[No system + Protagonist Menma + Invincible text + Power development + Concept conflict]
From Menma who is limited to Tsukuyomi, he travels to Naruto in the main world of Naruto.
Losing all strength? Everything can be started from scratch!
In this life, he will develop in secret, use the ninjutsu and knowledge he has mastered, and continue to become stronger!
In this life, he wants to create an organization, establish influence, and accumulate strength!
In this life, he will follow the path of conquest, be above ten thousand people, and dominate the ninja world!
You... Who are you? !
Faced with everyone's questions.
He smiled and took off his mask: "I am both Naruto Uzumaki and Menma Uzumaki!"
Reader comments
(Bottom middle) Green•Advanced (Level 3)/7.0 Points+, mark...
Sense of substitution C, plug-in C, setting B, writing style B, rhythm C, imagination, character design C, main line C, logic B.
Extra points: none
Personal feelings: It's a little higher than the standard Naruto story, but not excellent. You said you're an old bookworm yourself, so you don't feel that the routine is lagging behind? There is nothing new, and the setting is not deep. It gradually relies on the plot and slowly becomes ordinary.
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#Objective evaluation. If you have different opinions, you can evaluate it yourself.
1. Evaluation of the novel
(1) Taking "Four-Star Green - Advanced (Level 0)/7.0 Points" as the dividing line, additional points may be deducted for other items based on the first nine evaluations.
(2) Recommendation grade evaluation criteria: Excellent S (+4), Excellent A (+2), Good B (+1), Average C (0), Poor D (-1), Extremely Poor E (-3), Unknown X (0).
(3) Sense of immersion: interlocking, rapid resonance, and immersion
(4) Plug-in: cheat settings
(5) Setting: World background, training system...
(6) Writing style and detailed description: standardized and smooth, with appropriate style
(7) Rhythm·Overall description: Relaxation and suspense setting
(8) Imagination·Plot expansion: Surprisingly innovative and self-consistent logic
(9) Character design•Main characters: three-dimensional and full, growing and changing
(10) Main line • Close to the center: clear and attractive
(11) Logic: plot logic, detail logic
(12) Extra deduction points: data, economy, structure, three perspectives, supporting roles, time, geography, knowledge...
2. Rating of the novel
(1) Shangshang (a sacred book that meets the public's taste, unexpectedly excellent)─Five-star red •Super legend (level 24)/10.0 Points+.
(2) Superior (interlocking high-scoring online articles that make people addicted to it) - ① Five-star orange + • Legend (level 22) / 10 points; ② Five-star orange • Legend (level 20) / 9.5 Points +; ③ Five-star orange - • Legend (level 18) / 9.5 Points.
(3) Shangxia (a fine book in the traditional sense, a fine book with a strange style and excellent writing) - ① Five-star purple + • Legend (level 16) / 9 points; ② Five-star purple + legend (level 14) / 8.5 Points +; ③ Five-star purple - • Legend (level 12) / 8.5 Points.
(4) Upper-middle (standard online text with mature subject matter and self-consistent logic) - ① Five-star blue + • Excellent (level 10) / 8.0 Points +; ② Five-star blue • Excellent (level 8) / 8.0 Points; ③ Five-star blue - • Excellent (level 6) / 7.5 Points +; ④ Five-star green + • Standard (level 4) / 7.5 Points.
(5) Middle to lower (standard web articles with average performance and no major problems) - ①Four-star green·Advanced (level 2)/7.0 Points+; ②Four-star green-·Advanced (level 0)/7.0 Points; ③Four-star white+·Standard (-1 level)/6. 5 Points; ④Samsung white·standard (-2 level)/6.0 Points; ⑤Samsung gray+·low level (-3 level)/5.5 Points; ⑥Samsung gray·low level (-4 level)/5.0 Points; ⑦Samsung gray -·qualified (-5 level)/4.5 Points.
(6) Xia Shang (novels with major flaws are missed) - ① Three-star unqualified (-7 levels) / 4 points; ② Three-star poor (-9 levels) / 3 points; ③ One-star poor (-11 levels) / 2 points; ④ One-star extremely poor (-13 levels) / 1 point.
(7) Xiaxia (disagreement in three views, having special hobbies, seriously affecting the reading experience, and making people physically uncomfortable) - ① Discord in three views (-15 levels)/-1 point; ② Special hobbies (-17 levels)/-3 points; ③ Slight malice (-19 levels)/-6 points; ④Malicious (-21 levels)/-7 points; ⑤Significant malice (-23 levels)/-8 points; ⑥Extreme maliciousness (-25 levels)/-9 points; ⑦Unknown (-27 levels)/-10 points.
(8) Medium (standard online article that I have no interest in at all, no evaluation) Three stars unknown/x points.
(9) Inferior (female videos mixed in, non-standard online writing) 2 stars unknown/0 points.
──Sixth edition revised evaluation, 1200 words
I have been a bookworm for more than ten years, and I have always had the idea to write one myself. I prefer Naruto anime, so I wrote a Naruto fan novel to show my shame. I hope everyone likes it [Sending Hearts]
Thank you for your support and communication. I will carefully read and adopt every opinion you have. Together we can complete the creation of "Dabao" [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]
It looks pretty good so far, it fits the original work quite well, and the characters are well controlled. I hope the author will continue to work hard.
I like this book very much. The author's innovation and description of the battle scenes, as well as the creative forces, can be seen from the mention of dragon veins in the few pictures after rescuing Hikaru Uchiha. The author should be trying to connect all the information in the theatrical version. When will it be updated?
Not bad. It looks quite comfortable.
It's pretty cool. Come on.
It looks good, but is it a single girl or multiple girls?
It looks great. Come on!
Menma, who has killed countless people, is too kind.
Okay, okay, the author wrote it well [like]
Not bad, well written
Super interesting fanfic
It suits my taste very well. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]
Not old, not old, very good-looking
Invincible invincible invincible
I'll give it 4 stars first. When will the author update it? I'll change it again. It's pretty good, but the update is slow.
Finally defected. The climax is about to begin, right?
Very, very, very, very, very, very, very beautiful.
It looks good so far, but the only drawback is that the update is slow, and the production team won't take you to rest [laughter]
It looks good, you can check it out, but the rating is too low
(Bottom middle) Green•Advanced (Level 3)/7.0 Points+, mark... Sense of substitution C, plug-in C, setting B, writing style B, rhythm C, imagination, character design C, main line C, logic B. Extra points: none Personal feelings: It's a little higher than the standard Naruto story, but not excellent. You said you're an old bookworm yourself, so you don't feel that the routine is lagging behind? There is nothing new, and the setting is not deep. It gradually relies on the plot and slowly becomes ordinary. ─────────────────── #Objective evaluation. If you have different opinions, you can evaluate it yourself. 1. Evaluation of the novel (1) Taking "Four-Star Green - Advanced (Level 0)/7.0 Points" as the dividing line, additional points may be deducted for other items based on the first nine evaluations. (2) Recommendation grade evaluation criteria: Excellent S (+4), Excellent A (+2), Good B (+1), Average C (0), Poor D (-1), Extremely Poor E (-3), Unknown X (0). (3) Sense of immersion: interlocking, rapid resonance, and immersion (4) Plug-in: cheat settings (5) Setting: World background, training system... (6) Writing style and detailed description: standardized and smooth, with appropriate style (7) Rhythm·Overall description: Relaxation and suspense setting (8) Imagination·Plot expansion: Surprisingly innovative and self-consistent logic (9) Character design•Main characters: three-dimensional and full, growing and changing (10) Main line • Close to the center: clear and attractive (11) Logic: plot logic, detail logic (12) Extra deduction points: data, economy, structure, three perspectives, supporting roles, time, geography, knowledge... 2. Rating of the novel (1) Shangshang (a sacred book that meets the public's taste, unexpectedly excellent)─Five-star red •Super legend (level 24)/10.0 Points+. (2) Superior (interlocking high-scoring online articles that make people addicted to it) - ① Five-star orange + • Legend (level 22) / 10 points; ② Five-star orange • Legend (level 20) / 9.5 Points +; ③ Five-star orange - • Legend (level 18) / 9.5 Points. (3) Shangxia (a fine book in the traditional sense, a fine book with a strange style and excellent writing) - ① Five-star purple + • Legend (level 16) / 9 points; ② Five-star purple + legend (level 14) / 8.5 Points +; ③ Five-star purple - • Legend (level 12) / 8.5 Points. (4) Upper-middle (standard online text with mature subject matter and self-consistent logic) - ① Five-star blue + • Excellent (level 10) / 8.0 Points +; ② Five-star blue • Excellent (level 8) / 8.0 Points; ③ Five-star blue - • Excellent (level 6) / 7.5 Points +; ④ Five-star green + • Standard (level 4) / 7.5 Points. (5) Middle to lower (standard web articles with average performance and no major problems) - ①Four-star green·Advanced (level 2)/7.0 Points+; ②Four-star green-·Advanced (level 0)/7.0 Points; ③Four-star white+·Standard (-1 level)/6. 5 Points; ④Samsung white·standard (-2 level)/6.0 Points; ⑤Samsung gray+·low level (-3 level)/5.5 Points; ⑥Samsung gray·low level (-4 level)/5.0 Points; ⑦Samsung gray -·qualified (-5 level)/4.5 Points. (6) Xia Shang (novels with major flaws are missed) - ① Three-star unqualified (-7 levels) / 4 points; ② Three-star poor (-9 levels) / 3 points; ③ One-star poor (-11 levels) / 2 points; ④ One-star extremely poor (-13 levels) / 1 point. (7) Xiaxia (disagreement in three views, having special hobbies, seriously affecting the reading experience, and making people physically uncomfortable) - ① Discord in three views (-15 levels)/-1 point; ② Special hobbies (-17 levels)/-3 points; ③ Slight malice (-19 levels)/-6 points; ④Malicious (-21 levels)/-7 points; ⑤Significant malice (-23 levels)/-8 points; ⑥Extreme maliciousness (-25 levels)/-9 points; ⑦Unknown (-27 levels)/-10 points. (8) Medium (standard online article that I have no interest in at all, no evaluation) Three stars unknown/x points. (9) Inferior (female videos mixed in, non-standard online writing) 2 stars unknown/0 points. ──Sixth edition revised evaluation, 1200 words
I have been a bookworm for more than ten years, and I have always had the idea to write one myself. I prefer Naruto anime, so I wrote a Naruto fan novel to show my shame. I hope everyone likes it [Sending Hearts] Thank you for your support and communication. I will carefully read and adopt every opinion you have. Together we can complete the creation of "Dabao" [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]
It looks pretty good so far, it fits the original work quite well, and the characters are well controlled. I hope the author will continue to work hard.
I like this book very much. The author's innovation and description of the battle scenes, as well as the creative forces, can be seen from the mention of dragon veins in the few pictures after rescuing Hikaru Uchiha. The author should be trying to connect all the information in the theatrical version. When will it be updated?
Not bad. It looks quite comfortable.
It's pretty cool. Come on.
It looks good, but is it a single girl or multiple girls?
It looks great. Come on!
Menma, who has killed countless people, is too kind.
Okay, okay, the author wrote it well [like]
Not bad, well written
Super interesting fanfic
It suits my taste very well. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]
Not old, not old, very good-looking
Invincible invincible invincible
I'll give it 4 stars first. When will the author update it? I'll change it again. It's pretty good, but the update is slow.
Finally defected. The climax is about to begin, right?
Very, very, very, very, very, very, very beautiful.
It looks good so far, but the only drawback is that the update is slow, and the production team won't take you to rest [laughter]
It looks good, you can check it out, but the rating is too low