There is such a magical world, and there is a kind of specific place in this world. There may be wild beasts, vicious people, and demons in these places, and they can be killed and eliminated. Even if they are completely leveled, it only takes a certain period of time for the knocked down mountains to reappear, the filled lakes are still sparkling, and the burned woods are still lush. Even the completely eliminated creatures will still wander in fixed places.
There is also a specific kind of secret realm, which is either a gift from God or a gift from heaven. These places often have a lot of restrictions. Only a fixed small number of people can enter it after reaching a certain level of strength. Just like those special places, no matter how the inside is destroyed, as long as all the people who entered it come out and go in again, everything will be the same as before.
When Feng Yuan traveled through time, he discovered that only if he killed these monsters would he get the drops, just like fighting monsters in the game to clear dungeons.
The locals can only gain something by collecting materials from monsters, refresh points or terrain materials in dungeons, and various treasure chests.
And apart from that, they don't even have any experience!
Reader comments
(Upper middle) Blue-•Excellent (Level 6)/7.5 Points+
Sense of substitution B, plug-in C, setting C, writing style A, rhythm B, imagination B, character design C, main plot C, logic B
Extra points: none
Personal feelings: The following settings are taken into account. The title is that only the protagonist can drop it, and then a bunch of time-travelers pop out. (Plug-ins, settings, main plot, evaluation -1) Since the Zhao family is written about the protagonist, what about the follow-up? Will it dig a hole and not fill it? (Sense of immersion, rhythm, character design, rating -1)
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#Objective evaluation. If you have different opinions, you can evaluate it yourself.
1. Evaluation Criteria·Seventh Edition
(1) Recommendation grade evaluation criteria: Excellent S (+4), Excellent A (+2), Good B (+1), Average C (0), Poor D (-1), Extremely Poor E (-3), Unknown X (0).
(2) Recommendation grade evaluation process: ① Score according to the following (3), (4), and (5), and use (6) to make corrections. ② Calculate the total score according to (1). ③Refer to the level of the work, use additional deduction points to make corrections, and finally arrive at the evaluation.
(3-1) Logic self-consistency: plug-in C, setting C, character C
(3-2) Overall feeling: sense of substitution C, plug-in C, rhythm C
(4-1) Difficulty bonus: Rhythm A, Imagination A, Main Line B
(4-2) Details meet the standard: Writing A, Brainstorming B, Logic A
(5-1) Theme bonus: Writing S, Rhythm S, Imagination S
(5-2) Rigorous logic: writing style S, character design S, logic S
(6) Creative bonus...
2. Evaluation of online articles
(1) Taking "Four-Star Green - Advanced (Level 0)/7.0 Points" as the dividing line, additional points may be deducted for other items based on the first nine evaluations.
(2) Sense of immersion: interlocking, rapid resonance, and immersion
(3) Plug-in: cheat settings
(4) Setting: World background, training system...
(5) Writing style and detailed description: standardized and smooth, with appropriate style
(6) Rhythm·Overall description: Relaxation and suspense setting
(7) Imagination·Plot expansion: Surprisingly innovative and self-consistent logic
(8) Character design•Main characters: three-dimensional and full, growing and changing
(9) Main line • Close to the center: clear and attractive
(10) Logic: plot logic, detail logic
(11) Extra deduction points: data, economy, structure, three perspectives, supporting roles, time, geography, knowledge...
3. Rating of online articles
(1) Shangshang (a sacred book that meets the public's taste, unexpectedly excellent)─Five-star red •Super legend (level 24)/10.0 Points+.
(2) Superior (interlocking high-scoring online articles that make people addicted to it) - ① Five-star orange + • Legend (level 22) / 10 points; ② Five-star orange • Legend (level 20) / 9.5 Points +; ③ Five-star orange - • Legend (level 18) / 9.5 Points.
(3) Shang Xia (high-quality online articles, up to standard in all aspects, bonus or rigorous logic according to the writing theme) - ① Five-star purple + • Legend (level 16) / 9 points; ② Five-star purple • Legend (level 14) / 8.5 Points +; ③ Five-star purple - • Legend (level 12) / 8.5 Points.
(4) Above-average (excellent online writing, writing difficulty bonus or details meet the standard, one of them meets the standard) - ① Five-star blue + • Excellent (level 10) / 8.0 Points +; ② Five-star blue • Excellent (level 8) / 8.0 Points; ③ Five-star blue - • Excellent (level 6) / 7.5 Points +; ④ Five-star green + • Standard (level 4) / 7.5 Points.
(5) Next in the middle (high-standard online writing, logical self-consistency + overall feeling, all up to standard) - ① Four-star green • Advanced (level 2) / 7.0 Points +; ② Four-star green - • Advanced (level 0) / 7.0 Points
(6) Middle to lower two (standard online text, logically self-consistent or overall feeling, one of them meets the standard) - ① Four-star white + standard (-1 level) / 6.5 Points; ② Three-star white + standard (-2 level) / 6.0 Points;
(7) Middle and lower three (defective web articles) - ① Three-star gray + • Low level (-3 level) / 5.5 Points; ② Three-star gray • Low level (-4 level) / 5.0 Points; ③ Three-star gray - • Qualified (-5 level) / 4.5 Points.
(8) Xia Shang (novels with major flaws are missed) - ① Three stars are unqualified (-7 levels) / 4 points; ② Three stars are poor (-9 levels) / 3 points; ③ One star is poor (-11 levels) / 2 points; ④ One star is extremely poor (-13 levels) / 1 point.
(9) Xiaxia (disagreement in three views, having special hobbies, seriously affecting the reading experience, and making people physically uncomfortable) - ① Discord in three views (-15 levels)/-1 point; ② Special hobbies (-17 levels)/-3 points; ③ Slight malice (-19 levels)/-6 points; ④Malicious (-21 levels)/-7 points; ⑤Significant malice (-23 levels)/-8 points; ⑥Extreme maliciousness (-25 levels)/-9 points; ⑦Unknown (-27 levels)/-10 points.
(10) Medium (standard online article that I have no interest in at all, no evaluation) Three stars unknown/x points.
(11) Inferior (female channel mixed in, non-standard online writing) 2 stars unknown/0 points.
4. Evaluation template
(1) Operation process: ① Take a screenshot, ② Recognize the picture, ③ Select the recognized location, ④ Copy to the clipboard, ⑤ Paste the comment.
(2) Evaluation template
(Bottom two) White + Standard (-1 level)/6.5 Points
Sense of substitution, plug-ins, settings, writing, rhythm, imagination, characters, main line, logic.
Additional deductions:
Personal feelings:
(3) Remarks
①The character limit for Tomato comments is 150
②Copy (2) evaluation template, template characters 62/150
——Evaluation of "Seventh Edition Revised", 1,700 words+
It feels a bit like the subtitle of "I crush the world after seeing the blood bar", but the world view is a little lower, multiple worlds compete, and the travelers of the original world, each traveler is a passage, causing the secret realms in this world to constantly emerge.
It's a bit impatient to read this book as a game text, but if you read this book as an astronomical text, it should be that Chapter 40 has just left the novice village. Although these dungeons can only refresh experience, equipment and skills, there should be dungeons with a complete world view to go later, and the background of the main world has not been explained clearly. These are things that can be written in depth. The forty chapters of this book can still be considered readable. In the future, we can also look forward to whether the author can write it well.
Hey, it's written like this, so it's a good thing to finish it early
Okay, okay, this book is pretty good. It's just that his current combat power seems a bit overwhelming.
The writing is quite enjoyable, but the combat power seems to increase a bit too quickly. It depends on how the author handles it later.
Whether it looks good or not, it's really good.
I have read the whole book on April 3, 2025. Today is my birthday. Happy birthday to myself.
The writing is so-so, four stars⭐encourage
It's okay, you can see it, slight flaws can be ignored
(Upper middle) Blue-•Excellent (Level 6)/7.5 Points+ Sense of substitution B, plug-in C, setting C, writing style A, rhythm B, imagination B, character design C, main plot C, logic B Extra points: none Personal feelings: The following settings are taken into account. The title is that only the protagonist can drop it, and then a bunch of time-travelers pop out. (Plug-ins, settings, main plot, evaluation -1) Since the Zhao family is written about the protagonist, what about the follow-up? Will it dig a hole and not fill it? (Sense of immersion, rhythm, character design, rating -1) ─────────────────── #Objective evaluation. If you have different opinions, you can evaluate it yourself. 1. Evaluation Criteria·Seventh Edition (1) Recommendation grade evaluation criteria: Excellent S (+4), Excellent A (+2), Good B (+1), Average C (0), Poor D (-1), Extremely Poor E (-3), Unknown X (0). (2) Recommendation grade evaluation process: ① Score according to the following (3), (4), and (5), and use (6) to make corrections. ② Calculate the total score according to (1). ③Refer to the level of the work, use additional deduction points to make corrections, and finally arrive at the evaluation. (3-1) Logic self-consistency: plug-in C, setting C, character C (3-2) Overall feeling: sense of substitution C, plug-in C, rhythm C (4-1) Difficulty bonus: Rhythm A, Imagination A, Main Line B (4-2) Details meet the standard: Writing A, Brainstorming B, Logic A (5-1) Theme bonus: Writing S, Rhythm S, Imagination S (5-2) Rigorous logic: writing style S, character design S, logic S (6) Creative bonus... 2. Evaluation of online articles (1) Taking "Four-Star Green - Advanced (Level 0)/7.0 Points" as the dividing line, additional points may be deducted for other items based on the first nine evaluations. (2) Sense of immersion: interlocking, rapid resonance, and immersion (3) Plug-in: cheat settings (4) Setting: World background, training system... (5) Writing style and detailed description: standardized and smooth, with appropriate style (6) Rhythm·Overall description: Relaxation and suspense setting (7) Imagination·Plot expansion: Surprisingly innovative and self-consistent logic (8) Character design•Main characters: three-dimensional and full, growing and changing (9) Main line • Close to the center: clear and attractive (10) Logic: plot logic, detail logic (11) Extra deduction points: data, economy, structure, three perspectives, supporting roles, time, geography, knowledge... 3. Rating of online articles (1) Shangshang (a sacred book that meets the public's taste, unexpectedly excellent)─Five-star red •Super legend (level 24)/10.0 Points+. (2) Superior (interlocking high-scoring online articles that make people addicted to it) - ① Five-star orange + • Legend (level 22) / 10 points; ② Five-star orange • Legend (level 20) / 9.5 Points +; ③ Five-star orange - • Legend (level 18) / 9.5 Points. (3) Shang Xia (high-quality online articles, up to standard in all aspects, bonus or rigorous logic according to the writing theme) - ① Five-star purple + • Legend (level 16) / 9 points; ② Five-star purple • Legend (level 14) / 8.5 Points +; ③ Five-star purple - • Legend (level 12) / 8.5 Points. (4) Above-average (excellent online writing, writing difficulty bonus or details meet the standard, one of them meets the standard) - ① Five-star blue + • Excellent (level 10) / 8.0 Points +; ② Five-star blue • Excellent (level 8) / 8.0 Points; ③ Five-star blue - • Excellent (level 6) / 7.5 Points +; ④ Five-star green + • Standard (level 4) / 7.5 Points. (5) Next in the middle (high-standard online writing, logical self-consistency + overall feeling, all up to standard) - ① Four-star green • Advanced (level 2) / 7.0 Points +; ② Four-star green - • Advanced (level 0) / 7.0 Points (6) Middle to lower two (standard online text, logically self-consistent or overall feeling, one of them meets the standard) - ① Four-star white + standard (-1 level) / 6.5 Points; ② Three-star white + standard (-2 level) / 6.0 Points; (7) Middle and lower three (defective web articles) - ① Three-star gray + • Low level (-3 level) / 5.5 Points; ② Three-star gray • Low level (-4 level) / 5.0 Points; ③ Three-star gray - • Qualified (-5 level) / 4.5 Points. (8) Xia Shang (novels with major flaws are missed) - ① Three stars are unqualified (-7 levels) / 4 points; ② Three stars are poor (-9 levels) / 3 points; ③ One star is poor (-11 levels) / 2 points; ④ One star is extremely poor (-13 levels) / 1 point. (9) Xiaxia (disagreement in three views, having special hobbies, seriously affecting the reading experience, and making people physically uncomfortable) - ① Discord in three views (-15 levels)/-1 point; ② Special hobbies (-17 levels)/-3 points; ③ Slight malice (-19 levels)/-6 points; ④Malicious (-21 levels)/-7 points; ⑤Significant malice (-23 levels)/-8 points; ⑥Extreme maliciousness (-25 levels)/-9 points; ⑦Unknown (-27 levels)/-10 points. (10) Medium (standard online article that I have no interest in at all, no evaluation) Three stars unknown/x points. (11) Inferior (female channel mixed in, non-standard online writing) 2 stars unknown/0 points. 4. Evaluation template (1) Operation process: ① Take a screenshot, ② Recognize the picture, ③ Select the recognized location, ④ Copy to the clipboard, ⑤ Paste the comment. (2) Evaluation template (Bottom two) White + Standard (-1 level)/6.5 Points Sense of substitution, plug-ins, settings, writing, rhythm, imagination, characters, main line, logic. Additional deductions: Personal feelings: (3) Remarks ①The character limit for Tomato comments is 150 ②Copy (2) evaluation template, template characters 62/150 ——Evaluation of "Seventh Edition Revised", 1,700 words+
It feels a bit like the subtitle of "I crush the world after seeing the blood bar", but the world view is a little lower, multiple worlds compete, and the travelers of the original world, each traveler is a passage, causing the secret realms in this world to constantly emerge.
It's a bit impatient to read this book as a game text, but if you read this book as an astronomical text, it should be that Chapter 40 has just left the novice village. Although these dungeons can only refresh experience, equipment and skills, there should be dungeons with a complete world view to go later, and the background of the main world has not been explained clearly. These are things that can be written in depth. The forty chapters of this book can still be considered readable. In the future, we can also look forward to whether the author can write it well. Hey, it's written like this, so it's a good thing to finish it early
Okay, okay, this book is pretty good. It's just that his current combat power seems a bit overwhelming.
The writing is quite enjoyable, but the combat power seems to increase a bit too quickly. It depends on how the author handles it later.
Whether it looks good or not, it's really good.
I have read the whole book on April 3, 2025. Today is my birthday. Happy birthday to myself.
The writing is so-so, four stars⭐encourage
It's okay, you can see it, slight flaws can be ignored
Very well written, cheers