[Ancient times + martial arts + secret realm creation + slow pace + after 15 chapters, the protagonist will only be the background panel + there will be some extraordinary elements]
Li Yue, a clerk, plunged into a feudal dynasty similar to ancient China and obtained a golden book and jade book, which could turn fiction into reality.
In this world, the best masters can only move ten feet vertically, and there are even extraterrestrial demons looking at them.
Li Yue disturbed the world with a volume of books.
Many martial arts masters fight to the death for a magical skill.
Such a large martial arts community plots against each other just for a secret realm.
In this chaos, Li Yue quietly promoted the evolution of martial arts.
Five hundred years later, when the demons from outside the territory came to the world, they saw flying swords and innumerable powers in the sky and the earth.
The human race has achieved supernatural powers, and insects and snakes have turned into real dragons, taking away the life of the world.
With low martial arts, he has become extraordinary.
Reader comments
The protagonist has a good temper. The first time he was assassinated by others and let one person go, but the second time happened.
Your classmates are helping others to kill you, and you are helping others, which is grand. Chapter 12 Let another group go. As long as you say spare your life, you will really let it go [laughing]
It looks good, but some areas are not handled well enough.
1. The golden book can be exchanged for various items, cultivation levels, etc. Similar to the system. After all, it is a cheat.
2. After killing the cavalry, the protagonist should leave, instead of waiting for the top masters to come. The plot can develop into killing the cavalry, the protagonist leaves, and then the news spreads to all the forces, knowing that there is still a way up, and the people of those forces are frantically looking for the protagonist. Finally, they are arranged to find the protagonist, and start a fight with a bunch of top masters, crushing style, to let them know how strong the realm above is, and then ask for advice. After thinking for a while, the protagonist decides to speak out. In this way, it not only gains favors but also achieves the goal, but the plot development is The protagonist is waiting for them, and they ask you to prove your strength, which feels almost boring.
3. In the arrangement of the secret realm, didn't Wang Chu get the skill and leave a younger sister there? You can arrange a sub-line, pretending to be a remnant old man (without a body), come to his sister, and then chat, and then gradually get in touch with him and give him something. For example, Wang Chu said that he left a lot of dried meat for his sister, so you, the old man, can you tell me if you can share it with me. After eating, you said that it was almost meaningless. I also analyzed the food for you (spiritual beast meat) and said that I have been alone in this secret realm for hundreds of years or 1 to 2 thousand years. Don't write too far away, especially if it is ten thousand years. It shows that the character is awesome, but it looks a bit embarrassing. Then someone enters and finds it interesting, and a group of people enter the secret realm. They can arrange levels and give rewards for clearing them. They must die! There are risks with gains, and then the group of people who made it to the end came to the old man. When Wang Chu saw his sister, the plot could start again. Didn't some people in that group want to break through? You happen to have a few spiritual energy training rooms, enough for a few people to break through, and then the remaining young talents cannot enter because the spiritual energy is huge and their bodies can't bear it, but they can absorb and practice nearby. You can let them stay for ten or eight days as a reward. Then those people break through and have a competition. The first and second place will be rewarded. It must not be that all the top masters and other people in the world can come to your place. There must be some eliminations, so as to increase the distance. One of the top masters has made a breakthrough, while the other has not had a chance. There are also some young talents who have had a chance. This way, they can spread the word even more widely.
Give it 5 stars and hope the author can keep writing.
Can there be more updates? Also, the protagonist said it was Yixiantian. Why shouldn't those people who are still active in the county go directly to Yixiantian?
It's pretty good looking, with a few minor flaws, but it doesn't matter.
After reading Chapter 6, all I can say is, come on, author, I'm leaving first.
Do you want to be a patriarchal one-month fire demon?
Pretty good, pretty good, pretty good.
Not bad, you can take a look
Okay, for now
Very good come on come on come on! ! ! ! ! !
The secret realm of Kirin Cave is launched
Five-star praise and support
Super super super pretty
Let the protagonist appear more often
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
Not bad, come on, author
It was good at first, but when it was cut off, it went directly to the second secret realm. What the hell, so fast?
Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on
The subject view is pretty good.
I listened to nine chapters, it sounds good and looks good. Come on, author, I'm leaving now. Goodbye.
Very good author, please come on [love][love][love][love][love][like]
The protagonist has a good temper. The first time he was assassinated by others and let one person go, but the second time happened. Your classmates are helping others to kill you, and you are helping others, which is grand. Chapter 12 Let another group go. As long as you say spare your life, you will really let it go [laughing]
It looks good, but some areas are not handled well enough. 1. The golden book can be exchanged for various items, cultivation levels, etc. Similar to the system. After all, it is a cheat. 2. After killing the cavalry, the protagonist should leave, instead of waiting for the top masters to come. The plot can develop into killing the cavalry, the protagonist leaves, and then the news spreads to all the forces, knowing that there is still a way up, and the people of those forces are frantically looking for the protagonist. Finally, they are arranged to find the protagonist, and start a fight with a bunch of top masters, crushing style, to let them know how strong the realm above is, and then ask for advice. After thinking for a while, the protagonist decides to speak out. In this way, it not only gains favors but also achieves the goal, but the plot development is The protagonist is waiting for them, and they ask you to prove your strength, which feels almost boring. 3. In the arrangement of the secret realm, didn't Wang Chu get the skill and leave a younger sister there? You can arrange a sub-line, pretending to be a remnant old man (without a body), come to his sister, and then chat, and then gradually get in touch with him and give him something. For example, Wang Chu said that he left a lot of dried meat for his sister, so you, the old man, can you tell me if you can share it with me. After eating, you said that it was almost meaningless. I also analyzed the food for you (spiritual beast meat) and said that I have been alone in this secret realm for hundreds of years or 1 to 2 thousand years. Don't write too far away, especially if it is ten thousand years. It shows that the character is awesome, but it looks a bit embarrassing. Then someone enters and finds it interesting, and a group of people enter the secret realm. They can arrange levels and give rewards for clearing them. They must die! There are risks with gains, and then the group of people who made it to the end came to the old man. When Wang Chu saw his sister, the plot could start again. Didn't some people in that group want to break through? You happen to have a few spiritual energy training rooms, enough for a few people to break through, and then the remaining young talents cannot enter because the spiritual energy is huge and their bodies can't bear it, but they can absorb and practice nearby. You can let them stay for ten or eight days as a reward. Then those people break through and have a competition. The first and second place will be rewarded. It must not be that all the top masters and other people in the world can come to your place. There must be some eliminations, so as to increase the distance. One of the top masters has made a breakthrough, while the other has not had a chance. There are also some young talents who have had a chance. This way, they can spread the word even more widely. Give it 5 stars and hope the author can keep writing.
Can there be more updates? Also, the protagonist said it was Yixiantian. Why shouldn't those people who are still active in the county go directly to Yixiantian?
It's pretty good looking, with a few minor flaws, but it doesn't matter.
After reading Chapter 6, all I can say is, come on, author, I'm leaving first.
Do you want to be a patriarchal one-month fire demon?
Pretty good, pretty good, pretty good.
Not bad, you can take a look
Okay, for now
Very good come on come on come on! ! ! ! ! !
The secret realm of Kirin Cave is launched
Five-star praise and support
Super super super pretty
Let the protagonist appear more often
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
Not bad, come on, author It was good at first, but when it was cut off, it went directly to the second secret realm. What the hell, so fast?
Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on
The subject view is pretty good.
I listened to nine chapters, it sounds good and looks good. Come on, author, I'm leaving now. Goodbye.
Very good author, please come on [love][love][love][love][love][like]