Sword Love*

I saw Luo Ningshuang dead here. I hope the author will read my comments. I think there are many readers who have similar views to me. My simplest evaluation is that the writing is good and the plot is good, but it has too many connotations. Nowadays, when reading novels in the fast era, all you read is a single thought. In this kind of plot with the tone of a harem novel, there are so many separations of life and death. I can only say that it is too focused on one thing and not the other. If there is no heroine and only one heroine, life and death must be the norm, which adds to the atmosphere and background. It is really difficult for me to accept the plot of a dead heroine in the harem. I have always agreed not to be ambiguous if you don't accept it. I can be patient and continue watching when Xiao Qing dies. I really don't know what kind of mentality to continue to support after Luo Ningshuang dies, because I feel uncomfortable watching it. I came to Tomato to relax, not to be tortured. When I saw the poisonous article, I just cursed it and left. But when I saw you, I really felt uncomfortable, which completely ran counter to my original intention of reading the article that was refreshing. Good writing is the author's unparalleled advantage on this platform, and it is better than most harem pleasure articles with the same theme. But what do readers who don't want to read this theme on Tomato really want? Is it a romantic tragedy? Is it true that the heart will never be separated in this life? No, what you see is a happy family reaching the top of the world. It doesn't matter if you are depressed in the end of the world, you will be tortured and happy, and there will always be a day of recovery; but what if the loved one dies? Will there be any reunion arrangements? Can you read an article that I, as a reader, can read? I hope the author can give an explanation or an opinion. This is related to whether I have the motivation to continue supporting it.

The beginning is a bit messy, and the worldview is not completely outlined, giving people a sense of abruptness. However, after reading a few more chapters, you can understand the hardships and crisis-ridden world the protagonist is in. The world view is grand, with multiple races coexisting, and the Cthulhu style is currently less reflected. The plot is very smooth, not sloppy, and the setting is fresh and refined. It is not a traditional fairy tale setting. All the characters in the book have online IQs. In the early stage, the protagonist often escapes from death. There are no plots such as randomly recruiting girls or minotaurs. It is basically non-toxic. The main plot should be regarded as a salvation flow. Currently, three girls have been recruited (all of whom have long love lines). I personally estimate that there will be 5-6 people in the harem in the end. The pursuit of the husband in the crematorium has not started yet. The strength of the male and female protagonists is only mid-range in the entire world, and there will be no equal promotion. PS: Hurry up and let Senior Sister Mu resolve the misunderstanding with the protagonist [Punch]

Come, the author, read with me, I solemnly swear ✊: Starting from today, I will never update. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, being tempered into steel, and worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly swear: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! It is recommended that the author read it aloud [please update]

The emotional descriptions of the characters are delicate. I don't know why the rating is so low. I feel that it is underestimated. After reading it, I also read the author's previous book, which was also very good. Love the harem recommendation. I hope the author will continue to stick to his writing style.

Every word in the book is full of profound meaning, which makes people intoxicated. It's good to watch, but I feel that the plot is a bit cliche. I hope it won't involve the real wife falling in love and killing each other (even though the label says "Chasing Husband Crematorium [Face Covering]"). Another thing is that many women in the male protagonist have said things about the starry sky and other worlds without any doubts or expressions, but it's not a big problem. @ Sir Pei, come on

Please, is there any similar book, this kind of fairy tale fantasy, the main character is miserable and a bit desolate and broken, I want the kind of knife with long flowing water and no sound, the deliberate knife looks really meaningless, I don't want such a thing as memory exposure, please [cry][cry][cry] ["Xue Ying, come with me..."] [The silence of the beautiful woman behind him was like the sword edge of his beloved Taoist monk piercing his chest. [He took a deep breath and said slowly: "So... Do you also want to leave me?"]

The author's emotional drama is quite good, but he hopes to add more descriptions of the Shura field, especially the three masters and disciples of the Sword Sect, and then the male protagonist will come up with another sentence [sneaky laugh] Dog head saves life [sneaky laugh]

It's quite good. It's an older novel. The plot, characters, and development are all similar to the immortal novels from ten years ago. Overall, it's quite enjoyable. I highly recommend it.

Personally, I think it is very interesting and interesting, and the story is excellent. Yun Yi goes from peak to trough, and then from trough to peak. The beginning of the story is unique and unique, with a novel angle. It also digs a hole. Unlike the earth, the world in the book has no stars at night. I am looking forward to how the author fills the hole. Now I have a question, how can I see the road when there are no stars at night? Is there a moon? I didn't read the description of the environment carefully.

Old book readers, I'm here to support you, this plot is really good, it has the flavor of an evil god [laughing][laughing][laughing] Damn it, please give me more [Working on it] [Working on it] [Working on it] [Working on it] [Working on it] [Working on it]

The writing is very good and the plot is fascinating. I will definitely continue to follow it, but I am curious whether the master is sure to accept it [what]. The main reason is that the character of the master is a bit weird. Unless it is foreshadowing, then just pretend that I didn't say it [face covering] If not, I personally think there is no need to accept it. Finally, I hope that the author will update ten times a day [sending heartfelt wishes] and update quickly. Don't be a eunuch. I haven't seen such good writing in a long time.

To be honest, the author's writing is very good, but it may be a bit short now and not many people will read it. The rating will definitely go up later. There is one more sentence, the author should write it quickly!

Tomato is a very good book, both in terms of plot and writing style. As for the low-scoring comments in the comment section, I don't think there are any interesting points in the plot. I think the protagonist is still aggrieved. There must be ups and downs in the novel. I think it's normal.

A very good book, a traditional harem fantasy, unsystematic, semi-time-travel (the protagonist is not sure if he is the reincarnation of a former boss), the protagonist is considered a gentleman, and he has reasons for accepting girls, and none of them take the initiative, except for the heroine. The plot that resonates with me the most right now is when the female protagonist stabs the male protagonist in the back under the control of her master. I can feel the male protagonist's heartache when watching this scene.

It looks like it's the latest. It's okay [eating melon]. I hope you don't miss out on girls and give them away.

I wrote it by myself, so it's not too much to give five stars. [Learned] [Learned] [Learned] [Learned] [Learned] Hehehe

Sure enough, I still like this kind of traditional fantasy harem. The beginning is quite amazing. It involves such a big conspiracy right away. Come on.

It has to be good. Brothers who haven't read it must read more and read it with patience. Don't be impatient like me. This book has a good plot and a wonderful plot. It is truly a rare book [Like]

The writing is very good and very novel. The most important emotional scenes are very well written and very delicate. Like this kind of harem novel, the emotions and plot lines are very important.

I don't know how the protagonist wins at the moment, but the writing is very satisfying to me, and the author really worked hard to perfect the plot. This one star is because the protagonist's treatment of relationships is a bit... Well, I don't know how to describe it, but there should be a story about Palace Master Luo chasing her husband, right? There is also the ex-girlfriend. I feel that the character structure is quite good, but the misunderstanding between her and the protagonist is too big [crying] I like the ex-girlfriend more than Luo (maybe because Luo is too young mentally). In short, author, you must keep writing! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

A good book, with delicate emotions and a complete worldview, but it is quite depressing at the moment.

First of all, the book is very beautiful. But when I first read the first few chapters, I couldn't stand it. I felt that there was no support in the first few chapters, it was too confusing, and there were too many things. I started reading it directly from Chapter 6 [laughing and crying]. The book is very interesting.

It's beautiful. It's hard to find this kind of fantasy writing in Tomato.

It looks good, the author's writing style is okay, and the plot is passable, which meets the basic points of a refreshing novel. However, overall it lacks the ability to attract readers to read again and again. It is not a bad read for leisure and boredom. Just watch it slowly and look forward to the follow-up plot

The writing is very good, but can I write 1,000 chapters a day [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

Da Lang Tao Sha is like finding a treasure. Except that the first chapters are a little more laid out, I really like the plot and character creation in the following chapters.

So far, it looks very good. Why is no one watching it?

The author will update soon, I want to see the return of the protagonist, the Dragon King [laughs]

It seems to my liking, I like this style of novels Can the author update it quickly? It's so beautiful, why is it so slow?

I think the author is very thoughtful, but it feels a bit rushed. I believe the author can write it better later.