Dao Sect, Battle of the Gods!

So far, it's quite good, but I'm afraid that the author may go astray as he writes it. There is an emotional scene, which is acceptable, but it can't be developed into an emotional drama and forget the original intention. The scene at the beach made me cry. The scene with a group of monks was also pretty good. Come on, author! Everyone can come and take a look,

Good looking with storyline

I read ten chapters in one go. It was very well written and I couldn't read it enough. I gave it a five-star rating.

It's okay, the storyline is in order.

The narrative is clear and not confusing. It's good.