done or not, and the female protagonist will not suffer at all because of this. The male protagonist's service awareness is super in place, which gives me a good impression. Although the ending is not written, you can feel that the emotional line is not oe. According to this development, n can be done, or they are already together (hehe)

The writing is really, really amazing. I was a little scared at the beginning and it was a cliche plot, but I was really impressed by the writing. Yuanyuan shines under her descriptions, which makes people yearn for it. Every character is described, vivid and colorful, and it is not a brainless foil for the protagonist, and there is no female rivalry. It is simply great! Especially Da Da Da is really super cute hehe, he is very good to us. ୧(๑•̀⌄•́๑)૭ I hope Da Da Da will take good rest, be happy every day, and write happy stories! Very much looking forward to it! (｡•̀ᴗ-)✧

Nice! The plot is very reasonable and the writing is good! Does every story have an open ending? 😭I want some sweet extras and NPCs, but not 1v1, okay?

Give yourself a five-star review \\٩( 'ω' )و // I want to write a sweet article for girls, taking everyone on adventures in different worlds, and harvesting many, many things through their own efforts and sincerity! You will meet many people along the way, and you may have a very sweet experience, but you will always remember that you are a woman on the road and will never stop for anyone! Let's embark on a road of love and adventure together! !

I don't know why the rating is low, but I like it very much. The pace of the first story is a bit fast, but the description is very delicate. I really want to continue to watch the subsequent development. The heroine will go to the next world. Is there any extra chapter that I can watch in advance? Sir, please come with some extra chapters to satisfy your craving. Hungry, hungry, hungry! ! ! Why are all the good novels updated on a daily basis? It should be updated very quickly [crazy][crazy][crazy]

I really like the characters in it, especially our cute puppy Yuanyuan, who is like a warm little sun! The plot is not bloody at all, and there is no slap in the face, but everyone has a distinct personality. The heroine doesn't have any big golden fingers, but relies on her own hard work and personality charm to have a lot of love and super warm stories. The rice is also delicious, I like it! ! !

Tied! Give it five stars now! The writing of the second world is super good. I haven't seen such a good draft in a long time. I don't spend a lot of time on stage descriptions. I describe the feelings very carefully and I won't fall in love suddenly. It makes me feel soft. The heroine is good, the hero is good, the system is good, the author is good, everyone loves it❤ (ɔˆз(ˆ⌣ˆc)

The World Is Complete is a sweet story. It's quite nice, with a little bit of lily in it [shy]

Although the writing style is still a bit immature, the content of the story is good and the writing is smooth. The most important thing is that the heroine Baobao has a great spiritual core. She is a good child who knows how to love herself and the world. I hope Bangbang's heroine Baobao and Bangbang's author will keep up their good work and write ten chapters a day [blowing kisses]

It's beautiful. It would be better if every world could stay at the end of the world.

It's really well written, but I deducted one point because the first story has no ending... I haven't read the second story yet. I hope it won't be like this. It's better to have a beginning and an end. When the ending of the first story comes out, I will add the fifth star [laughing] ps: You can be monogamous Threatening me with a knife, don't make me kneel down and beg you.

It's super beautiful. The first world is a sweet text, and there's a little bit of lily (hehe [shy] [shy]). The second world selection is very well received. I like this kind of thing, but it's not finished yet. I hope it will be more popular [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] Come on [sending heart] [sending heart]

It's very beautiful. It's even equal. Hehehehe. Sir, your rice is so delicious. I love you so much.

A very warm and beautiful article. Although it is being serialized for the first time in this world, the gentle and beautiful male mother of Diao type is still worth having. Yuanyuan puppy works hard to warm the people around him

It's so delicious. It's so delicious. I want to share this delicious food with everyone. Big women need to see this to be motivated to live! [Send heart] [Send heart] I will always follow the teacher

It's a very good book. The heroine is really a good and strong baby, capable and confident [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

Very cool article! Nice! I like! The heroine has a very good temperament!

I love watching it, and is there really no follow-up or extra to the first story? I hope I can freely choose to return to a certain story later [almost crying]

It's really beautiful, I especially like the third dimension, come on [blowing kiss]

Ahhhhhhhhhh! ! ! ! How could such a beautiful article not be rated! ! ! ! ! ! !

It's so addictive, the character image has stood up

So pretty! Sister Bao is awesome, but there is a secondary CP in the third world, which makes this couple quite cozy. The author's writing has a warm atmosphere, which makes it very comfortable to read [blowing kiss]

It's super, super good-looking, the plot is quite novel, and the author's writing is pretty good, and it looks really comfortable.

The story is very sweet and interesting, I will give it a good score

It looks good, come on, come on

The content of the interactions between the characters is real and full of emotions, and the sense of empathy is super strong. It makes people smile knowingly and looks forward to the follow-up development [crazy] [shy]

Super super super beautiful! ! ! The author's writing style is very good, the characters' personalities are very distinct, the relationship between them is also very warm, and their feelings are sincere, which makes people moved.

It's very beautiful. It's very beautiful. It's very smooth. It doesn't feel like a running account. I'm very happy to watch it. Teacher, please write more (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧

Come on! Looking forward to the follow-up story, and looking forward to the days when I don't have to run away.

It's super, super good-looking, but I really hope there will be a sequel. Please give me a sequel (⑅︎ ॣ•͈૦•͈ ॣ)꒳ᵒ꒳ᵎᵎᵎ ❤️❤️