
The Outcast: With the Investiture of the Gods in Hand, I Shock the Old Celestial Master!
一人:手握封神榜,震惊老天师!
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- 165k Words
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It's very beautiful and doesn't have any poisonous points. It's in line with the original work and I recommend everyone to read it. I can't take poison by myself 😏
I feel that the author has thought too little about that wisp of immortal energy. You have to know how much energy it takes to convert it into a ray of immortal energy. There is a lot of room for manipulation, especially if you fully control the power of the immortal energy to the point of perfection, you can use a ray of immortal energy to cast a golden light spell, which is very powerful. I feel that the author has a very small vision of a ray of immortal energy. It seems that Qi can only be used in this way, and the space that can be operated is directly omitted. What is even more outrageous is that just like drawing out a Dharma Xiang Tian and Earth, you can only use Dharma Xiang Tiandi. Who said that immortal Qi can only be drawn through the system to draw skills? The author, I suggest the author to study similar novels. Such a large operating space is completely ignored by the author. What do you think? The usage is rough.
The idea is good, but the plot is too confusing. Xia He's body's spontaneous charm is not the strange eyes. The first scene of Luo Tian Dajiao is a chaotic battle between four people. Where does the one-on-one come from? Where is the baby's classic fire unicorn bracelet? Where is Zhang Chulan's climbing chain? Zhang Lingyu is a player, but who is the referee? Where did Feng Xingtong get Liu Kunsheng from in the beginning? Still old friends? What about Wang Zizhong? It's all a messy plot.
Great review, the charm has been changed to Strange Eyes. The protagonist's magic, heaven and earth are seen by strangers and they say it's just a natural phenomenon. You have to believe in science. You are a stranger and different from ordinary people. You have to believe in science. The author wrote Bullfrog
Brainless pretense throughout the process
It's okay, the content is quite attractive, but there is a bug, which is shocking. It would really be shocking to crush a useless person at the beginning. What about after Luo Tian Dajiao? If the shock system can't be shocked, it's useless. It's better to communicate with the list of gods and then use the guardian spirit and invite the gods to take over.
Why did you let Xia He go?
The interspersed look of the magic modification is extremely poor