One Person: a Great Start, Overwhelming the Eight Wonders

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is more focused. When you are on the third watch, the little praise starts to sound, and the number of dead harvests starts to decrease. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are ten o'clock, the great Confucian's management is deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates. [Sinister smile]

"The Tao Weird Immortal"! This book focuses on warmth and healing. 1. The description of family relationships is also very good, and you will become familiar with the daughter-in-law's family as soon as you meet them. 2. In order to help the master become an immortal, the protagonist almost killed himself, but the master kept his promise and saved lives countless times after he became an immortal. 3. The first-line apprentice, in the end, was willing to give up his life for the sake of the protagonist's sobriety. In the latest chapter, the apprentice subconsciously transforms into a master to fight alongside him! 4. The protagonist's ability is also very strong. He only needs to pay a little pain to gain power from the gods, and there are more than 5. One god is optimistic about him, one gives him skills and memories, and the other saves his life countless times. He only needs to climb the stairs. 6. This book is so beautiful and touching. I can't count the joys of it. Everyone, go and listen to it! Could it be that I, Hongzhong Club, lied to you?

The main topic is okay, but it would be too poisonous if Xia He didn't die. Some people think it looks good for the male protagonist to have a harem. I think it depends on what kind of person the male protagonist is. With a character like the protagonist, it would be smoothest for Xia He to be eaten to death by the protagonist when he transforms into a worm.

Hmm, very good! This is a book that can be compared with "Grandpa Ox, God of War", "White Snake" and "Ultra Son-in-law"

Very nice. The protagonist is neither brainless nor funny, does not play tricks, and is very powerful. But the disadvantage is that the harem story is about giving women away all day long. Vomit.

It's so cool, it's so cool to see, let's go up the stairs! ... Climb the steps! Haha... Haha... Haha, I can't tell... I really can't tell! I want to read this book! No... No... I don't want to see it... Haha!

The love line is really a super poisonous point. The author hasn't changed it for so many chapters, and I guess he won't change it in the future. The rest is okay. The most important thing is that it can be updated continuously for so long without running away. It is considered good in the fanfic. Four stars are an encouragement.

Persuasive letter When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you make the third update, the weak praise field begins to speak out, and the number of dead harvests begins to decrease. When you finish the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates.

Come on everyone, I can't poison this stone by myself [vomit] Anyone who can read more than five chapters is [like]

I originally suspected that 99% of the people who gave five stars were sitting and forgetting, but after reading this book for dozens of hours, I found that it is indeed a good book. One person has the best, and this book is the best among fans.

I met an uncle on Tomato. We chatted for more than half a year and the conversation was always good. Suddenly he asked to meet. I hesitated. I said I was a student. He said he didn't mind and we were just ordinary friends, so I agreed. I asked for his photo. He was an ordinary guy who didn't look annoying. He was not far from my city. We made an appointment to meet at a milk tea shop in Wanda. We didn't choose to meet familiar people on our days off. I got there first. Because he had to drive for 2 hours, I looked at the photos while waiting and thought it would be a "car rollover scene", because the mobile phone has a beauty function, but when he got out of the Mercedes-Benz, I recognized him at a glance. He looked better in person than on the mobile phone, and he was also the type I particularly admired, and he also recognized him. I was stunned. I didn't know what to say so I just stood there. In order to break the embarrassment, he suggested giving me a hug. I said yes, but he politely touched my head and called me a kid. My face suddenly turned red and my heart was beating fast. We sat in the milk tea shop for a while. We went to have a meal. He basically didn't eat much. He was peeling shrimps and picking fish bones for me during the whole process. When we walked out of the restaurant after dinner, he held my hand and I didn't break away. He said he would send me there at 12. He was afraid that it would be bad if I stayed out for too long. I said I could just take a taxi back. He insisted on sending me back, but I couldn't help but he had to agree. The atmosphere in the car was a bit subtle. I lowered my head and played with my phone to relieve my pounding heart. He turned on the speaker and said to me: "If the author doesn't update, I will kill you!"

In the plot, some parts are probably made up, but that doesn't stop it from being a good one. He believed it, he believed it, this idea is really interesting

Really beautiful It's just that the protagonist sometimes feels like he has a low IQ But most of them are very cool The fan writing is very good. I like Tao Weird Fairy and Under One Person [laugh][laugh][laugh] Let's complain, the author is really slow to update [shy]

I realized that the world is composed of true and false, false and false, so why bother, anything you can't distinguish is false. I have become a Taoist! Done! Done! Done! Master Tao, I am done! Hahahahaha! Three flowers gather together! Transform into an immortal! Ha ha ha ha! I saw it! Nantianmen! Bai Yujing! I saw it! Hahahahaha, do you see that I have become an immortal, the sky fire trains the body, the sky steel stabs the soul, the three flowers return to the origin, the gas disappears, and I become an immortal. Why is there a trace of fear in your eyes? Look, I have become an immortal, hahahaha!

Zuo Wangdao highly recommends this book. It is rare. The emotional lines are very well drawn and the character descriptions are very standard. It is similar to Taogui. (Address: Bai Yujing Reviewer: Zuowangdao·Hongzhong)

There is no big poisonous point after watching it. The protagonist can be more crazy, and the protagonist has too few tricks to attack (only Juan Daqianlu). The subsequent plot is relatively slow and the protagonist has few roles. Overall good, five stars for encouragement

Not bad, not bad, he looks a bit like Huowang Ge

Curious enough, many people who write Daqianlu only use Daqianlu as a game skill. There is an operation process for this, which is quite weird. The protagonist will grow stronger and Nestorian will not

Well. . . Is this mainstream abuse? It's a bit rare now.

The five stars are for everyone to read what Yun Xiaogui wrote.

This is very interesting. It's super good-looking. If you haven't watched Dao Wei before, you can give it a try. You might not understand it at first but you'll understand it later. If you haven't seen Under One Person, you can also take a look. Daqianlu, I'll give it a try [top post]

"Master Tao, I have become it! I have achieved it! Master Tao, I have realized it! That's it! Three flowers gathered at the top! Nantianmen! Bai Yujing! I saw it all! I saw it! Hahaha! I am the real Taoist master!!! Ahahaha! In the future, you must remember... I am the most powerful venerable in the world!!! Bai Lingmiao... Did you see it?! Bai Lingmiao! I can marry you! Why didn't you speak...? What? You said I have already～…？？！！～！…？！？！？！！！！！！！！"

This book is quite good in terms of plot, and the characterization is also okay. There are also many humorous plots in this book, which is quite interesting to read. The only shortcoming is that the second creation is too much, and many things are not consistent with the original work. For example, the book says that Shuangquan Hands are a combination of Minghun Technique and Ruyi Jin. When did Ruyi Jin, passed down from the Lu family's ancestors, become related to Shuangquan Hands? And how come Zhao Fangxu always talks to Xu San, one is the person in charge of North China and the other is the director of the headquarters, making it seem like they are in the same place. If the author knew more about the original work and adjusted some settings more reasonably, it would be perfect.

I heard from other bloggers that no one can create a strange fairy. Even if it can be created, it will be written by a mentally disturbed person [laughing evilly] Hey, let me see what's going on [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss]

Although it was pretty good, I didn't see much of the plot, and I had no idea what the main character's purpose was.

It's okay, but it looks a little uncomfortable? Looking at the protagonist, I always have the feeling of being a castle in the air without roots. How should I put it, not at ease, and I don't know where the strange feeling comes from. There are also a lot of pitfalls, Lu Liang, Qu Tong, Zhang Lingyu, the two factions of the company, and the Jiashen Rebellion that runs throughout... Em I hope the author can fill it in in the end, and I also hope that Baby Chu Lan and the protagonist can have an ending without regrets.

It feels pretty good. I don't think there's really any need to worry too much about settings. For me, as long as I can't understand it except for the name, I'll accept it. As long as it can be explained, it's fine. Anyway, it's pretty cool as a cool article. Read it with me, happy ending, bad ending, bad ending

There is no such thing as sitting and forgetting here, Huo Wang here has many trusted people, the boss of Hongzhong... Ah, Huo Wang is not being fooled here. I just want to ask, when will Huo Wang be given a suitable weapon, such as a spinal sword or a copper coin sword? [Laughing]

Don't say it, don't say it. If you don't compare it with the original work, it is very well written. As for the comments, it is originally fan fiction. It's the same as what I wrote, so what else is there to read, right? Come on, author, don't stop updating. Hahaha, here I come, Xia He [laughing][laughing][laughing]

It's so beautiful [smile][smile][smile][smile][smile] Come in and show me!