Bleach: My Deathly Zanpakuto

It's good to see that there are still people who remember their tutor, and even merge him with the God of Death, making them cry. After all, compared to Naruto and Pirates, there are too few about Death, and even less about tutoring.

The 4 stars are mainly due to the overall okness and the extra points for the tutoring, but I always find it strange that the heroine is not Orihime... Maybe it's because Orihime and Kyoko are very similar, and the protagonist is a Sawada Tsunayoshi template, right? I was only halfway through the movie, and I felt that the heroine might be Long Gui, but Long Gui was really uninteresting, and the author didn't describe her charm at all. [Cover face] I read a few more chapters, but no, I couldn't stand it. It still feels too weird that the heroine is not Orihime. If the protagonist didn't follow the Sawada Tsunayoshi template, I might not care. I have no choice but to withdraw due to personal taste issues. I wish the author good luck.

The writing is good. Regarding the God of Death, I have heard a point of view. The classes in Soul Society are basically fixed, and their life spans are extremely long. Old guys and nobles occupy high positions, leaving no room for advancement at the bottom, so Aizen is making trouble, and there are still people supporting him. If there was room for improvement, no one would cause trouble.

The plot is quite interesting, but it's a pity that the tutoring element is just a golden finger. Are there any articles about tutors in the main world, and then some cheats in other worlds? I have been looking for a long time and there are really few articles about tutors. Basically, they are all discontinued or finished very early.

Come on! It's still a pretty good fan fiction. Even if I save it for a few days and read it again, I can still read it. The author's character description, abilities and storyline of the original characters are very consistent with the original work. It fits the plot of the story, but it doesn't completely follow the plot, and Pig's Foot looks like a marginalized person. For the plot, the author added some things that were consistent with the addition of the protagonist and adapted to the changes, but the general direction did not deviate from the original work. I have read several Tomato Reaper books, but this is the one I am looking forward to the follow-up plot so much. Come on come on! ! ! Work hard on coding and strive for 10 high-level chapters a day! ! ! [Laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh] Regarding the description of tutoring ability, there are too many things that are completely unfamiliar to me who have never seen tutoring. It seems a bit laborious, but I also understand that the author is explaining it for people like me who have never seen tutoring. I think everything else is fine, but I'm struggling with this. Sometimes I want to skip it directly, but I can't [cover face]

I just want to make a suggestion, if you are writing a fanfic, please feel free to post pictures.

939. It's great👍🏻👍🏻, the author is great, I read it very smoothly, and I don't feel any dissatisfaction. It's been a long time since I read a fanfic so heartily. I have watched some of both animes, so the content of the article is somewhat conceptual. Even if it is unreasonable, sometimes I can make up for it on my own. And the author has done a good job in connecting and transitioning ദ്ദി(• ˕ •マ.ᐟ, The original theatrical version of Death, etc., And the tutor's ability mechanism, etc. He has his own understanding. In order to make the article reasonable and smooth, the author will also modify the original setting appropriately, and there are supplementary explanations at the end of the chapters, so the author is really great in this regard. There are so many chapters and the number of words is so long that you don't feel tired after reading it (｡- .•) The fighting scenes are well written, very awesome☆˶> x <˶.⁺ Although it follows the plot, it is not complete. Because the male protagonist joins, there will be changes and necessary events will happen, but it will not be exactly the same. There will not be the original Spicy Knife. The plot is compact, and I was nervous while reading it. The male protagonist is firm in his beliefs, has no wanderings, and has not interfered with other forces. All efforts to become stronger are for the peace and stability of his family and friends in the world, so that they can live a stable life. "The reason why I have been able to grow up to this point is because of these friends, who have been supporting me from behind. In order for my friends and my relatives not to be harmed, I must become stronger and the strongest!" What the male protagonist said when he was beaten to pieces in a certain chapter That's it for this book review. I'm full of praise for the author's writing style and can't write anything about the male protagonist. ꒰꒪꒫꒪⌯꒱

There are many good books that no one reads. This is rare and unpopular, a tutor and the Grim Reaper. Currently there are two updates per day, which is quite nice. I hope the author can update it in the long run, and I hope more readers will come.

Although the writing is a bit lacking, it describes my fantasy in my second year of middle school very well. At that time, I also felt that my tutoring ability was very suitable for a Shinigami. However, I never found a book to fulfill my dream. However, I felt that the main character's strength improved too quickly and I didn't think it would be long. I felt that after fighting Aizen, I directly fought the Quincy. Overall, I like it very much.

Both Tutor and Bleach are my favorite anime, and this book combines them and it makes me happy! [Laughs] [Laughs] But I also want to see the Varia Troops in Tutor, and I don't know if it will be written about. [Laugh]