Harry Potter: From Conquering Hogwarts to All of Britain and America

Looks good! It's not an inexplicable love at first sight, but the heroine herself is a charming person. Only such a heartthrob will never get tired of it (ᵒ̴̶̷̤໐ᵒ̴̶̷̤) Long live all!

It's pretty cool, but everyone looks very mature. Whether it's psychological description or magic potion skills, they all feel like students about to graduate. We often forget that they are actually only in the first grade...

It's well written, it's a serious drama, and it's definitely not a cool novel. The heroine is so heart-wrenching! Each character is written very realistically. The four early Marauders are not likeable. Each one has their own shortcomings. Sirius in particular is really hard to like because he is too paranoid and arrogant (I was annoyed by him when I read the article 🤭). Several people later changed their mentality due to the heroine's self-reflection. The process was very delicately written. In short, the author mostly portrayed each character very well. However, Sirius and the others sometimes felt like children, too mature.

The author's writing is very good, with delicate strokes and natural connections. The original characters are integrated and not obtrusive. The original plot has been modified just right. The psychological journey of the characters is described naturally and well. It can be seen that the author has put a lot of effort into carefully analyzing the characters of the original characters. They are not OOC. Even if they are labeled as heartthrobs, they will not fall in love with them as soon as they come on. He describes and portrays them step by step. The heroine's character is shaped with her own persistence and ideas. She is growing step by step and completing her transformation. I hope she can become strong and capable of protecting the people she wants to protect. (The author does not need to use such cumbersome vocabulary to explain in some places. Although it looks gorgeous and beautiful, there are some places that can be more concise and clear. The novel is an intracranial climax brought about by reading that stimulates the senses, like when I read some high-energy passages. In a hurry, I will skip some redundant descriptions, which will make me miss some details. The author can reduce it appropriately. Of course, these are just some of my suggestions. This unique writing style will attract people who like it. I mean my suggestions will be more popular.) The previous one was a rational evaluation, and now it's one's own feelings. Ahhhh! Do you know the author? I've really been looking for this type of novel! Finally someone wrote it! And it's so well written! It's simply a hidden gem! Such a low score is completely unworthy of the author's great writing style! The character of the heroine and the settings in the text are simply my xp! Please, please! Never stop updating! Several fan authors I read have stopped updating! The rating will definitely go up! I love you so much, author!

This is the most amazing HP fanfic I have ever read. The heroine is not written to be stronger or smarter than everyone else. Other characters also have their own wisdom and shining points. Especially the chapter I just read about Sherlock Holmes, his transcendent reasoning shocked me. There are also some marginal characters described in a few strokes in the original work that suddenly have a sense of reality and seem to be alive. Some of the fanfics I read before just made the characters too flat, giving me a sense of unreality. The teacher's writing is very good. If the teacher writes other books, I will continue to pursue [][] A very recommended book♥(ˆ⌣ˆՅ)

This comprehensive collection of English and American novels is truly a hidden gem in the ocean. The writing is very good and the plot is smooth. Sister Bao is very strong, completely at the master level, but I feel that Mei Bao has a gentle background and is very charismatic at the same time. The dog training later on was really fun for me. Watching little Barty's faith being crushed step by step made me feel excited.

It is very beautiful and I was very surprised. It is very similar to a group portrait novel. The portrayal of each character is very three-dimensional. It is not a mindless novel. The large writing style made me feel that the characters in it came alive. I felt that they were real people with flesh and blood. It is a very good book both from the overall point of view and from the details. The Peter in it is very different. I can say that I have read hundreds of hp fanfics, but most of them describe Peter as a heinous bad guy. The description in this book does not just describe him as a weak and incompetent coward, nor does it only exaggerate his courage. When faced with a choice, he will still hesitate. , But in the end he followed his inner choice and made a brave decision. I feel that it was really well portrayed, and there is a feeling that he should be like this under the influence of other people. I read some good HP fanfics. No matter how beautifully written it is, it still gives me the feeling that the characters are very OOC, but this book doesn't have that feeling at all, that's how their characters should be. Of course, it's not just Peter. The other characters are also very well portrayed, including Lily's sunny personality, James's enthusiasm and straightforwardness, Remus Lupin's gentleness, Sirius's arrogance and awkwardness, and Severus Snape's venomous tongue, inferiority complex and coldness. And our heroine, she really has a lot to bear, and her life experience can be said to be quite complicated. Her mother is Grindelwald, and her father is Malfoy. She is also the vessel of the Dark Lord. She has been tortured by the prophecy ability in Grindelwald's blood since she was 6 years old. Even so, she is still perseverant and wins the final victory with her own wisdom and courage. All in all, this book is really, really, really good to read. You definitely won't lose money if you invest in it, and it's already finished. There won't be any worries about interruptions and waiting for updates. It can be said to be perfect.

The writing style is really good. It may be a little depressing at the beginning, but in the middle and later parts, the writing becomes more and more awesome. The emotions and details of each person, as well as the description of their personal personality, are written very delicately. The connection between each event is also very smooth, and the appearance of new characters is not abrupt. Most of my I have just read the book with Liu Shui Xi, but I was really immersed in this book. At first I couldn't stand it, but as I slowly immersed myself in it, it became a book with great stamina. Although the whole book has a relatively depressing atmosphere, the emotions bursting out of this atmosphere also make people more immersed in it.

The fusion of multiple worlds is a very novel subject, but it is not easy to write, but the author can integrate it very well. The predators also fit the original work very well at the beginning, and it is very touching to see their changes. I hope the author will continue writing! Come on!!

Boss, boss, what you write is so imaginative, I can't stop reading it! 😘😘😘 The progress was very fast, and then the map was changed and it came to an abrupt end. Well. Author boss, are you really not coming back to write? I'm in tears 😢😢😢