After All the Members Singled Out Their Arrows, I Became Famous Thanks to My Magic.

Looks good! It's not an inexplicable love at first sight, but the heroine herself is a charming person. Only such a heartthrob will never get tired of it (ᵒ̴̶̷̤໐ᵒ̴̶̷̤) Long live all!

It's pretty cool, but everyone looks very mature. Whether it's psychological description or magic potion skills, they all feel like students about to graduate. We often forget that they are actually only in the first grade...

It's well written, it's a serious drama, and it's definitely not a cool novel. The heroine is so heart-wrenching! Each character is written very realistically. The four early Marauders are not likeable. Each one has their own shortcomings. Sirius in particular is really hard to like because he is too paranoid and arrogant (I was annoyed by him when I read the article [laughing]). Several people later changed their mentality due to the heroine's self-reflection. The process was very delicately written. In short, the author mostly portrayed each character very well. However, Sirius and the others sometimes felt like children, too mature.

The author's writing is very good, with delicate strokes and natural connections. The original characters are integrated and not obtrusive. The original plot has been modified just right. The psychological journey of the characters is described naturally and well. It can be seen that the author has put a lot of effort into carefully analyzing the characters of the original characters. They are not OOC. Even if they are labeled as heartthrobs, they will not fall in love with them as soon as they come on. He describes and portrays them step by step. The heroine's character is shaped with her own persistence and ideas. She is growing step by step and completing her transformation. I hope she can become strong and capable of protecting the people she wants to protect. (The author does not need to use such cumbersome vocabulary to explain in some places. Although it looks gorgeous and beautiful, there are some places that can be more concise and clear. The novel is an intracranial climax brought about by reading that stimulates the senses, like when I read some high-energy passages. In a hurry, I will skip some redundant descriptions, which will make me miss some details. The author can reduce it appropriately. Of course, these are just some of my suggestions. This unique writing style will attract people who like it. I mean my suggestions will be more popular.) The previous one was a rational evaluation, and now it's one's own feelings. Ahhhh! Do you know the author? I've really been looking for this type of novel! Finally someone wrote it! And it's so well written! It's simply a hidden gem! Such a low score is completely unworthy of the author's great writing style! The character of the heroine and the settings in the text are simply my xp! Please, please! Never stop updating! Several fan authors I read have stopped updating! The rating will definitely go up! I love you so much, author!

This is the most amazing HP fanfic I have ever read. The heroine is not written to be stronger or smarter than everyone else. Other characters also have their own wisdom and shining points. Especially the chapter I just read about Sherlock Holmes, his transcendent reasoning shocked me. There are also some marginal characters described in a few strokes in the original work that suddenly have a sense of reality and seem to be alive. Some of the fanfics I read before just made the characters too flat, giving me a sense of unreality. The teacher's writing is very good. If the teacher writes other books, I will continue to pursue [][] A very recommended book♥(ˆ⌣ˆՅ)

This comprehensive collection of English and American novels is truly a hidden gem in the ocean. The writing is very good and the plot is smooth. Sister Bao is very strong, completely at the master level, but I feel that Mei Bao has a gentle background and is very charismatic at the same time. The dog training later on was really fun for me. Watching little Barty's faith being crushed step by step made me feel excited.

The writing style is really good. It may be a little depressing at the beginning, but in the middle and later parts, the writing becomes more and more awesome. The emotions and details of each person, as well as the description of their personal personality, are written very delicately. The connection between each event is also very smooth, and the appearance of new characters is not abrupt. Most of my I have just read the book with Liu Shui Xi, but I was really immersed in this book. At first I couldn't stand it, but as I slowly immersed myself in it, it became a book with great stamina. Although the whole book has a relatively depressing atmosphere, the emotions bursting out of this atmosphere also make people more immersed in it.

It is very beautiful and I was very surprised. It is very similar to a group portrait novel. The portrayal of each character is very three-dimensional. It is not a mindless novel. The large writing style made me feel that the characters in it came alive. I felt that they were real people with flesh and blood. It is a very good book both from the overall point of view and from the details. The Peter in it is very different. I can say that I have read hundreds of hp fanfics, but most of them describe Peter as a heinous bad guy. The description in this book does not just describe him as a weak and incompetent coward, nor does it only exaggerate his courage. When faced with a choice, he will still hesitate. , But in the end he followed his inner choice and made a brave decision. I feel that it was really well portrayed, and there is a feeling that he should be like this under the influence of other people. I read some good HP fanfics. No matter how beautifully written it is, it still gives me the feeling that the characters are very OOC, but this book doesn't have that feeling at all, that's how their characters should be. Of course, it's not just Peter. The other characters are also very well portrayed, including Lily's sunny personality, James's enthusiasm and straightforwardness, Remus Lupin's gentleness, Sirius's arrogance and awkwardness, and Severus Snape's venomous tongue, inferiority complex and coldness. And our heroine, she really has a lot to bear, and her life experience can be said to be quite complicated. Her mother is Grindelwald, and her father is Malfoy. She is also the vessel of the Dark Lord. She has been tortured by the prophecy ability in Grindelwald's blood since she was 6 years old. Even so, she is still perseverant and wins the final victory with her own wisdom and courage. All in all, this book is really, really, really good to read. You definitely won't lose money if you invest in it, and it's already finished. There won't be any worries about interruptions and waiting for updates. It can be said to be perfect.

The fusion of multiple worlds is a very novel subject, but it is not easy to write, but the author can integrate it very well. The predators also fit the original work very well at the beginning, and it is very touching to see their changes. I hope the author will continue writing! Come on! !

It's pretty good. It's the first book I've read where the heroine combines technology and magic. The writing is gorgeous, but it's too gorgeous. There are too many adjectives and it's not very attractive. If you keep reading, you can reduce some unnecessary descriptions. It can be seen that the author has a good vocabulary. Overall, four stars, recommended.

Wc I can't help it. The author's writing style is so good. He describes the inner thoughts of the heroine very well and meticulously. It's not too fancy. It's really beautiful. This is the first time I've seen such a beautiful comprehensive English and American novel. It's my favorite setting. I hope the heroine can be given some other powerful abilities in the future🌚 Just saying haha, it's really beautiful and can't be expressed in words. Take a look for yourselves. The heroine's heart is really strong. When she killed the first person with the Avatar Curse, she was not confused, uneasy, or at a loss. Although she was induced by Riddle, she still strengthened her heart. I chose to protect rather than kill.

Boss, boss, what you write is so imaginative, I can't stop reading it! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] The progress was very fast, and then the map was changed and it came to an abrupt end. Well. Author boss, are you really not coming back to write? I'm in tears [crying][crying][crying]

In this drama, the teacher seems to have disappeared. The heroine does not say anything. A smart person will seek help from the elders around him. Why don't you give the notebook to the principal and teacher? Aliens invade, and there are still wizards and superheroes on Earth? They all just disappeared. Are the heroine and Clark the only ones with magic or superpowers on the entire earth? Except for some problems with the background, the heroine seems to be fighting alone. The writing in other places is very good, and the character creation is not very OOC. I can only say that the author needs to keep working hard.

Oh my god it's so beautiful! The subject matter is novel and the writing style is also very delicate and rich! ! ! But I hope that the heroine will be a little bit older in the future. [Send my heart] [Send my heart] [Send my heart] The author, you wrote it very well. Calling for you! ! But when will you return to the magical world?

My wife's writing is of very high quality! The complexity of human nature is vividly portrayed, and each character is three-dimensional. The heroine is a strong leader, who is determined to move forward. Others are no longer simply men pursuing women, but also follow the leader out of realizing their own self-worth. They are indestructible and extremely charming. Looking forward to the new life of the magical world under the leadership of the heroine [sending my heart][sending my heart]

The author's writing is really great, and the several worlds are integrated very well, without being abrupt at all. Maybe in the early stage, I couldn't adapt to the heroine's "as pale as a chrysanthemum" character, but later I got used to it [shy][shy]

The writing is so good that it is completely absorbed. I would like to call it the most beautiful HP article. The description of emotions is so delicate and invincible

Bang the bowl and wait for Nini to appear!

When does Tony Stark come out and throw the check, let the bat quickly dodge the side.

Avengers Assemble! The Justice League assembles! The Alliance of Predators assembles! Ha ha ha ha

DC Marvel HP is in chaos! Chef N is ecstatic

I've read all the hp and British and American movies on Tomato. To be honest, I don't understand why the writing is so good and why the rating is so low.

I feel the author's determination to write a book, support it.

It's great. I love reading the author. I'll update it a lot. [Sending my heart] May I ask the author, do you write about Lucius? I want to see Lucius [send heart][send heart][send heart]

I have never been used to this type of title. I was really short of books and came here when I saw the recommendation point. However, the author's writing style and content are very good, and they fit the image of the characters very well. The growth of the heroine is also very well portrayed (I won't overstate it, but it's just beautiful). I hope more readers will appreciate this work, which I think is excellent so far. Waiting for updates, thanks for meeting me.

Update quickly, it's super beautiful [send heart][send heart][send heart]

I'm here early, I'm looking forward to it [shy]

Big cheers for the author! ! ! [Adoration]

It looks great, cheers! ! !

It looks so good, I hope it will be updated [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]