**

The subject matter is good, it just depends on whether the author can keep writing. The first time I saw someone writing about Yamato was in a comprehensive manga novel.

It's pretty good. The author doesn't need to care about bad reviews. It's normal for fan fiction to exist. You don't need to care about it. I quite like Yamato. Of course, I just like the contrast [smile] [smile] [smile] For example, the careless Yamato is bullied by the heroine [smile] [smile] [smile] It's a pity that this book is no longer available.

I think it's pretty good now. The character of Yamato is also very good [facepalm]. Even though it's called Lily, I feel it's completely acceptable now. There's no embarrassing plot or anything, and the interweaving of the characters is pretty good. Maybe it's because I don't pay special attention to the description of combat or combat power. I feel that the description is pretty good now and nothing too outrageous. Anyway, author, come on! Hope to see better development! [Sending Hearts]

Okay, okay, give it a recommendation and get hundreds of positive reviews

Personal feeling is good

Come on, it's pretty good

It's okay, but as the book reviewers said, it's really not like the early days of Time Traveler. You can change the text, but I have to say that it fits the temperament of the characters in One Piece.

In fact, it's okay. After all, the immortals are here, but the writing style is a bit immature, and the protagonist's character is a bit... Come on, author!

This is the first time I've seen someone write about traveling through time in Yamato. It's very good and very interesting.

It's nice to look at, and the fighting rhythm is very good.

Come on, update, it's very good, and also, about the protagonist who hasn't watched One Piece, I can write it in advance. Those people are really talented people. The protagonist just chatted with Ace for a few words, and then it was over. Did he find Ace? Are you shy in front of Ace? Do you like Ace? It's really a talent taken out of context.

Very good, very beautiful, worth recommending

A very interesting One Piece fanfic

It's a rare Yamato protagonist story, it's great, please go to the author.

Are missing persons finally back?

A pure-blooded pirate fandom, I didn't follow the group and give it a five-star rating. It's just that it's too strong and feels a bit over the top. The post is too high, and the protagonist feels silly like a child.

As soon as Luffy went to sea, the sky fell, and all the scheduled crew members ran to other people's ships [face covering]