Pirates: the Nanny Swordsmith of the Straw Hats

The content so far is very good, I am looking forward to the follow-up plot, and giving 1 star less is my expectation for your future. Blacksmiths and furnaces are my hobbies. Before I lose interest in this book, I will try my best to give the author the support he deserves. Come on!

Brother, do you have any misunderstandings about Chinese martial arts? , After practicing it for so many years, it is still a bright mirror

The writing is okay, but don't describe too much about some insignificant battles and the original plot. It can be finished in almost half a chapter, so I just wrote 4 chapters. The most important thing for the protagonist is to hone his skills, find materials, and keep learning. There is no need to follow the plot.

It's not bad. There are some things that the author personally wants to write, and you can also read them with Ship Flow. However, in addition to better planning in the later stage, you may need to add some of the author's own understanding of things. After all, if you follow the original work, then just read the original work. I hope that in addition to experiencing the full emotions in the original work, you can also feel what the author himself wants to create.

I give myself five stars, and I will definitely consider rationality when writing novels, but that's all I have in my head. Everyone has some ideas, and if you speak them out, they convince me, and I will accept them, so I will comment more and give more opinions. I will adopt what I can adopt. But for some things, I will write according to my own ideas. Even if I fail, there is nothing I can do. It can only mean that my writing skills are not strong enough.

Very detailed and clear

The first "Hundred Forged" I hope he can accompany Sauron until the end and become supreme

Very good. There are not many blacksmith topics. Keep up the good work and don't stop updating.

It's not enough to watch, the characters are well created. The author also knows how to maximize strengths and avoid weaknesses. If you're not sure and can't control it, just follow the original work. Now the rhythm is just right [laughs]

Very good very good

Very novel setting

It's still ok for now

I think the rating is quite low, probably too few. Come on, author!

Well written, I look forward to further development. Come on [like]

What can I say, the setting is actually pretty good.

The subject matter is good, but the volume is too small. I look forward to the author's subsequent performance.

The character creation is very good

It's beautiful, but I still have more to say! By the way, Bajimen is not only about boxing, the Liuhe gun is also very famous. Why don't you consider letting the protagonist fight with boxing as the main weapon and the gun as a supplement?