The Sword’s Fallen Love

I saw Luo Ningshuang dead here. I hope the author will read my comments. I think there are many readers who have similar views to me. My simplest evaluation is that the writing is good and the plot is good, but it has too many connotations. Nowadays, when reading novels in the fast era, all you read is a single thought. In this kind of plot with the tone of a harem novel, there are so many separations of life and death. I can only say that it is too focused on one thing and not the other. If there is no heroine and only one heroine, life and death must be the norm, which adds to the atmosphere and background. It is really difficult for me to accept the plot of a dead heroine in the harem. I have always agreed not to be ambiguous if you don't accept it. I can be patient and continue watching when Xiao Qing dies. I really don't know what kind of mentality to continue to support after Luo Ningshuang dies, because I feel uncomfortable watching it. I came to Tomato to relax, not to be tortured. When I saw the poisonous article, I just cursed it and left. But when I saw you, I really felt uncomfortable, which completely ran counter to my original intention of reading the article that was refreshing. Good writing is the author's unparalleled advantage on this platform, and it is better than most harem pleasure articles with the same theme. But what do readers who don't want to read this theme on Tomato really want? Is it a romantic tragedy? Is it true that the heart will never be separated in this life? No, what you see is a happy family reaching the top of the world. It doesn't matter if you are depressed in the end of the world, you will be tortured and happy, and there will always be a day of recovery; but what if the loved one dies? Will there be any reunion arrangements? Can you read an article that I, as a reader, can read? I hope the author can give an explanation or an opinion. This is related to whether I have the motivation to continue supporting it.

The beginning is a bit messy, and the worldview is not completely outlined, giving people a sense of abruptness. However, after reading a few more chapters, you can understand the hardships and crisis-ridden world the protagonist is in. The world view is grand, with multiple races coexisting, and the Cthulhu style is currently less reflected. The plot is very smooth, not sloppy, and the setting is fresh and refined. It is not a traditional fairy tale setting. All the characters in the book have online IQs. In the early stage, the protagonist often escapes from death. There are no plots such as randomly recruiting girls or minotaurs. It is basically non-toxic. The main plot should be regarded as a salvation flow. Currently, three girls have been recruited (all of whom have long love lines). I personally estimate that there will be 5-6 people in the harem in the end. The pursuit of the husband in the crematorium has not started yet. The strength of the male and female protagonists is only mid-range in the entire world, and there will be no equal promotion. PS: Hurry up and let Senior Sister Mu resolve the misunderstanding with the protagonist [Punch]

Come, the author, read with me, I solemnly swear ✊: Starting from today, I will never update. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, being tempered into steel, and worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly swear: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! It is recommended that the author read it aloud [please update]

The emotional descriptions of the characters are delicate. I don't know why the rating is so low. I feel that it is underestimated. After reading it, I also read the author's previous book, which was also very good. Love the harem recommendation. I hope the author will continue to stick to his writing style.

Every word in the book is full of profound meaning, which makes people intoxicated. It's good to watch, but I feel that the plot is a bit cliche. I hope it won't involve the real wife falling in love and killing each other (even though the label says "Chasing Husband Crematorium [Face Covering]"). Another thing is that many women in the male protagonist have said things about the starry sky and other worlds without any doubts or expressions, but it's not a big problem. @ Sir Pei, come on

Please, is there any similar book, this kind of fairy tale fantasy, the main character is miserable and a bit desolate and broken, I want the kind of knife with long flowing water and no sound, the deliberate knife looks really meaningless, I don't want such a thing as memory exposure, please [cry][cry][cry] ["Xue Ying, come with me..."] [The silence of the beautiful woman behind him was like the sword edge of his beloved Taoist monk piercing his chest. [He took a deep breath and said slowly: "So... Do you also want to leave me?"]

The author's emotional drama is quite good, but he hopes to add more descriptions of the Shura field, especially the three masters and disciples of the Sword Sect, and then the male protagonist will come up with another sentence [sneaky laugh] Dog head saves life [sneaky laugh]

Personally, I think it is very interesting and interesting, and the story is excellent. Yun Yi goes from peak to trough, and then from trough to peak. The beginning of the story is unique and unique, with a novel angle. It also digs a hole. Unlike the earth, the world in the book has no stars at night. I am looking forward to how the author fills the hole. Now I have a question, how can I see the road when there are no stars at night? Is there a moon? I didn't read the description of the environment carefully.

It's quite good. It's an older novel. The plot, characters, and development are all similar to the immortal novels from ten years ago. Overall, it's quite enjoyable. I highly recommend it.

Old book readers, I'm here to support you, this plot is really good, it has the flavor of an evil god [laughing][laughing][laughing] Damn it, please give me more [Working on it] [Working on it] [Working on it] [Working on it] [Working on it] [Working on it]