Be Good, Baby, Come Into My Arms

It's a sweet story, not abusive, but I think some details can be improved. For example, I think Lin Xunan's relationship changes a bit quickly. I feel like I hate resisting in one second, but I fall in love with her in the next second.

Labeling should be mandatory, not my cup of tea. In the early stage, it is basically the kind of forced strength, and Lin is relatively simple... In the early stage, it should be considered a forced single arrow. If you like this, you can take a look [Thinking] There is also some threat and coercion in the early stage. Lin is unwilling, but if he does something intimate (such as kissing), will Lin sink if he kisses? ? ! [Aggrieved] I don't think it's appropriate. Actually, it's just that I don't like it very much. If you like this kind of thing, you can check it out.

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I like it, I like it, I like it very much, please make a sequel soon!

It's quite beautiful and worth a look.

Very beautiful, Shuang Jie sweet pet, the secondary CP is also good Lin Xunan❤️Yan Zhou

Very good-looking, but doesn't feel like a boss. A little too gentle

Overall, it's pretty good. It's a bit forced in the early stages, but quite sweet later on.

Although it is short, it is very interesting

I like the author's works. I can't help but read them again and again. I look forward to your next masterpiece.