The Manga Starts with Kamen Rider

Not bad. From the first glance of the key golden three chapters, I felt good enough to continue reading. I hope the quality can be guaranteed in the future. It will be more interesting and more interesting [laughter]

It's super good-looking. It's one of the few zongzi stories in Tomato. The only shortcoming is that it's too short. And how to deal with the relationship between Qiong and the protagonist? In addition, the author should update more. As long as you keep updating, I will catch up to the end.

The characters are good, the plot is good, the progress is good, the imagination is good, the emotions of the characters are good, and the character writing is even better. Here are six good ones! But there is only one thing that prevents me from giving this book five stars (I originally planned to give it three stars but it is really good [smile]) So when does the protagonist live for himself? There are also so many anime characters who are just passers-by, which makes it difficult for me. As long as it is about knights, I think this book is great, but it adds so many anime characters, let's add them, and there are not many "dramas" and no emotional drama. And then I don't see the love that Vadasiva wants to see. At present, it seems that the anime characters are just passers-by. The different view of knights is that after winning the dungeon, the next dungeon is given and the protagonist is given a vague goal to "go home". What is the concept of home? It is typical to change the soup without changing the medicine, but it also gives people the feeling that some auxiliary medicines of little use are added to the medicine. This is what I believed in before, but if I don't change it later, this book will only remain silent. The biggest reason is that you added anime characters, and the author happens to have the ability to write the most reductive character of the characters. It ended up giving me a big load. Of course, what I said is not absolute, ① because those who like to watch anime may not necessarily watch Knights, ② those who like to watch Knights may not necessarily watch anime, and ③ there may be many people like me who watch both. Therefore, this book will definitely be screening readers in the early stage. As for those who can follow it, I personally analyze that the ② type of people are mainly the ① type. For example, there are also people in the ① type who have not watched the anime appearing in the article, or who have no great regrets or obsession with the anime characters.

It is of relatively high quality among fanfics, with clear logic, no messy emotional lines, the plot is not procrastinating, and the protagonist is a bit like Tiandao's character. The plot doesn't have much ups and downs, and it looks a bit like a narrative in Chinese. Some of the logic and emotions in it are not explained clearly, and most of them are skipped directly. Watching it for a long time makes you want to sleep.

The author is simply a genius. He does a comprehensive comic and also brings rice dumplings to play with. More importantly, he has Qiongmei. I hope that he can also have fights with others in the future, such as Kotori, Shishenai, Qizins, etc. [Laughing evilly]

What I have seen so far is very refreshing, so let me talk about what I have seen so far. The fighting scenes in this article are quite clean and tidy. There are no details that need to be paid attention to. The battle scenes are also quite violent and aesthetic. The depictions are very clear and visible. You can basically picture it in your mind at a glance. So whether it's a female protagonist or multiple female protagonists, it just needs to be considered if the writing is good.

I only watched it after seeing You Qiongmei. I haven't watched Kamen Rider very much, so I was a little confused when I watched it. But the fighting descriptions are quite good, I hope to add more comic elements.

The early stages of this book are very good, except for some unclear explanations at times. The description of the battle scenes and the rendering of emotions are quite good. The description of the protagonist's emotions is also very delicate.

I have to say that the writing is really good. Anyway, among the variety comics and Kamen Rider that I read, the writing is definitely in the top three. Come on! Author. Just keep it this way, at least two updates a day. I really like it! I hope I can stick to it and not finish it!

This book should be one of the few and relatively good Zongzi articles in Tomato, but I don't understand why the score is so low. I still hope everyone will read it. Except for the slow pace, the overall content and plot are very good, but the updates are a bit slow.

Super pretty! Bloody violence, family man! Duanmuyan in Navari, the killing machine in grandma's rice dumplings. Take a dozen of three small boos. Everything is fine for now. ദ്ദി˶>𖥦<)✧

It looks good. The details described by the author are very good, but I think it can be said that it is a second personality. That way they will be more accepting. Although I have only read Chapter 9, I can see that the author's writing style is very good and the details are well described. The battle scenes are also very recommended.

At first, I just thought it was a well-written Amazon fanfic, but until the Heisei series appeared later, I knew it was not simple.

So far, it's okay, and it fits the plot, world view, etc. However, the author has added the world view of Yajituo and the world view of the King of Demons to the source of the protagonist's power later. It depends on how to write it to make it more reasonable. And the label is a comprehensive comic. I am very curious if there are other characters added? This is a book I can recommend everyone to read.

It's also a very good fanfic in Zongzi. I highly recommend [Top Post][Top Post][Top Post]

The author's writing style and the integration of various elements are very good. Although strange DNA is added from time to time, the integration of this comprehensive comic theme is very well written. The interest of the story cannot be said. As an excellent work, the only problem at present is the length issue. I hope the author can finish it.

It's a very good script. When I first read it, I was wondering if the interspersed comics would have some counter-effects, but it turned out that I was wrong. It made up for part of the interest of the plot, but made the plot a bit bloated. The main characters of various anime would greatly suppress the main plot, but the author directly cut it off from the previous plot, making the plot seem smooth.

It's so exciting [laughing], it's not enough. I want to see the blood flowing into the mouth of the river. The author keeps it up. It's so exciting, so exciting, so exciting [laughing]

The protagonist's character is full of reason and a touch of tenderness And it has clear goals It looks really comfortable

It's beautiful. It's really beautiful. I don't know if I can write such a score.

Well written author, I like it very much, please stick to it

It's very good, at least in my opinion, the transitions don't seem too stiff, the battle scenes are also very detailed, the combat power balance is also good, and the plot development is also unexpected, but it is very well done.

Nice! Highly recommended! This is the zongzi article that real men should read! It touches the flesh, the heart and the lungs. There are not many Zongzi articles to begin with, but this should be said to be the pinnacle of Zongzi articles (personal opinion). In short, it is still two words, highly recommended!

It's very good. After more than 50 pictures, maybe I haven't watched much of Kamen Rider, and it feels a bit confusing [Thinking]

Damn it, the knight novel has excellent writing and plot. If it maintains this level in the future, it will be top-notch.

It's well written. Can the author consider the creature style of SIC? It's super cool and seems more suitable for the protagonist's fighting style.

Not bad. Grandma Zong is written very well. I just don't know how long the plot is going to be, whether there is a daily routine, whether it will be about multiple knights or just Grandma Zong. But overall it's pretty good.

Grandma's rice dumplings are one of the better ones. Xiaoshuang can watch the brothers.

Apart from some minor flaws, the problems are not major and the future is very promising [Chigua]

Surprisingly pretty