Honkai: Star Rail: Treasure-Gathering System, Flames from the Start

Generally speaking, the book is readable, but there are many typos in the front. I don't know what the meaning of the prologue is. At least I read more than a dozen chapters, but I didn't see the relationship between the baby and the protagonist. Moreover, in reality, it is best to write less about the daily fights and jokes between girls, and not write them into lily prose. The author's background is really not as good as writing that the protagonist is invincible and can travel everywhere in the world. There is no need to limit the strength at the beginning. No matter how you write it, you can destroy the world at will.

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Well, come on, after all, it's a newcomer who writes well. More typos

You said it's not good to name the main character. He has to be named Tang.